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I need a Mistress to help me with my profile please - 7/27/2007 4:17:37 AM

aSlavesJourney

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Please is their a Mistress out their who can help me with my profile. I am very new to the lifestyle and really do need some help. I am very polite and would be very releived to have some help from a Mistress. Thankyou for your time cheers from paul.

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RE: I need a Mistress to help me with my profile please - 7/27/2007 7:32:55 AM

stockingluvr54

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Might try reading some of the active threads going on right now about this very thing...???????

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RE: I need a Mistress to help me with my profile please - 7/27/2007 8:17:04 AM

peppermint

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Spell check your profile. Run on sentences make it very difficult to read. Be careful about using the word "no" when you should be using the word "know." Divide it into paragraphs to make it easier to read.

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RE: I need a Mistress to help me with my profile please - 7/27/2007 9:11:37 AM

MasterFireMaam

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1) Post a picture. A nice face shot that shows a pleasant expression. Or, state at the beginning that you have one like I described to share.

2) It's too long. I read the first sentence or two, then you started in about your childhood. Take all that out and put it in a journal entry.

3) Clean up your sentence structure, gammar and spelling.

4) Explain what you have to offer a relationship. I don't need to know that you're overweight but still play soccer. I want to know if you can clean, be my companion and are interested in doing the little mudane things. Also, do you have a job? In other words, show that you think about this relationship in a realistic way.

5) Put your fetishes last, if you feel you need to list them.

6) Overall, the profile is rambling and has not real structure. Take one thought and collect all the other similar statements and create a paragraph.

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