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NakedOnMyChain -> Disintegration (8/9/2005 2:54:26 AM)

Hey all, hope you enjoy. I just wrote this about five minutes ago. I have medicine-head from some Tylenol pretty bad, so let me know if it's just crap or not.
~Michelle

Disintegration

He noticed me.
He split my soul with every glance,
every word,
every heartache of need that hits my brain.

He took me in
From pouring rain,
From unknown slef,
From a life mundane in city streets.

He gave me pleasure pain
and painful pleasure.
With the smallest gesture,
words unsaid

He took me over
and I was not I
but part of Him.




NakedOnMyChain -> RE: Disintegration (8/9/2005 2:55:44 AM)

Self. Not slef. Geez. I warned you all about the medicine-head thing. [;)]




trejeremy -> RE: Disintegration (8/13/2005 10:57:50 PM)

besides the slef I thought it was good. Not bad for medicine head.




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