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subsumed - 6/14/2005 7:53:50 AM

Barbara

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Greetings. It's been awhile since I posted.
I think I finally got my creative juices flowing again for which I am most grateful.
If I can't write or draw I don't feel 'whole' because I need that outlet so much in my life.

I wanted to share this here -

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she quietly exploded
unconcerned
her mind sinking in a sea
splatters
enthralled
undergoing detail
memories
so lucid

suffocated
she quietly detonated
unnoticed
her heart sinking to the floor
splatters
encrusted
undergoing detail
evisceration
so meticulous

Barbie

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"The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation and go to the grave with the song still in them." H.D. Thoreau

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RE: subsumed - 6/16/2005 1:11:03 PM

theroebabe

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Hi Barbie thanks for sharing! Glad to see your creative juices flowing!

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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: subsumed - 6/16/2005 9:51:44 PM

suberic101

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Wow...

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