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Highly Rated BDSM Novel available in Paperback - 7/9/2006 10:11:01 AM   
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Announcing the E-Book Release as of May 8th 2006 and
Paperback Release as of June 28th 2006


Toy’s Story
Acquisition of a Sex Toy

Even over the internet passions can ignite but when Doreen finds the fires within her burning she also finds that fear of the consequences of those fires terrifies hers so she tries to flee from them. However there are some things you can not run from and a fantasy that is part of your very soul is one of them. Soon she finds it impossible to keep from contacting the man that she had fled.
    David thinks she was playing him for a fool, yet when the new emails begin he finds he is transfixed by her every word. Slowly the emails convince him that she is sincere and that what she truly wants is a life that most people only find in their deepest and darkest fantasies.  
    Then the email comes that forces his decision. He decides to fulfill her dreams completely, and to do so even beyond her wildest expectations. But when fantasy and reality collide both get lost in a tangled web.


“Robert Cloud is a true wordsmith” from a professor of his at AI University

“This is the Romantic Novel that Romance Novelist wish they had the guts to write”
By Laurie Sanders, Publisher of BVS

"Compelling and emotional, Robert Cloud has written a story that will dig into the depths of the emotions and settle deep into the heart. No punches are pulled in this gritty, tough story and the characters are bared on each and every level of existence." Valerie, reviewer at www.loveromances.com

“And oooooooooooo.......I've GOT to tell you!!! When Cloud's book is out?? WOW...grinning like the proverbial Cheshire cat here. I've had the opportunity to read some of it and ohhhh yeah...glad the a/c has been running. Cloud is a terrific writer and I know you will enjoy Toy's story when it hits the net...and the stands.” By Lee Rush, author of “Bound by Fate”

Read an excerpt at www.blackvelvetseductions.com/Excerpt%20Toy's%20Story.html

Available in eBook at www.blackvelvetseductions.com and www.fictionwise.com
Available in paperback at the above locations and soon at www.amazon.com  and www.barnesandnoble.com
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RE: Highly Rated BDSM Novel available in Paperback - 7/9/2006 10:24:28 AM   
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 Wow Cloud, congrats on the publishing of your book, I want to be the first in line when it comes to my area. It definately is something I can curl up with and fantasize about. Much sucess to you

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An Excerpt from Toy's Story - 7/13/2006 12:41:54 AM   
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Shivering like a rabbit awaiting the wolf she heard him approaching. His massive footsteps resounded into the dark chamber where she was his prisoner. She was bound. Bands of steel that held her wrists together were fastened to something on the under side of the bed and she was stretched across it face down with her legs draped over one side. Her ankles felt the cold steel of more bindings that spread her legs painfully wide. He was coming to use her again as he had every hour since he had captured her from the woods. She had been foolish to go hiking alone in a wooded area she knew nothing about, but it had been a beautiful day, until the canvas bag had suddenly closed off the world. His steps were closer now, and she could feel her body responding. He was a brute, a massive man that fucked her like she had never been fucked and for the sheer animalistic need that burned in him.

The door swung open and she turned her eyes looking over her shoulder at the man, her Master, as he shed his clothes like a snake discards its skin. He stood behind her as naked as she was and she could feel her pussy begin to moisten with need for his cock. He made no gesture of tenderness, made no comment of warning and suddenly she felt his cock’s head at the opening to her channel, then she was impaled as he drove into her hard, with one thrust embedding himself in her moist cunt.


The seductive power of the images in her mind compelled Doreen’s fingers to begin to slide along her sternum to the undersides of her breasts. She dragged her nails along the soft mound to the rock hard nipples that were begging for attention. A moan began deep in her belly and coursed upward to rattle and shake her chest as she pinched and twisted both nipples at the same time. One of her hands continued to tease its hardened recipient as her other hand began to slide slowly along her belly inching closer to the flame that was burning between her thighs. Within her mind the images had a life of their own.


Pounding his shaft into her, he ground his hips against hers. She wanted to respond but was held by ropes that prevented her from moving at all. Except for her head, hands and feet she was completely immobilized, his to use as he wished and she wished he would use her more. This Master that had tamed the woman in her had also ignited the beast and she hungered for his seed to fill her womb. She ground and bucked her hips as well as she could, hoping to coax him into fucking her even harder and he hungrily obliged. Faster he pistoned into her. He was now a machine and she his receptacle. She was his captive but God she wanted him to take her even deeper into the realms he had begun to unleash within her. Her back arched and her hips ground against his thrust.


Doreen could no longer hold back, she plunged her fingers into her pussy and began matching the rhythm of her vision, the heel of her palm pressed hard against her clit as she began to buck to her fingers fucking her. Her body began to quiver and she ground her hips against her thumb and fingers, biting her lip as she screamed out, “Fuck me, Master Wolf, fuck your horny slut!”

The orgasm smacked into her body like an ocean wave engulfing her every nerve. Her nectar flowed freely coating her hand in the juices of her lust. Again she moaned a guttural sound that resembled a purr more than a moan.


He clenched his cock inside her and it expanded even further filling her like she had never been filled then it spasmed and she could feel the jet of warm liquor spray into her filling her womb with the wonder of his orgasm. He thrust into her again, and spasmed again and she clenched the walls of her pussy upon his cock, milking it of the last few drops.


Her eyes were glazed as she lay staring up at the ceiling. Her waist length black hair had wrapped about her like a veil that was torn in places to let parts of her peek through. A smile crossed her lips as she savored the wave subsiding within her. She could not understand the hold that Master Wolf had upon her. She loved the danger he represented as the unknown, yet she knew he was too gentle to be the Master of her fantasy. Still the orgasms that she had while fantasizing about him were far beyond any she had ever experienced. They would explode within her and take her to peaks of pleasure she had not known were possible and that was only while imagining he was taking her. The after throes of the orgasm still coursed through her as her body continued to quiver. Since meeting Master Wolf online each visualization involving Master Wolf forcing her to be his sex slave had become more intense. Now her orgasms were beyond anything she had ever dreamed possible.

This round of masturbation had begun when she had decided to reread the email she had sent to him the previous evening. As she remembered seeing him on cam jacking off, she started imagining he was jacking off to her email at the very moment she was reading it. The next thing she knew she was laying on her back, focusing on the images her email had provided as she saw Master Wolf fucking every orifice she had and taking them as his own.

It was not the fantasy of being a slave that held such great sway over her. She’d had the dream of that since she was a very young child. From as early as she could remember she had read stories of the Arabian Nights and envisioned she was a slave in the harem of some mighty sheik. She had been trained to be a belly dancer and was made to dance before and then serve a visiting Arabian Prince. At that age she was still too young to know all the intricacies of sex but she’d had enough imagination and had just begun to explore her body. Her first orgasm had come when she was only ten and it had been to the vision in her head of the Prince clapping his hands and sending everyone away but her. He had ordered her to strip her silks, and though her cheeks had gone crimson she had obeyed for she knew to disobey meant her life. That first wave of pleasure had come without her even imagining the Prince touching her. It had come simply from the obedience of disrobing in front of him.

Later she had read Madam Butterfly and The Diary of a Geisha and she began to picture herself in a house of geishas. Even though most geishas were never actively prostitutes many were the concubines or slaves of powerful warlords. The fact that she was Asian had made these fantasies even more alluring and real to her. It was then that she began to fantasize about being the sex toy to a Warlord who was both harsh and yet gentle.

The day she had stumbled upon the writers’ group had been a miracle, and when she had filled out the survey that Master Wolf had sent to her it had been with reluctance that she had even listed the fantasy of abduction and domination. She had been worried that the leader of the group would think she was too wild or perverted for their group. However his instructions in the biography request had been to list her deepest and darkest fantasy and this dream of hers definitely fit those standards. She had been thrilled when Master Wolf had informed her she was accepted, but nothing could possibly have prepared her for what Master Wolf had suggested to her. It was beyond anything she had dared to hope for. He offered her the chance to explore a fantasy that had engulfed her since childhood and she did not hesitate even a split second before replying happily.

They had woven much of their real personalities into the characters of their fantasy. She was an Asian waif, lost in the new world and he was a savage warrior of the American plains. The writing however had paled to the fantasies within her dreams. Her visions had shifted from Arabian princes and Asian warlords to this fierce warrior upon his mustang riding down upon her, sweeping her off the ground and throwing her across the back of his steed. The red skinned warrior with his long flowing black hair took her to his lodge and then forced her to serve him not only domestically by keeping his tent clean and learning how to fix the meals of his people, but also as his sexual release. She masturbated nightly to the scenes of his forcing her to her knees and raping her repeatedly, much like the email she had finally gotten the nerve to send to Master Wolf.

Amazed by how intense her climaxes had become she found she was giving into her fantasy even further every day. The thoughts of becoming Master Wolf’s real life slave had become so overpowering that she had forgotten that she had another life away from the computer and the fantasies that they were sharing until her real world came crashing down upon her. The night of the collaring was very vivid in her mind.


His surprise for her was better than anything she had imagined, and she was so happy to be wearing his collar finally. It had been a dream come true, to finally wear a collar as a slave. Even if it had only been in text, when Master Wolf had placed his collar upon her neck she had felt like she had finally become the complete woman she was.

His surprise made the night even more special, for it was her purpose to please him and every other time she had only heard his voice or seen his text but this time she got to see the truth in his arousal. Master Wolf’s cock was incredible; it was not massive, yet not small. He had said it was average size and actually apologized to her that it was not larger but she had thought it was perfect. She could already taste it in her mouth and knew it was just right to suckle him. It was not so large as to gag her, and she would be able to suck every delicious inch of him into her mouth.

She had slipped out of her robe and then sent him an invitation to view her cam as well. She was soon very intently watching him, wanting to see him cum while her own fingers were frantically massaging her clit and she could feel the wave beginning to rise in her belly when she was startled by the sound of Chris’s voice…

“What the fuck?!” Chris had said, and the look of disgust and anger on his face tore into her heart, it was almost as bad as the disgusted glare of her mother’s eyes when her mother had discovered the porn sites on her computer. Doreen had hit the button on her computer to shut it down before Master Wolf could see what was happening. She did not want to have him live this pain with her. Guilt flared like a nova within her and even before Chris had begun screaming at her she could feel the tears beginning to well up. The dam burst and they flooded down her cheeks.

She was torn between her two worlds, the love she felt for Master Wolf was every bit as real as the love she felt for Chris. Yet she knew that no one in her family would approve of her seeing a man that was nearly twice her age, that she had never met, and that was not Asian. She did not want to lose Master Wolf, but now she had been caught and she knew that she was going to have to make a choice very soon.

Chris had been her boyfriend since high school, and though they had never been intimate he had been patient and loving with her. Her tears had abruptly halted his onslaught and he had knelt before her trying to calm her down. He lifted her into his arms and carried her to the couch where he cradled her for a long time while she brought herself under control. Once the tears had ceased, Chris had looked deep into her eyes, then set her on the couch beside him. Kneeling again before her he held her hand and slipped a diamond onto her finger.

She felt the cold band of gold slide onto her finger and suddenly felt like she was trapped. She loved Chris, she loved David, and how could she make a choice between them? Yes her family would approve of Chris for all the reasons they would disapprove of David. Chris was only two years older than she was, she had known him for over ten years, they had been friends long before they dated, and he was Asian. He was also well on his way to becoming a successful lawyer, with the potential to become the youngest partner at his firm. Yet he was not what David was. He was not into the lifestyle that she wanted to be a part of. He did not want a slave he wanted a wife, and he would never bind her and force her to serve his pleasure in any way. He had not even tried to convince her to have anything more to do with sex with him than an occasional blow job. In many ways he was weak, and had none of the strength that attracted her so strongly toward David.

Doreen’s fingers had touched the ring on her hand and she had almost slid it off to give it back to Chris when the vision of her mother’s eyes loomed before her. That look of disgust and anger when she imagined trying to explain she wanted to be a slave and not a wife halted her. She clasped her hands together and began crying. Instead of removing the ring Doreen had found herself saying yes to Chris’ proposal.

Robert Cloud
Author of
Toy’s Story: Acquisition of a Sex Toy
Book One of the Master’s Circle
Available NOW in E-Book formats and Paperback at
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RE: An Excerpt from Toy's Story - 7/13/2006 10:57:53 PM   
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amazing alliteration, I give my stamp of approval!

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RE: An Excerpt from Toy's Story - 7/13/2006 11:02:40 PM   
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will be looking to buy this when it is available in actual book form.  And congratulations!!!

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New Review for Toy's Story - 8/16/2006 3:30:45 PM   
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I don't have any clues at this time as to who the author is as a person, or what he does, but I do know he is definitely a man of talent, imagination and invention. (He) has provided an intimate look into the world of BDSM that can enlighten some and frighten others. In the lives of those in the lifestyle, trust is the most important of the tenets, for without trust there is nothing. The roles David and Doreen play are as important to their trust issues as they are to the relationship as a whole, and they carefully cultivate and nurture their feelings. Only when pushed to the limit can each break free, and in that freedom realize the life they want can be reached. Will they go for the golden promises of love, devotion, and the protection of the Master/slave relationship, or will they toss it all aside for convention's sake?
Toy's Story: Acquisition of a Sex Toy ..., is a story of an internet relationship that went wrong, then right. What David and Doreen didn't realize is that dreams can come true, and fantasies can become real under the right circumstances. It is the typical case of be careful of what you wish for in truth. The filling of those wishes and dreams can hold the potential for a fulfillment beyond any imaginings. Toy's Story: ... has the ability enchant you, delight you, and make you squirm...  If you are in to the erotic genres, this is a good read, so settle back and enjoy Toy's Story: Acquisition of a Sex Toy by Robert Cloud. Reviewed by Rose. http://sensualreads.net/wp_sr_reviews/?m=200607  (you will need to scroll)


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RE: New Review for Toy's Story - 9/1/2006 10:20:24 PM   
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The following email came to me after the reader read the post from here and purchased the book.

Mr. Cloud,
I purchased your book today as an eBook through black velvet and it's a wonderful read. I'm on page 482 already. well I took many speed reading courses when I was in college for comprehension purposes, but now it's a godsend because I read a few books a week. I love the characters , their inner strength, faults, and beauty. truly you have captured the spirit of what the beginnings of relationship is like, not to mention the slight darker sides too. I loved how you show both characters points of views through different chapters and the whole rollercoaster abduction ride was definitely hot to read.

I hope you will continue your writing so I may purchase another after this one, which will be done inside another hour or two. I tend to read more darker stories in regards to BDSM, especially the s & m, and was happily surprised how much I am enjoying this read you written.
best regards,
Lara

This is from another BDSMer who has read the book... also a reader not a professional reviewer...
Robert,
I personally have read your book from front to cover ... TWICE .... As you were told by our publisher and as someone who does read quite a bit of BDSM writings. Most who read this type are looking for porn and not a true story. That is the BEAUTY of your book.... it has depth and builds on the relationship of David and Toy. It's not just about the sexual expeiences of the two. It's a fresh and welcome change for people like myself who like BDSM type romances/erotica, but are often looking for a much more meaty story. Which you gave.
Sarah

I have received some strong critical and abusive responses as well. Outright personal attacks from some in the BDSM community that are not used to reading a BDSM Erotic Romance.. They were looking more for the BDSM Porn, or Smut that many BDSM books are, (no I am not saying all, but many are two dimensional, you never get to know the characters, they are all dialogue, no description, and all sex from cover to cover, or all scening cover to cover, DO NOT BUY MY BOOK if that is what you are looking for).

This so called reviewer never bothered to even read a third of the book, she calls herself a Mistress on the BDSM review site but on her personal site she is a submissive. I do not mind switches, but be honest about it, and as a reviewer keep your personal life out of your professional life. She gave a critique not a review which no reviewer should ever do, especially when not completing the book, and then she insulted my intelligence saying the vocabulary of my book was a third grade level when she could not spell one sentence without at least one spelling error. Not only in her emails were there spelling errors but all over her two websites, where she could go back and correct them at any time. Yet she is not even capable of seeing that they are wrong.

Okay, my rant is done. I learned my lesson. Not all those who claim to be reviewers are real, just as not all those that claim to be in the lifestyle are real. There are fakes everywhere even in the professional world or literature. This woman has had three books published. I feel truly sorry for her editor for the spelling errors that that poor person had to weed through in reading her work would have made me ill. By the way, I did have a chance to read an excerpt from one of her so called novels, and I was right... SMUT!!!



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Another Excerpt from Toy's Story - X-Rated - 9/1/2006 10:27:33 PM   
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Slowly she melted to her knees and crawled to her master. Yes, her Master! The feeling in her heart was inexplicable. She felt alive, like she was finally where she had always belonged. She combed her fingers through her hair. A giggle came to her lips when she realized that this was a nervous habit of hers. From the time she was a little girl whenever she did something that she truly wanted to do that her mother would frown upon she would comb her fingers through her hair. Now she could rejoice in being able to be who she truly was. The cold metal of the cuff upon her ankle felt good as it reinforced in her heart that she was truly owned.

Dutifully she slid her hands up along the insides of his calves to his thighs. The angry red stripes on her ass reminded her that she had been displeasing, but now she was happy. Now there was a chance for her to make things right. Now she had the chance to be everything she could for him and to be the most pleasing girl he could imagine. Her hands trembled as she stroked the bulge within his jeans. Looking up at him, she saw the smile on his face. It was not a smile of greed or wanton lust, but a smile of love and maybe just a little bit of indulgence and she felt it penetrate into her heart. She reached to his belt and tugged at it.

It took her a moment to figure it out, for she had never undressed a man before. Chris had always had his pants off before she could even reach them and with no ceremony he would lay back and let her blow him. There had been no preparation; there was no look of love. It had been pure animal lust. Yet she had done it so that he would leave her alone about the more intimate things. Those same things that now she would give freely to her master.

She smiled as she realized this would be the first time she wanted to give a man fellatio and she intended to make it the best she had ever done. Only moments before her heart had been torn knowing that he was a hard man because of her and now that shell had been broken, she had not truly turned him into that cruel master. The gentle man that he was had won and now she could serve the man she had always loved with the devotion she felt growing deeper within her at every moment. This was for her master and she truly wanted to please him.

She tugged his pants and shorts off. His erect member stirred and pulsed in anticipation. She ran her hand softly over his heavy testicles, caressing them tenderly. She rose up and her fingers slid to the buttons of his shirt and began to unbutton it at the collar. She pushed it off his shoulders and then slid the shirt off of him and laid it with his jeans and underwear upon the bed beside him.

Toy smiled broadly. Her master was a large man. She had always dated men that were the Adonis body type but something about her master’s rounded belly and even the man boobs that he had were very arousing to her. This was the first time she had looked upon him in desire and she could feel the moisture growing between her thighs. Soon she would want to feel him inside her but for now she wanted to make love to him. She slid her fingers down his chest, letting them run through the hair in the triangle of his massive chest. Her thighs quivered as she began to tease his nipples with her fingers. She leaned up, kneeling between his spread thighs and sucked his nipple between her lips, teasing it with her tongue. This was something she had never done and she wondered if she was doing it right. Then she heard a slight moan escape from her master’s lips and with that simple sound she was rewarded with the knowledge that she was truly pleasuring him. It was a marvel to feel his nipple harden under her tongue. She sucked more of his breast between her lips and bit gently, satisfied again by a moan from him. Before she was done she kissed his nipple one more time and then moved downward kissing the roundness of his belly.

She flicked at his navel with her tongue. She was surprised, having never been with a large man, his navel was rather deep. She decided to tease and licked deep and hungrily at it which produced even more murmurs of pleasure from him. Every sound of pleasure from her master sent a wave down her body that thrilled her. It was like it was directly connected to her own pussy for she could feel herself growing wetter with each moan and murmur from him.

Her hands reached between his legs and began to caress his balls. While one hand kneaded carefully on his heavy sack she let her fingers rise and teasingly brush his cock which spasmed and pulsed as if it were eager for her attention. She was fascinated at how he grew even harder when her fingers wrapped around his shaft. With a quick smiling glance up to him she did something that she had never done and had never even thought of doing. Slowly she sucked upon his testicles, teasingly sucking them between her lips and tasting him in a way she had not imagined. Hearing his moans of pleasure was giving her a new form of courage, to be even more sensual than she had thought possible.

As she released his balls from her mouth she continued to massage them with her fingers and her eyes looked up at him as she began to run her tongue along the underside of the shaft, lapping over the veins and wrinkles as she slowly neared the head. Her master moaned a little louder when her tongue reached that spot just below the tip.

That sound from his lips coursed through her body and she could feel her own moisture beginning to grow to the point where she was surprised she was not dripping onto floor. She found that it was more than a desire it was a need to bring more of those wonderful sounds from her master’s lips. So to achieve this she began to mischievously tease that spot just under the tip of his cock, the part that formed an upside down “V” just below the eye of his cock. She flicked at it with her tongue and kissed it several times and to her satisfaction it brought more moans from Him. Finally she could not resist any longer she had to taste his cum. She slid her tongue up and over the tip lapping up the bit of pre-cum that had appeared there.

She wrapped her hand around his shaft and began stroking his hardened manhood, while the other hand continued to massage and caress his balls. Then with great hunger not only to taste his semen but even more to hear more of those delicious sounds that her master was producing she sucked the head of his cock into her mouth. She sucked and lightly stoked the head with her teeth before plunging down upon his shaft. Eagerly she sucked his cock into her mouth as deeply as she could, taking it all the way to his balls. Then let her lips slide slowly back up the shaft where again she kissed and sucked upon just the head, flicking it with her tongue. Each new moan from him made the hunger in her grow for even more.

She felt his hand begin to tenderly stroke her head. Lovingly he was running his big hands gently thru her hair as her head bobbed up and down on his cock. Toy slithered her tongue around his shaft, its fullness filling her mouth perfectly. She could feel the head of his cock kiss the back of her throat and then retreat. It became a driving passion to make his moans grow loud enough to echo off the walls. This hunger fueled her desire to have his cock invade the depths of her throat as she drove her mouth down the shaft even harder.

She could hear his moans grow more intense and soon they did indeed begin to echo within the room. This filled her heart with joy, for she was devouring him like she had never done Chris and she wanted to do better still. This time as she drove down she swallowed at the right moment and felt the head of his cock enter her throat. She had not thought it possible, was afraid her gag reflex would have taken hold but she had read about it and now she was deep-throating her master and the moans from him filled her heart with joy beyond anything she had ever felt.

Toy was proud of the way her mouth was making him writhe and squirm. She felt surges of happiness swell within her heart every time he moaned. Then she also felt her own moisture begin to seep down the insides of her thighs. She had never been so deeply aroused by hearing the sounds emitting from a man. When Chris had moaned he had actually made it more difficult for her to continue, it was something that had not thrilled her but now it was a passion. Hearing her master’s pleasure was the sweetest and most erotic sound she could imagine.

His hips begin to move to the rhythm of her mouth and the fingers of his hands wrapped about her hair and began to guide her. He was getting close to cumming, very close and her mouth watered. Suddenly it surprised Toy, not only was she hungry for his sounds of pleasure but she could not believe how ravenous she was for the taste of his cum. She had never allowed Chris to cum in her mouth, and she had only tasted her master’s a couple of times but this time she wanted it, she needed it. She was actually craving his cum. She sucked harder, moving her head faster, letting her teeth drag gently over his shaft just as he thrust upwards. A gasp and then a very loud moan erupted from his lips at the same instant that his seed erupted into her mouth. She buried his cock in her throat as she greedily sucked every drop of his salty juices.

She moaned as his cum filled her mouth and then suddenly her own body began to quiver. She clamped her thighs together and was surprised to feel her body edging toward an orgasm of its own. She felt his warm semen sliding into her belly and she hungrily savored every drop. She moaned loudly as her body edged over and she came, then the waves within her own loins subsided. It had not been an intense orgasm but still it was astounding for she had only read about this happening. She smiled up at him as she kissed and licked his cock, happy that she had pleased him but even more rewarded to know that the thought of pleasing him had triggered her own climax.

Slowly he rose to his elbows and looked lovingly at her and yet his eyes were also filled with a hunger so intense that it made her blush. His hand patting the side of the bed demanded that she lay beside him. Her heart screamed with joy as she hastily climbed onto the bed and obeyed. She lay down beside his naked body and let hers mold against his, their warmth intermingling. He turned his lips to hers and kissed her. It did not seem to bother him that his cum was still upon her lips. Chris would never have done that. She smiled thinking how wonderful it was to find a man such as this to be her master. She let her hand slide to his manhood and was pleased to find it still hard. She began to stroke it again as her lips traveled over his face and then down to his chest again kissing his chest and nipples. When she raised her eyes to look at his she knew what he wanted without a single word.

She was a little afraid that her pussy would still be raw from his first use of it the day before but she wanted him inside her maybe even more than he wanted it. Toy looked down at him and rose to her hands and feet to straddle him and then slowly lowered herself to his waiting cock. She grunted a little from the initial pain as he penetrated her but her own cum had moistened her and he easily and almost painlessly slid inside her. She sat straddling him and looking down at her master. She knew he could see her eyes were filled with love and she did love the feel of him inside her.

She could not believe how aroused she was at serving him. She could feel his cock as it spasmed and twitched within her. Then suddenly it hit her again, even though they had not even begun to grind or thrust, the slight movements of his cock inside her was enough to send her over the edge. The orgasm washed over her and her back arched. She could not hold back the scream of pleasure. As if with a mind of its own, her body began to buck and grind her hips down and over his cock as she rode him with wild abandonment.

He lay there with his eyes locked on her and his hands reached up to her breasts kneading them and rolling her nipples between his fingers and thumbs. Then as one they began to rock and grind together; their hips pistoning and banging against each other, their flesh smacking loudly as they drove together.

There was a heat burning within her and she smiled as she realized she was now filled with that intense desire of a slave to please her master. She would do absolutely anything to please her master. There was nothing that this man would ask of her that she would not willingly do. She had almost laughed the first time she had heard a slave in a chat session refer to the heat burning within her slave heart but now she understood it and reveled in it.

He grabbed her shoulders and drove into her even harder and faster. He looked up into her eyes and in a soft loving voice whispered, “Toy, your Master is going to cum now.”

Omigawd, those words! She had never heard such an erotic phrase in her life and the very moment his cock pulsed, sending the first wave of his semen deep within her, she shook and screamed as she fell down on him. Their mouths locked together as they came as one; their juices flowing together as one.

His cock and balls were embedded deep within her and she squeezed the muscles of her pussy about his shaft milking the last of his cum from him. She looked down into the eyes of the man she truly loved. This was the gentle and loving master she had fallen for and now she was his.

For long moments they just lay there looking into each other’s eyes, savoring the afterglow of the immense orgasm they had shared. He was her master and she was his sex toy and she could not have been happier.

Slowly she rolled off of him and onto her side, wrapping her arms and legs about him. She lay on the bed next to him, her chest heaving as she tried to catch her breath. She closed her eyes amazed at how her body had reacted towards this man. Even though she did love him she knew that a great deal of it was her need to submit to a powerful man. Though Master Wolf was gentle, she had no doubt of his power. She had felt it upon her.

Toy began to drift into a blissful sleep and did not feel him until he had rolled her onto her belly. He had draped her legs over the side of the bed and was slowly massaging warm oil over her tired muscles. How could she be so lucky to have a master so caring? Then suddenly she felt something inserted into her anus and a sudden gush of a warm fluid filling her. She jerked back into consciousness as she was made to remember that he had said all ways possible.

Please dear god, no… not that… I swore nothing would ever enter there… Why did I lie on that checklist? I can not tell him I lied. The last punishment I received for lying was a rather severe flogging. I am not ready to be beaten like that again.

Besides, it doesn’t matter now. I am his. He can do with me what he wishes. He might fuck my ass and then beat me with the flogger while doing it if I tell him I lied. However she knew that she would deserve it because she had lied to the man that would become her master and no slave should ever lie, even if she were not yet owned.


If she had not lied she knew that he still could have commanded her to submit to anal sex and she would have obeyed, but at least the gentle man she loved would have taken more time and given her the time to become more at ease with it. Her lie had condemned her to a fate she dreaded. She truly loved this man but this was one thing she hated even the thought of. She buried her face into the sheets as she waited for his cock to slam deep into her ass.  

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