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The Surprise - 5/18/2005 7:22:44 AM   
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We had chatted for quite some time on line. We had a great deal in common, but mostly our compatibility stemmed from an overwhelming need for sexual relief, in many different forms. Playing alone gets old after a while. Fortunately I travel a great deal on business and one of the areas I frequent was not too far from her. She agreed to meet me on my next trip, but she would have to take the train, since she did not drive. I arrived a bit early at the station and waited for Jennifer. She appeared, looking a bit nervous and searching for a familiar face. We had exchanged pictures and I knew here instantly. The arrival area was quite large and she walked past me without seeing me. I approached her and said hello as I tapped her on her shoulder. A simile appeared on her face, for I looked just like the my picture as well. I took her bag and we departed for my car and the trip to the hotel. I had arranged for an early 11 AM check in and after a short ride, we found ourselves alone in my room.

I held her face in my hands and kissed her slowly on her lips, our lips barely touching, as my hand reached up and firmly grasped her hair, pulling her to me. She could feel the pulsing hardness begin to grow as she pressed closer to me, and a soft barely audible moan escaped her lips. I continued to kiss her, her ears,neck, eyes, licking softly as my free hand caressed her breasts and pinched her erect and throbbing nipples. It was the beginning of her possession, the start of our becoming one entity as we pressed together, her hair firmly in my grasp and her body bonded with mine, ready to embark on her first journey to sub space. I commanded her to look at me, and I could see her eyes clouding over with lust and passion as she felt my heat through the bulge in my pants. We began to undress each other, one piece at a time....slowly......There was no need to rush despite the mounting passion and urgency. These are the moments to savor when revealing oneself for the first time. First she unbuttoned my shirt and I her blouse. Then she removed my undershirt to reveal my masculine chest, and I her bra to reveal her magnificent breasts, now swollen with passion, her nipples erect and pulsing..."On your knees Jennifer", and that was all that need be said. She knew just what to do as she knelt and unzipped my pants to reveal the one thing that she had been longing for and dreaming about since our first conversations.

"Its perfect, so hard and hot and throbbing" she said as she looked up at me. "What would you like to do Jennifer", I asked, fully knowing what the answer would be. "I wish to suck Your cock", she replied. "Oh Jennifer, that will never do. You must aske me nicely." And she looked up at me again with a mixture of passion lust, and mischief in her eyes and said, "May I please suck Your cock?." Of course I could not deny such a sincere request and I moved over to the couch, sat down, and commanded her to crawl to me, to receive the reward she so desperately wanted. "Make love to it, angel, worship it", and she began to lick up the shaft softly and slowly, kissing the head lightly as if it were the most precious and delicious treat she had ever tasted, which of course it was. She began to suck more urgently and I held her head in my hands as I pumped in and out of her mouth. The pressure and pleasure was almost too much for me to bear, and I soon had to pull out and push away from her still sucking mouth. "You have been a very bad little girl Jennifer", I said as I rose and moved toward the bed, pulling her over my knee and beginning to spank her perfectly rounded ass until it glowed red under my hand. She was moaning, not in pain, but in sweet bliss as my hand alternated between spanking and rubbing her throbbing wet pussy. She began to beg me to fuck her with an urgency that was evident in her pleas, and I stopped the spanking and kissed and licked her ass, soothing her as I placed the handcuffs on her hands and led her to the chair.

THE CHAIR...She had dreamed of the chair, and now the chair would become reality. I sat down and motioned for her to mount me. I slid easily inside her, penetrating her to her very core. I placed her arms around my neck, my mouth having unobstructed access to her beautiful nipples, and I began to rock her as I sucked first one nipple, and then the other into my hot hungry mouth, flicking my tongue over the deliciously throbbing bud, and biting each one softly. The motion was slow and fluid and soon we were rocking in perfect unison with a matching rhythm that created maximum pleasure, and I began to spank her again. She came almost immediately, shuddering uncontrollably, here eyes rolling up inside her head, seeing nothing but the cloudy mist surrounding her senses, lost in the upper atomosphere of that illusive ethereal space, cumming in rapid waves, one after the other. When her orgasms began to subside, and I had gently brought her back, I allowed her to bask in the afterglow for a brief moment.....It was time for the prelude to her big surpise and I removed her arms from around my neck, pushed her off me and led her to the bed, my pulsing erection preceeding me. I laid her down on the bed, spreading her legs wide in anticipation of the moment she had been craving.

She was incredibly wet and panting, her eyes riveted on my throbbing erection. She knew what was going to happen next. She had been waiting all her life to submit, and when she was tied securely to the bed, she let out a moan filled with intense desire. I lifted her legs up over her head. She was so completely saturated that I plunged deeply inside her with no effort at all. I could feel the intense heat emanating from deep inside her like liquid fire, as I filled her completely and fucked her relentlessly. I put her legs down, loosening the ropes but keeping the handcuffs securely fastened around her wrists, and had her encircle me....her arms arond my neck, her legs around my waist, drawing me deeper inside her, our synchronous motion a blur of hot wet passion. The first shuddering orgasm struck her like a bolt of lightening as she lifted her ass off the bed and bucked uncontrollably beneath me, followed almost immediately by a second and then third wave of cascading pleasure.

I was beyond the point of no return, and when I could contain myself no longer, I pulled out and began to stroke myself as she watched in awe and fascination. I let out a primal groan as I began to cum all over her, the thick molten liquid flowing like lava from a spewing volcano, and she squealed with delight as the hot liquid melted into her skin. When our spasms had subsided, I lay down next to her, re-tied her arms to the bed and blindfolded her. I had told her how intensely pleasurable it could be, not knowing where or when the next lick, touch, kiss, or suck would be...and THE FEATHER...she really wanted to feel the feather caressing her exposed skin, not able to see it but feeling the sensations...soft and delicately sensitive, and I began to administer the sweet torture, licking her sweet pussy, her thighs, her soft belly and continuing to her breasts, flicking my tongue over her nipple, while the feather played magically along the length of her body.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door. I had not told anyone where I would be(with one very special exception) and neither had Jennifer, so of course she was a bit concerned and asked me who that could possibly be. I rose from the bed, put on my robe, and went to the door, peering through the security portal, knowing full well who was there, and said in a voice loud enough for Jennifer to hear. "You must have the wrong room. There is no one here by that name." And I silently opened the door to allow Allison to enter. I waved her inside, cautioning her to remain silent. The sight of Jennifer spread out, blindfolded, and restrained on the bed was almost too much for Allison to absorb. She was visibly excited and I motioned for her to disrobe, which she quickly and silently did. I approached the bed and said to Jennifer. "Now where were we before we were so rudely interrupted" and laughed. Allison did not have to be intructed further. She knelt between Jennifer's legs and began to softly and deliberately suck and lick her pussy. Jennifer could sense that something was different. The licking and sucking was somehow softer and gentler and very pleasing. I removed the blindfold from her head as I placed my cock directly in front of her mouth. It took only an instant for her to realize that the mouth on her pussy was not mine, as her eyes began to focus on the beautiful woman planted between her hot quivering thighs. Without a word she looked up at me with a look of intense pleasure and joy and engulfed my cock, hungrily devouring the object of her passion, just as Allison was devouring her, all of us moaning together in a symphonic chorus of lust.

I watched as Allison lifted Jennifer's legs off the bed and wrapped them around her neck, licking and kissing Jennifers hot wet slit, her tongue poking in and out, orally caressing her sweet spot. The sight of the two beautiful women had a profound effect on my re-awakening cock and I pulled out of Jennifer's still sucking mouth and stood above them watching. Allisons ass was now swaying invitingly as she continued to suck Jennifer, her fingers now joining her tongue inside the bound girls pussy. I could see the first precious drops of sweet nectar forming on Allison's pussy as I moved behind her and I began to lick her moistening mound. She was deliciously soft and sweet and I needed to feel myself inside her. I looked at Jennifer, but her eyes were closed, and her head tilted back, lost in the sensations created by Allison's hot tongue. I slid easily inside Allison's pussy and as I began to move slowly in and out, an audible groan escaped her lips. This awakened Jennifer from her lust induced reverie an she opened her eyes at the sound and slowly began to focus on what was before her. Our eyes met and she smiled at me, a smile of approval and sweet contentment. Then her eyes closed again and I knew that this was a surprise she would always remember

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RE: The Surprise - 5/23/2005 5:21:59 AM   
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WOW! very nice thanks for sharing!



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RE: The Surprise - 6/2/2005 3:19:27 AM   
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Thank you for your reply. I am happy you enjoyed it

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RE: The Surprise - 6/8/2005 2:58:09 AM   
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Thank you to those of you who took the time to read my stories. Comments are welcomed

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RE: The Surprise - 6/11/2005 6:13:08 PM   
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I must agree, very erotic! Thanks!!

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RE: The Surprise - 6/16/2005 3:20:56 AM   
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I am happy you enjoyed my story. You might want to read THE PRIZE as well, which is posted here

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RE: The Surprise - 6/22/2005 2:18:21 AM   
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RE: The Surprise - 6/29/2005 7:32:20 PM   
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RE: The Surprise - 7/6/2005 5:15:55 PM   
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Thank you for your reply. I am happy you enjoyed it


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RE: The Surprise - 7/6/2005 5:55:45 PM   
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gut response....
oh fucking shit!
as i slide n my chair all wet
~~shy

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RE: The Surprise - 7/11/2005 3:22:53 AM   
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two "oh fucks" from one slave....I need to write more stories....smile

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RE: The Surprise - 7/11/2005 9:06:55 AM   
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~mooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn~

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RE: The Surprise - 7/13/2005 12:44:07 AM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: xperienced14u

two "oh fucks" from one slave....I need to write more stories....smile


and the submissive /slave might be whom?

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RE: The Surprise - 7/13/2005 5:47:35 AM   
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xperirenced14u..great story..but why introduce a 3rd peson? what's up with all the bi-action?

You write extrenely well; i am also a bit damp, LOL

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RE: The Surprise - 7/13/2005 10:42:03 AM   
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wow.. very nice great detail >^;^< The Lioness

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RE: The Surprise - 7/13/2005 10:53:49 AM   
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the good ones are always on the wrong coast, too far away to hear your moans, up close and personal....You might enjoy my other story as well...THE PRIZE....smile

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RE: The Surprise - 7/18/2005 6:32:32 AM   
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thank you for your compliment and I am happy you enjoyed my story....so did I

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RE: The Surprise - 7/22/2005 2:47:52 AM   
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thank you, just a...bit...damp?....smile

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RE: The Surprise - 7/24/2005 6:27:51 PM   
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thank you, just a...bit...damp?....smile


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RE: The Surprise - 7/28/2005 3:12:29 AM   
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ORIGINAL: xperienced14u

the good ones are always on the wrong coast, too far away to hear your moans, up close and personal....You might enjoy my other story as well...THE PRIZE....smile


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