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Forgiving - 5/29/2005 4:53:11 PM   
mandmzzz


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Forgiving
By Mandmzzz

As usual, her excitement built knowing that she would be with her Master soon. She prepped as per his standard instructions, shaved, cleaned everywhere and everyway imaginable, hair, nails and makeup to perfection. It was an all day event.

As it got closer to the time He would arrive, she started to dress as He asked in His email. Her short black skirt, white button up top, white stay-up stockings and black heels. No bra and no panties. She looked good tonight she thought and hoped He would be as pleased.

Ever since they had met and had developed their relationship, she had come to realize that her feelings were far greater than with other Doms she knew or had experienced. She felt safe, had infinite trust in Him and truly loved Him. That was hard for her in the beginning when she realized that her whole being was defined almost as an extension of Him. Her whole being was consumed by His needs and desires. She felt proud and grateful that she could give herself completely and totally to Him, without reservation, and that He was equally happy and appreciative of her gift to Him. However, the price tag that came with their bond was going to be tested that night and would alter both of them on every level forever. Their lives would either be shattered or reaffirmed. Time would tell.

She waited patiently for His call. Finally her phone rang twice. A signal that he would be there in a matter of minutes and to be ready for Him. She walked to her place and kneeled as she always had. Soon He walked in and stood before her. Her heart raced being in His presence. “Hello love. How are you tonight?” He asked in his deep voice that she loved so much. “I’m very good Sir. Thank You for asking.” She responded quietly. “Good to hear My dear.” He stood there quietly as well. She suddenly realized that something was not quite right and soon realized she was more than correct as His hand struck her face with such force that she was sent backward about 3 feet. Dazed, she couldn’t understand what she had done to make Him this angry. He came before her again quickly grabbing her by the hair and pulled her back up to a kneeling position. “Is there something you wish to tell Me slut?” Her head was still reeling and now totally confused. “I don’t think so Sir.” She responded trying desperately to understand what had happened here. In a much more controlled but angry voice, “I will ask you again and don’t answer until you are very sure because the consequences will be more than either of us are ready for. So slut, do you have something you wish to finally tell Me? “ She could do or say nothing at that point and simply shook with fear and cried. Tears streamed down her face. Grabbing her hair more fiercely, he said, “I am going to help you answer My question and then you will give Me your answer.” He let her go and dialed a number on the phone and said to the person on the other end of the phone, “We are ready.” And hung up the phone.

He came back over and sat down on the couch. “I want you to listen very carefully as what you say and do from this point will make Me believe that you are Mine or not. It will make Me decide where we go from here. You will answer honestly and truthfully or suffer greatly. Do you understand bitch?” She tried to stop crying and said, “Yes Sir.” She thought it wise to say as little as possible since she had no idea what this was all about. She would soon figure it out.

Soon there was a knock at the door making her jump. Her Master sighed and walked toward the door and opened it. Since her eyes could not be raised without her Master saying so, she could not see who had walked in. But suddenly she realized that two men had come in as they came towards her. One grabbed her hair and spoke, “So whore, got yourself into quite the spot now haven’t you.” She jerked back and tried to pull away as she realized the trouble she was in. The man behind her lifted her skirt exposing her ass and grabbed her by her hips and said, “I always love to fuck your ass and you will get it good tonight won’t you slut?!” Again and with total fear and disbelief, she tried to pull away, but knowing that her current situation was futile. Tears were falling now big time. Finally her Master spoke again, “ So slut, is there something you need to tell Me? Remember what I said earlier before you answer.” She knew that she didn’t have a good answer and was to pay the price now. “I have no excuses Master. I thought I would play while You were out of town on occasion and didn’t think it would do any harm, but I deserve whatever punishment you deem proper. I am so sorry Sir for disappointing and deceiving You.” She heard him sigh, “Do whatever you want to her, she deserves that and more and she will get more after you are done gentlemen!” Her heart almost came out of her chest as she realized just how bad this was about to get.

Derek who had her by the hair spoke first. “Well My little whore, I know how much you love sucking my cock so take it out and do what you do best. I’m sure that your “Master” will enjoy watching how you service your other Doms!” His tone sarcastic and scary. As her trembling hands reached up to undo his belt and pants, Craig slapped her ass hard from behind. “Mmmmmm you do love that don’t you whore?! Hand me your other Dom’s belt. Your ass will be as red as it will be sore after I am finished fucking it! “ She shook with more fear than she could ever imagine experiencing, but did as she was told. Derek’s hand struck her face suddenly, “stop your crying because you will be doing more than cry after we are finished! With that statement he grabbed her hair with both hands and shoved his cock in her mouth, screaming at her to suck him the way she knew he liked.

All the time this was taking place she desperately wanted to feel her Master’s arms around her, to tell Him how sorry she was. God what a mess she had made now. He would discard her for sure. She had finally found the man that she wanted to share her life with and be whatever he wanted. What an idiot for thinking He would never know.

Derek and Craig proceed to assault her everyway imaginable. Derek shoved his cock down her throat and slapped her whenever she gagged or tried to pull away. Craig shoved his cock in her ass and fucked her hard, using the belt over and over on her ass. She could barely feel anything from all the pain. Finally, they stopped only to change places, which proved to be even more deadly. Derek’s cock was just as big as Craig’s, but longer and so the pain was excruciating as he drilled her ass deep. Craig’s cock was thicker and so having that shoved down her throat almost made her pass out because she could not breath. The time passed as if in slow motion and seemed to go on forever.


Finally they both came in their respective holes. The both removed themselves and went down to the washroom to clean up. She fell to the floor, thankful that it was finally over and that the pain had ceased. But she was not prepared for what happened next. Master was suddenly standing over her. “Strip off those filthy clothes NOW slut!” He shouted. She tried to move away from the sound of His voice realizing how angry He sounded. She didn’t get far before He grabbed her hair and dragged her back to the middle of the room. Instinctively her hands reached up and found her hands being forced behind her back and bound tightly. “Since you are going to fight this I will undress you then” her Master’s hands grabbing her top, He ripped it off of her in seconds. Stunned, she lay there helpless as He pulled off her skirt and stockings. Now naked, He grabbed her and forced her to her feet. “You don’t deserve to be dressed by or for me and now you will experience my punishment. Derek and Craig had returned. Master asked them to escort me out to the car and wait for him. She started to say something, but decided that it was not wise to ask for something to wear. It was freezing outside, but that was to become the least of her worries. They both grabbed her and took her outside roughly, placing her in the front seat. They both then got in Craig’s car. They waited as Master came out and got into the car and drove off. The drive and silence was harder than all the pain she had just endured. She wanted to make this all go away… to make everything better.

They drove for quite some time as she sat quietly, shaking from fear and the cold. Finally they pulled up to a barn out in the country, but she had no idea where they were. Master got out of the car and came around to her door. He opened it and grabbed her arm and pulled her out. It was difficult to get out as her hands were still bound behind her back. He led her into the barn as Craig and Derek had followed them inside. “Gentlemen, please prepare her for me.” She looked around, trying to find someplace to run. She knew that whatever was about to happen was not going to be pleasant. But they grabbed her, untying her hands and retying them to a bar that was on the ground. She was panicked and began to cry uncontrollably. Craig grabbed her hair and pulled her head back.” You did this to yourself and now you will pay the price baby!” She looked into is eyes and saw something, but couldn’t tell exactly what it was. Derek then started to pull on a rope over by a pillar and she realized the bar was being raised and her along with it. Soon she was suspended in the air. As the first crack of the whip struck her back, she heard both Craig and Derek gasp. The pain that surged through her body was like nothing else she ever felt. Her Master raised the whip and struck her over and over until she finally passed out.

Her Master dropped the whip, tears streaming down his face he walked outside. Craig and Derek lowered her and wrapped her limp body in the blanket they had brought. From the distance they could hear her Master screaming like wounded animal in pain.
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RE: Forgiving - 6/1/2005 7:04:23 PM   
theroebabe


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WOW sad and awesome at the same time. I hope i never do that to my Master.




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RE: Forgiving - 7/7/2005 9:12:33 PM   
rhianna4u


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WOW! This was very intense. Was any of this story based in reality?

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