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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/26/2005 12:20:07 AM   
knees2you


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Status: offline 		gently removed the spreader bar and helped her to the commode. she had no choice but to pee in front of Him; and she was humiliated. After she finished, He cleaned her and placed her on the bed, face down, and moved His metal finger nails up and down her back.
She wanted to


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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/26/2005 7:45:11 PM   
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Status: offline 		She wanted to lay still but since she was incredibly ticklisth this was impossible. Laughing so hard that tears streamed down her face she pleaded that he stop the tickle torture. On her last gasping plea he stopped and rolled her over, kissing her once gently on her forehead he ordered her to go to sleep. Her eyelids drifted shut as Master Chaos vanished and in her dreams she was once again owned by Master Lrod the only person to have ever collared her heart.

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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/27/2005 5:10:56 PM   
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Status: offline 		(is it just me, or does this thread seem slightly more story like than poem like? Let's try this: )

Her eyes darted back and forth under fluttering lids,
as she dreamed the strange vegetable dream that she did:

The mood was foreboding, tho the music was gay,
there were dancing zuchini's in a land far away...

they floated 'cross the dance floor, they spun round and round
Right up to the table where she was tightly bound

She was their banquet this magical night
they filled every orafice and filled it up tight!

she writhed and she moaned and her legs twitched with glee
even in her dreams, she would never be free

Like the sorcerer's apprentice drowning in brooms
zuchini after zuchini violated her, sealing her doom.

Would her magician come save her from so wicked a spell,
waking her, saving her from vegetarian hell?





< Message edited by raeanha -- 8/27/2005 5:11:32 PM >

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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/27/2005 5:19:46 PM   
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Status: offline 		A saga if you ken, an epic, a tale that grows larger in the telling,

but now; you readers, the time is ripe for the poem to start a jelling,

The banquet, the feast of unmentionables was drawing near,
only twentyfour hours would pass, until future events unfolded, forever changing LRODS lass, it was like this you see;

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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/27/2005 6:41:35 PM   
kisshou


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Status: offline 		a slave to Master Lrod in her heart
from Master Chaos; she wished to part
given to him for repayment of a debt
on the exact same day her and Master Lrod met
she has dreampt of him since that day
though Master Chaos took her far away
will Master Lrod become her knight in shining armour
and rescue her from the zuchini farmer
will she lay trapped in misery
this poem will unfold the mystery....

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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/28/2005 5:25:47 PM   
knees2you


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Status: offline 		a slave to Master Lrod in her heart
from Master Chaos; she wished to part
given to him for repayment of a debt
on the exact same day her and Master Lrod met
she has dreampt of him since that day
though Master Chaos took her far away
will Master Lrod become her knight in shining armour
and rescue her from the zuchini farmer
will she lay trapped in misery
this poem will unfold the mystery.
A Boat was approching with a Captain named Jean
He walked with one leg and looked real mean.
The Zuchini farmer hired him to get back the girl.
Before he could pull out his sword,


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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/29/2005 3:06:56 PM   
kisshou


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girl does not rhyme with sword... :P

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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/29/2005 7:17:53 PM   
knees2you


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Status: offline 		This was suppose to be a Poem, but it turned into a Story~
Lets just go with it~
Besides if You see the coma, You Can find a word that rythmes
with girl~


a slave to Master Lrod in her heart
from Master Chaos; she wished to part
given to him for repayment of a debt
on the exact same day her and Master Lrod met
she has dreampt of him since that day
though Master Chaos took her far away
will Master Lrod become her knight in shining armour
and rescue her from the zuchini farmer
will she lay trapped in misery
this poem will unfold the mystery.
A Boat was approching with a Captain named Jean
He walked with one leg and looked real mean.
The Zuchini farmer hired him to get back the girl.
Before he could pull out his sword,


Sincerely, Ant


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RE: poem starter. I start a word and people can ad on~ - 8/30/2005 1:56:06 AM   
subbella


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Status: offline 		Before he could pull out his sword,
Master Chaos drew first without a word
He cut out the heart of the Captain named Jean
and handed it to the zucchini queen.
He Said with a snarled, sniveling snare
"this is what becomes of those who dare
steal the goddess of my heart
from my queen I will never part."

< Message edited by subbella -- 8/30/2005 1:57:21 AM >

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