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Come into My Darkness - 5/23/2005 10:14:44 PM

FireWalker

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In the darkness I stand and watch as you walk by.

I breathe in and smell the scent you give off, the scent that only I can smell.

It fills My lungs and floods My mind and tells Me that you are the one

The one that I will take into this darkness and show the light

The one that I will push into those places you once fought to never go to...

but soon will beg to be taken to again and again.

I step from the shadows and walk behind you, watching what will be mine and mine alone

No other will take you to that danger zone...

your steps slow and then stop and you listen to the night

you listen as if tuning Me in... and with that tuning in of all that surrounds you, I settle behind you and slip My fingers deep into your hair.

I tighten My grip and pull your head back hard and quick, your breath catches as your blood runs cold and I whisper into you

time to let go little one... time to join Me in My darkness

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 5/25/2005 6:28:31 AM

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Very KEWL! wonderfully said, thanks for sharing!

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 5/26/2005 2:58:49 PM

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Thank you roe,

It is always nice to know that there are others out there that understand at least some of My shadows.

I wrote this the other night after a weekend of play that was both public and private. Every now and then something seems to just fall from Me onto the keys of this computer, after some really good play.

I sat thinking, reflecting on the weekend and found Myself viewing the public and the private in an almost voyueristic way. I could see couples as they began their own kind of dance. I was walking unseen through them all while Mine got ready to receive My attention. Silently and effortlessly I moved and watched as hands touched, caressed, and pulled hair. As they picked up what ever their body and mind needed. Pleasure filled cries and moans, bodies twisting and turning. The sound of breathing that came quickly and then was held. The smell of hot and arroused flesh. Each connection one of rapture. Lost souls, found...

I stood watching Mine as he prepared, his body Mine to take and as he waited and watched the others I came behind him and with My knife drawn I cut his clothes from him, his body perfectly still I leaned up and whispered just as in the poem and took him by the hair to the darkness... I breathed him into Me and he in turn breathed Me deeper than before. Tears laced with freedom and joy were shed, I drank them and was intoxicated.

Some nights are sweeter than others, that night was sinful...

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 6/1/2005 6:22:59 PM

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Well i am glad you shared it with us. And that it was all it was for you!

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 6/28/2005 9:25:53 PM

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Mmmmmmmmmmmm

Nothing else to add.

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 6/29/2005 8:21:19 PM

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very nice :)

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 7/1/2005 11:39:59 AM

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Hello Dreamy!

-=winks=- thank you for your mmmmmmm... Happy Canada Day!! Hope to see you this weekend at the munch! I am starting to put a few things together for that workshop, I am counting you in for it!

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RE: Come into My Darkness - 9/16/2005 12:11:00 PM

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Thank you sinnocentky, I am glad you enjoyed My thoughts and scene. Sorry it took so long to reply. I hope that you are enjoying life and doing well.

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