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A long time ago... - 11/1/2005 8:02:25 AM   
edana


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ok, so not *that* long ago... *smiles*

I wanted to share a thing that i wrote when i was first under the "consideration" of a man. We were only speaking on line at this time. But i had come to an understanding of what for Him i was...

*blushes and shares...*

Darkness and Innocence
For my “Sir”
By: j

A body, so close, so invitingly warm,
A voice so magnetic so vibrant so torn.
One hand in her hair, twisting with pain,
Its twin buried deep with little delay.
A pained, haunted look, of blackness so hard,
Meets glimmering white of Innocence guard
Eyes wide with wonder, at the essence she holds,
He, with his demon, so blatant so bold
Gazing at her with fiery orbs,
He pauses a moment to ponder two stars.
Delicate lights, winking in pain,
Beginning to fall, slowly in vain.
From deep languid pools, perfectly pair,
Effervescence beguiling in radiant fair.
Transfixed there in time, his heart comes to be,
Bringing the demon tween those two seas.
Growling his need, his pleasure, so raw,
He takes her soft flesh into his jaw.
Lowering himself on top of his prey,
Darkness is fed each teardrop the way.
Innocence lay neath Him pliant and sore.
Whimpers her acceptance of Darkness her lord.
Driving his hand, into her all,
He feels himself shudder, with every withdrawal.
As suffering mounts inside of her core,
The edge is nearing, she is close to the shore.
Her eyes open wide, seeking his face,
“Sir” she whimpers, “Sir, I fear I will break”
In an instant she felt, the change in his pace,
The hard cold clamps, became a soft sweet embrace.
Darkness was lifted, off of himself,
Replaced by an echo of Innocence cry for help.
Breathless and weary yet seeking her Sir,
Innocence gazes up, approval need heard.
But what she does see when finding his face,
Are identical pools of liquid release.
In an instant she knows the reason for this,
Anger, frustration, she turns to Bliss.
Such a powerful tool in the right hands is she,
When obeying a master of true Dominancy.


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RE: A long time ago... - 11/1/2005 8:27:52 AM   
starshineowned


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Greetings..~smiles~

Very nice edana..thankyou for sharing a part of you with us.

It is funny sometimes because Master always says: what is it with you slaves? Your always the most poetry writing creatures around..lol


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RE: A long time ago... - 11/1/2005 10:09:08 AM   
KatyLied


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quote:

“Sir” she whimpers, “Sir, I fear I will break”


Nicely done.

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RE: A long time ago... - 11/1/2005 10:14:18 AM   
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Enjoyable and well put. Thankyou.

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RE: A long time ago... - 11/1/2005 11:44:54 AM   
greenie


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How i wish that i had that creativeness in me! There have been so many times in my life that i feel that i am overwhelmed with feeling, so much so that i fell i will explode if i don't somehow express it and get it out. i'm terrible with words! i have sat down numerous times with pen and paper but the words just aren't there. Consider yourself very lucky that you have that gift!

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RE: A long time ago... - 11/1/2005 1:13:21 PM   
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lovely sentiments edana

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