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bneathyou -> The Goddess of my dreams (3/2/2005 5:41:09 AM)

i am and will always be in Your shadow. You are beauty and grace and i am awkward and unsure. You are strong and superior, and i am merely a moth drawn to Your flame. You are to be worshipped, and i am Your worshipper. You are the Goddess casting Her shadow upon those beneath Her, and i must kneel before You, in my devotion to You. How could i hope to be worthy enough to be favored by Your presence? i can only beg humbly and modestly that all i could ever want would be found in a brief moment with You.

You are an oak tree and i am but a leaf clinging to Your limb for strength and support. You are the keymistress, possessing the knowledge to unlock my innermost desires and needs. You are the Owner and i am the pet, leashed and collared to obey Your commands, to show You love and devotion. i ask for nothing for myself, seeking only to please You in whatever way You choose. i know You will protect me for i am in Your care and keeping. To bring You joy and satisfaction is all that is necessary. Your image can only hint at the perfection You truly are, and without a doubt, i would not even be able to stand before You without trembling and falling to my knees in awe. To gaze at Your incredible beauty would surely leave me breathless and speechless.

You are the Goddess and i am Your puppet. You know who i am and what is required of me.. You are the teacher and i am Your willing student, learning about Your pleasures, wants and desires, likes and dislikes, so that i may be a better servant. You lead me in the direction of Your desires, and i willingly follow behind You. You command and i obey. You keep me safe from harm and i adore You. A single gaze, a knowing nod, a glance, a gesture, a graceful motion of Your hand, and i am aware of what must be done to satisfy You. to bring You pleasure. It is what i do and who i am, in supplication before the most beautiful and perfect of Gods creations...a walking miracle....a woman and the Goddess of my dreams




theroebabe -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (3/2/2005 6:25:00 PM)


So wonderfully said and so true!





Ambrosiahoney -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (4/8/2005 7:36:20 PM)

Oh I say with the warmth of my soul, he that can show his true self would be the one that I will control. No mercy given, because it will not be needed. Come to me if you still dream with your head down and on your knees. This is the Mistress that you so dream of in your wishper...come to me.. I am Ambrosiahoney.




bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (4/9/2005 3:20:52 AM)

thank You Goddess




bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (5/15/2005 4:09:00 PM)

thank you Goddess




sexysubbunny -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (5/15/2005 5:24:03 PM)

~ bneathyou,
this is sooooo very beautiful and perfectly spoken!
thanks for sharing this !

bunny




AAkasha -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (5/15/2005 7:09:29 PM)

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ORIGINAL: bneathyou

i am and will always be in Your shadow. You are beauty and grace and i am awkward and unsure. You are strong and superior, and i am merely a moth drawn to Your flame. You are to be worshipped, and i am Your worshipper. You are the Goddess casting Her shadow upon those beneath Her, and i must kneel before You, in my devotion to You. How could i hope to be worthy enough to be favored by Your presence? i can only beg humbly and modestly that all i could ever want would be found in a brief moment with You.

You are an oak tree and i am but a leaf clinging to Your limb for strength and support. You are the keymistress, possessing the knowledge to unlock my innermost desires and needs. You are the Owner and i am the pet, leashed and collared to obey Your commands, to show You love and devotion. i ask for nothing for myself, seeking only to please You in whatever way You choose. i know You will protect me for i am in Your care and keeping. To bring You joy and satisfaction is all that is necessary. Your image can only hint at the perfection You truly are, and without a doubt, i would not even be able to stand before You without trembling and falling to my knees in awe. To gaze at Your incredible beauty would surely leave me breathless and speechless.

You are the Goddess and i am Your puppet. You know who i am and what is required of me.. You are the teacher and i am Your willing student, learning about Your pleasures, wants and desires, likes and dislikes, so that i may be a better servant. You lead me in the direction of Your desires, and i willingly follow behind You. You command and i obey. You keep me safe from harm and i adore You. A single gaze, a knowing nod, a glance, a gesture, a graceful motion of Your hand, and i am aware of what must be done to satisfy You. to bring You pleasure. It is what i do and who i am, in supplication before the most beautiful and perfect of Gods creations...a walking miracle....a woman and the Goddess of my dreams


Wonderfully put, but where is the stanza about not telling your wife? From reading you profile it appears you are looking for someone outside your marriage to play with. Is your wife aware of this and has given consent?

The only reason I bring this up is because the approach you are using is one of devotion, loyalty, and undivided affection -- these are not things you can give if you are in a relationship already and must keep it secret. One of the best ways to attract a partner is to be realistic and honest about what you seek.

Be careful with words like "devotion" if you are not devoted to the one you married. If you are in an open relationship I apologize, and I think you'll do well in your search.

Akasha




SirSTRYKER -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (5/16/2005 9:05:59 AM)

very nicely written. forget the naysayers and to thine own self be true.




bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (5/27/2005 3:45:51 AM)

thank you so much for your kind words...we are who we are after all




bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (6/15/2005 2:59:36 AM)

i do appreciate Your taking the time to critique my devotional short story. i must say that Taylor, in Your latest effort was one very very lucky boy. as for me...their are explanations...there are always explanations...




bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (6/21/2005 1:11:49 PM)

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bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (6/28/2005 2:30:46 AM)

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bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (7/5/2005 7:24:25 AM)

on angels wings
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ORIGINAL: Ambrosiahoney

Oh I say with the warmth of my soul, he that can show his true self would be the one that I will control. No mercy given, because it will not be needed. Come to me if you still dream with your head down and on your knees. This is the Mistress that you so dream of in your wishper...come to me.. I am Ambrosiahoney.





bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (7/13/2005 2:49:10 AM)

and yet, although summoned, i have been abandoned




bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (7/18/2005 3:07:58 AM)


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ORIGINAL: bneathyou

and yet, although summoned, i have been abandoned





bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (7/22/2005 3:33:22 AM)


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ORIGINAL: bneathyou


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and yet, although summoned, i have been abandoned







bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (7/28/2005 6:46:27 AM)


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ORIGINAL: Ambrosiahoney

Oh I say with the warmth of my soul, he that can show his true self would be the one that I will control. No mercy given, because it will not be needed. Come to me if you still dream with your head down and on your knees. This is the Mistress that you so dream of in your wishper...come to me.. I am Ambrosiahoney.





bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (7/31/2005 3:45:00 AM)


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ORIGINAL: bneathyou


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ORIGINAL: Ambrosiahoney

Oh I say with the warmth of my soul, he that can show his true self would be the one that I will control. No mercy given, because it will not be needed. Come to me if you still dream with your head down and on your knees. This is the Mistress that you so dream of in your wishper...come to me.. I am Ambrosiahoney.







bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (8/8/2005 3:42:07 PM)


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ORIGINAL: bneathyou


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ORIGINAL: Ambrosiahoney

Oh I say with the warmth of my soul, he that can show his true self would be the one that I will control. No mercy given, because it will not be needed. Come to me if you still dream with your head down and on your knees. This is the Mistress that you so dream of in your wishper...come to me.. I am Ambrosiahoney.









bneathyou -> RE: The Goddess of my dreams (8/16/2005 4:01:53 AM)


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ORIGINAL: bneathyou


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ORIGINAL: bneathyou


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ORIGINAL: Ambrosiahoney

Oh I say with the warmth of my soul, he that can show his true self would be the one that I will control. No mercy given, because it will not be needed. Come to me if you still dream with your head down and on your knees. This is the Mistress that you so dream of in your wishper...come to me.. I am Ambrosiahoney.









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