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Najakcharmer -> RE: A new website for Female Domination (8/7/2007 11:37:42 AM)
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Couple of quick points: check the misspellings (like "weather" for "whether" and "eles" for "else") and please, oh please, lose the W/we lashy-speak. It's annoying and just makes things hard to read for a visitor to your site who is looking for information, not grammar abuse in the name of D/s roleplaying. If you're a sub or a dom, good for you, we can all respect that, but is it really necessary to strain everyone's eyeballs by doing the slashy pronoun dance over every paragraph you type?
The page is still an untitled document but I'm sure you'll get around to thinking up a suitable name for it.
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