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Again, pick it apart and give me opinions. Mod3 ------------------------------------------------------------------ Sweet Release She holds the blade in her right and courage in the left swearing this time its over there will be no turning back Countless tears she has cried and one hundred nights alone no more will she hurt this way blade slipping quickly across the bone Final tears of desperation slide gently down her skin her face feels hot, as her hand goes numb she smiles, finally a battle she can win The smell of flowers fills the air and she feels so at peace the end is now close, she feels it drawing a last breath, letting go in sweet release ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Longing To Go How do I put into words feelings I cannot even speak tears I struggle to hide and pain that makes me weak How do I tell you I need more than you give your hands in my hair and your mouth on my skin How do I show you my love that runs true it coarses my veins and blinds my eyes, with images of you How do I let you go for it is not I that you need not I that you long for not I that your heart bleeds How can I go on now with all that I know while you stand here beside me longing to go -------------------------------------------------------------------- Abandon In a waking moment your no longer by my side there are no words left to say only hours of tears to cry You promised me forever then quickly changed your mind you gave me no reasons, I can understand and left behind in your wake, sorrow yet again I thought I had given up on fairy tales and dreams and quickly you came to my life now I hold my heart, and watch it slowly bleed There are a thousand pieces of my heart, ripped from me soon they shall evaporate and eventually cease to be.... 'The soul that has purged itself of heart, no longer bleeds' --------------------------------------------------------------------------- MISTRESS I hear her screaming calling out my name This muse of mine often dark, driving me insane With pen in hand, I try to write all the things she says For she guarantees if I don't she'll clutter up my head She leaves me breathless, in the dark searching for lighted torch Tossing, turning, breathing,stopping as her wickedness spills forth My Muse the Mistress to all things blood black I have to pen, she screams at me or my bending mind will crack ---------------------------------------------------------------- Silence Scream As monsters crash your door Scream As they drag you to the floor Scream While they speak of things to come Scream Tonite your victim number one Scream See the blade shimmer bright Scream Demons giggle in delight Scream your blood, rushing to the floor Scream Drawing your last breath.. then no more Silence ----------------------------------------------------------- Sorrow Do my words beckon you or tempt you with desire Do you smell the smoke as it bellows from my fire Am I just a sorid thought escaping from your mind Or shall you tempt your fate that has called us out in time Sorrow has bowed her head and asked you to come She seeks to hold your hand and express undying love Charming while might it seem to an innocent eye Sorrow has come this day and speaks, within you I shall die ------------------------------------------------------------ Mod3
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