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MsTempestRaven -> Eye Of The Beholder (8/4/2005 11:41:14 PM)

Today I was told;
You're not attractive.

I was put back in a place I have fought [for years] to escape.
Not attractive.
Those words rang in my ears for what felt like a lifetime.
My laugh covered the pain.
Every swallow felt like a razor going down.
I couldn't just walk away.
Never would I let him know he had just crushed my world.
I sat and joked. Each laugh forced out.
Every word laced with tears.
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.
These eyes could not stand to look upon me

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NakedOnMyChain -> RE: Eye Of The Beholder (8/9/2005 3:05:46 AM)

I know how you feel. It's funny how we tend to make it seem all ok when someone says something as hurtful as that. We gloss things over like what they said was a joke. I don't think I could take it with such grace and dignity anymore. However, I saw some of your artwork, and you are, indeed, beautiful.




ponydriver1 -> RE: Eye Of The Beholder (8/11/2005 1:41:08 PM)

OK I normally don't response to these listing. But in this case some one telling you that your not VERY attractive is a liar. He or she may be trying to get into your head for one of reason or another, but take my word for it your very attractive.




Bluff -> RE: Eye Of The Beholder (8/13/2005 1:38:40 AM)

You are ugly!
i look in your eyes!
i,m angry to you!
ignorance!
its true!
of course i lie!
i want your attention!
you me to tease!
but not with ignorance please!
getting wild as you want me to!
you are a lie and i am the fish!
your bait is your beauty bitch!
why i am around?
you cant be ugly!
but you are evil!
and thats what is funny.
you want to see my power!
how i could hurt you!
and you believe that i can!
because you want to change places!
you want to move!
and believe that this shadow can hit you!
he has to exist!
you want him to!
fire burns reality!
we need it deep some times!




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