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subbella -> PUNISHMENT (6/28/2005 3:37:51 AM)

PUNISHMENT

His silence feels
like a punishment
for crimes she
did not commit.

For if loving
him,
Pleasing
him,
giving all to
him
is a crime,
then she is
guilty as charged.




flirt -> RE: PUNISHMENT (6/28/2005 10:49:39 AM)

The simplicity in this screams volumes. i connected with the words rather well it is a horrible feeling isn't it? Thanks for sharing it.

flirt aka enigma




subbella -> RE: PUNISHMENT (6/28/2005 8:54:15 PM)

It's frustrating, and makes me wonder about his true feelings for his subs. He tells me he loves me, then doesn't call for a week. LOL




theroebabe -> RE: PUNISHMENT (7/21/2005 7:21:48 PM)


Bella in some ways it is a punishment to us. But it may not be his intent.





subbella -> RE: PUNISHMENT (7/21/2005 11:07:23 PM)

Miss Roe - each time we talk, he reassures me over and over again that we are okay. We are talking more and more these days. I'm feeling very positive the end is in sight!




HelenaXu -> RE: PUNISHMENT (7/23/2005 1:04:25 AM)

Excellent writing.




subbella -> RE: PUNISHMENT (7/23/2005 7:54:08 AM)

Thank you! Welcome to the boards!




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