Camerius
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I want a lot of things too in life, I really, really really really do. Sadly, I'm not getting them. Why? Because I'm not entitled to them by having earned them through personal effort and skill. Also, I don't have any problems with the occupants of your world, maybe because I haven't met any from there until now with you being the first or if I had, I got a taste of the MiB beam so I wouldn't remember it later. One thing I do however miss in your OP is the classic line from the representatives of an alien heritage meeting for the first time. Just take the awesome "Take me to your leader" has such a nice ring as well as having a really cool 50's B-movie reference to it. Even a line going along the "One small step for aliens, one giant leap for world conquest and domination" would maybe strengthen your position. Or maybe not. Some grand entrances shouldn't be tampered with even in the face of comedy and at the value of a laugh. Anyway, Na-Nu Na-Nu Camerius
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"To Gorean morality many Earth moralities might ask, "Why so hard?" To these Earth moralities, the Gorean ethos might ask, "Why so soft?" Marauders of Gor, pg.8
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