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A Kiss ~ - 8/5/2005 10:24:00 PM

subbella

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A kiss ~

as soft and sweet
as the petals
of a blossoming rose.

sent from a land
far away and
unfamiliar as her own.

Where long ago
poets wept and artists languished
over such romantic tragedy.

Where a Romeo gave his
life for a Juliet
who could not bear to live without ~

The simplicity of two lips
joined as one
in a soft, sensual kiss.

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Music, Magic, and Mystery are the muses that inspire her artwork and her life.

SUBMISSION . . . it isn't her pasttime, it's her calling.

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RE: A Kiss ~ - 8/9/2005 3:00:21 AM

NakedOnMyChain

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I like it. A lot. What I'd really like is to see more of the same.

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RE: A Kiss ~ - 8/9/2005 6:05:56 PM

subbella

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Thank you! I have posted many poems on this message board, and there are more if you look back through my journal. I recently put a collection of poems together in a book that I've been selling for about $20.00 each.

I write poetry when inspired. I'm always happy to hear I have an audience for it here on collarme!

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Music, Magic, and Mystery are the muses that inspire her artwork and her life.

SUBMISSION . . . it isn't her pasttime, it's her calling.

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