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theshytype -> RE: Newbie here (8/9/2013 10:59:45 AM)
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First off, welcome to the forums.
Secondly, there's not much to critique since there's not much to your profile. If you include more details about yourself, including what you're looking for in a partner, others will have some substance to go on.
If and when you do complete it, I'd personally pay special attention to grammar and punctuation.
Unless that's all your looking for, I wouldn't concentrate too much on kink.
It does not, by any means, have to be lengthy. After all, you don't want to lose the reader's interest. A couple of paragraphs is usually just fine.
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