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BlkSeattlesub -> The Homecoming F/m sub's story (6/3/2005 3:42:47 PM)

The Homecoming (sub prospective)

It's 5:20, i have been kneeling here for 20mins, every so often i look up or
dare to get up and look out the window for your car. Once i was caught doing
just that and i could sit comfortably for days. This waiting is maddening,
but i can't think of anything else i would rather do on my day off. It's now
5:30, my legs are geting tight and i use the time to wonder what will be my
fate tonight? And the thoughts in my mind jump from the pleasure in waiting
to the dread of my assured punishments yet to come. She does this on purpose
i think, knowing that i am kneeling here, she probably is waiting in the car.
i think about my chores, is everything clean, is the food prepared, is the
fragranced bath water hot enough? Oh shit, i forgot to set out her glass of
wine!!! Maybe she will not notice, yeah, she may be tired from work and just
want to soak and be scrubbed. i hear the car door close and your heels beat
the ground into submission as you stride to the door.

The door opens and i can smell your perfume and the fragrance of summer,
trees, cut grass and flowers and the feel of the world outside as it coats my
nude body. i remain kneeling until the door closes, so that i am not seen by a
neighboor. After the door is fully closed i immediately ask permission to
rise so that might help you off with your coat. The seconds pass as i wait
for your permission to stand, finally you tell me, "yes!".

i rise to help you off with your coat and jacket, but before i get the chance
to put them away, you grab my hard cock and pull be into you quickly, i
struggle to keep from falling and to remain holding on to your coat. i know
that if i drop either of them the kiss will end and the pain will begin. As
you draw me in for a long deep kiss, which you are probing my mouth with your
tongue, nibbling on my lips and squeezing on my cock at the same time, i am
reminded that own me. i am in blissful pleasure, your power covering me like
a blanket. This is great i think, as i open my eyes to see you, then this
evil smile comes to your lips as i realize that you have pulled me around, my
side next to the door.

And then pull open the door, exposing me to anyone who may be passing by, my
brown ass sticking out and sqirming for your pleasure. You pull me in for a
kiss again, biting on my bottom lip, and then releasing it for my tongue. i
can not move, i can not go to my knees with your teelth around my tongue and
your hand pulling on my brown cock. You pull back and swing me around toward
the door to watch the uncomfortable look on my face and laugh! Yes i am
totally under your control as i relish your domination over me. Grabing my
balls, you pull me into the house and shut the door. "How do you feel
slaveboy?", "Embarassed Mistress" i softly speak.... Again you laugh, "good
boy, as well you should". i start to think, oh my, what if one of the
neighboors were walking by?!? Your smile again makes me feel like the fly in
the spiders web.

You lead me into the living room by my leash, telling me to continue
undressing you, i begin with your shoes, and as i begin to take them off you
tell me to lick and kiss the tops of them. Hmmmm i think, maybe i will get a
chance to taste her early tonight, yes! and then she might just want to mount
me!!! Yeah!!! i start licking your shoe, from the sides to the top of the
shoe and then your stocking ankle, my mind so distracted with the
possibilities, i forgot to ask! A quick pull of my leash tells me that i was
not told to touch your skin, just the shoes. i go back to my task
thinking"Whew!" i got off easy this time and smiling at my achievement of
getting away with the licking for an instant your stockings, i am feeling just
a little cocky. She is soft today, i think as i finish licking the other
shoe. Then just as i finish removing the second shoe, you yank on my chain
and pull me up to your face, just inches away i watch you glare at me and
think, {you read my mind again!!}....Oh shit!

"You think that you were cute don't you!!" "No Mistress, it was a
mistake!!!!!!" "Oh yes it was, oh yes it was!!!" i swallow hard and look
down quickly, hoping that my show of submission will earn me a repreve. Yeah
right! my mind tells me, my ass is going to pay for my cocks thinking.....
again! You pull me to my hand and knees it the middle of the living room
floor. i hear you reach around the couch for....... the crop!! Damn, i
really messed up, ok maybe if i whine and plead... "i am very sorry Mistress,
it won't happen again!!!", "I know it won't happen again tonight! And so will
you!!!" As i hear the swoosh, and feel the first of many on my ass, i think,
it's not the tip! Ouch! "One Mistress, thank you!". "Five, I think will
teach you, then get dressed, bring me my wine and make sure my bath water is
still hot!" smack!!! "Yes Mistress, (Ouch!!!) Two Mistressssss, thank
you!!!". The wine!!!! SMACK!!!

End of part one (subs prospective)




fastlane -> RE: The Homecoming F/m sub's story (6/3/2005 4:11:16 PM)

very nice writing style...I applaud you!




BlkSeattlesub -> RE: The Homecoming F/m sub's story (6/3/2005 4:57:19 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: fastlane

very nice writing style...I applaud you!



Thank you fastlane!




theroebabe -> RE: The Homecoming F/m sub's story (6/5/2005 7:54:41 AM)


wonder how many he will get for forgetting the wine?





BlkSeattlesub -> RE: The Homecoming F/m sub's story (6/9/2005 10:38:48 AM)

Once! LOL




softandshy -> RE: The Homecoming F/m sub's story (6/24/2005 7:22:21 PM)

The dual vantage point is a very interesting concept. Think i'd like to try that sometime.




LionessInBoots -> RE: The Homecoming F/m sub's story (7/16/2005 6:15:33 AM)

very nice writing great start.. love the slow build your anticipation. look forward to the next part hmmm when is it grins take care >^;^< The Lioness




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