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UNLEASHED - 5/18/2005 11:58:08 PM

subbella

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"Unleashed"

As her lips lightly trace
her Master's feet,
she senses the power
of a Master unleashed.

His demeanor is stern
His eyes are steel,
Their session begins
their roles are revealed.

Deep in his pleasure
He lets her know
Just where he wishes
their passion to go.

He pulls her hair
and squeezes her breasts,
His touch makes her crave
the pleasures of flesh.

Her mind is focused
on the pain to come,
Unleashing the desire
within this sub.

He take her to far reaches
of joy and pain,
He pushes her limits
brings her back again.

Their erotic exchange
is pure lust unchained,
This moment is treasured
His pleasure, her pain.

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RE: UNLEASHED - 5/19/2005 6:33:06 AM

vtmaster

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Bella -

You must be among the most prolific of contributors to the creative writing posts here on cm and it has been keeping me busy [distracted?] for some time reading your posts. I have a deep appreciation of the manner in which your submission fuels your creative spirit and have enjoyed what you share.

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This moment is treasured
His pleasure, her pain.

These last two lines stay with me today. Thank you.

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RE: UNLEASHED - 5/19/2005 6:35:19 AM

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Thank you so very much! Don't know if you know this, but I have a poetry book for sale!

I am very, very proud of my poetry. It comes straight from my heart!

bella

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RE: UNLEASHED - 5/23/2005 5:24:59 AM

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Hey Bella!

Wonderful as always and yes i got the pain last night to allow for Master's pleasure!

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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: UNLEASHED - 5/23/2005 7:33:11 AM

subbella

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good for you, miss roe!

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RE: UNLEASHED - 5/26/2005 4:48:35 PM

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Wow your poem has me wanting to hurry up and see my beloved pet again. It reminds me of her and me ever so much.

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RE: UNLEASHED - 5/26/2005 5:51:11 PM

subbella

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I'm glad you enjoyed it!

bella

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