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Ladybug19 -> Music with Pain (7/4/2004 3:35:51 PM)

A kane
strong and steady
a single-tail
snap and sting
a flogger
kissing like an angel
yet making Siren's sing
the kane
starts the rhythm
steady hard and true
the single tail
sets nerves alight
in every color n hue
then the flogger
picks up the music
though heard by just a few
the moans
are beginning
the song must be sung
the cries
become verses
made as pure as the Sun
the tremors
are the finale
for the Siren is Done

hope you enjoy
- Slave Dee



MistressDREAD -> RE: Music with Pain (7/4/2004 8:52:02 PM)

nice



Ladybug19 -> RE: Music with Pain (7/4/2004 9:10:30 PM)

thank you Mistress Dread
yaaahhhh someone liked it hehehehe
Slave Dee



proudsub -> RE: Music with Pain (7/4/2004 10:47:58 PM)

quote:

yaaahhhh someone liked it hehehehe
Slave Dee


I liked it too. I've liked all of yours Dee.



Ladybug19 -> RE: Music with Pain (7/5/2004 3:50:25 AM)

*feels special* thank you proud sub you guys are so good to me
Slave Dee



dearydear -> RE: Music with Pain (7/7/2004 5:36:13 PM)

well done dear yet you really are not that good yet
[:D]



SirDaniel -> RE: Music with Pain (7/11/2004 12:01:42 PM)

Very nice pet.

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Ladybug19 -> RE: Music with Pain (7/11/2004 1:44:57 PM)

Thank you Sir
Dee



lookingwithin04 -> RE: Music with Pain (7/14/2004 8:42:14 AM)

very nice lady bug i really liked this one



boiphil -> RE: Music with Pain (7/16/2004 8:42:05 AM)

very nicely written.. :) what a talent you have, hun.



Ladybug19 -> RE: Music with Pain (7/16/2004 10:22:17 AM)

oh thank you boiphil and lookingwithin you guys are great))
Slave Dee



BitchTrainer -> RE: Music with Pain (7/18/2004 12:29:15 PM)

that was really good.

swish, crack, pain.

a gain, and ah a gain.



Ladybug19 -> RE: Music with Pain (7/19/2004 8:53:22 AM)

*blush* thank you Bitchtrainer))
glad so many liked it
Slave Dee



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