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some poems i wrote today - 8/15/2005 4:43:27 AM   
Bluff


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i went to the dentist today,
and on my way,
i walk with pen and sheet of paper!
i now i would forget it later!
that what comes!
needs greet at once!
and those are the guests of today!

Elf,

Eat me slow and tender!
touch me with your teeth and tongue,
bite!
this flesh apart and slender,
kiss it all along.
and swallow me finally into yourself!
you do it!
my beautyful elf!


Symmetry,

a symmetry does have our body!
more left and right,
less up and down,
and no back and front,
but there are two of all!
two legs,two eyes,two mouths,
where are you my soul?


The other soul,

looking for the soul!
looking for my other part.
shouting into the dark!
for an answer,
for a bark!
of my other part.


Not for you!

i want to write poems!
but not for you,
eyes who see beauty,
eyes with an heart!
not for the greedy hand.
that wont understand!
i want to write poems for you!


Gloves,

more of one means less of the other,
the little one:the lover,
the bigger one:my father.
the trap!
i,m wet.
my father does preach,
the gloves of love!
but love is not for gloves!


Out,

i want to move
out!
my flesh,
wants to move,
out!
hit me,whipe me,torture me,
out!


The answer,

İ await an answer!
do i?
eyes are no hands!
they should wonder!
eyes who wonder!
hands do kiss!
greed!
the need!
to wonder.
is to wonder a need?
is it an addiction?
love!
the need to love?
the greed of wonder?
only firm hands of greed can hold the love!?
that cant be true!


Fire,

the fire has to work!
in the factory!
that pulp should stay far from me!
their products should be near!
products of pulp!
hidden in their products they smile to my heart.
this smile this teeth!
it will bite!


Strong Father,

my father is very strong,
he has the eyes!
he gives advice!
to the child who wants to play!
who wants to be blind for the surprize!


thats my shit from today?
is it tasty?

< Message edited by Bluff -- 8/15/2005 4:52:32 AM >


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RE: some poems i wrote today - 8/20/2005 4:48:25 AM   
slavedesires


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quote:

The answer,

İ await an answer!
do i?
eyes are no hands!
they should wonder!
eyes who wonder!
hands do kiss!
greed!
the need!
to wonder.
is to wonder a need?
is it an addiction?
love!
the need to love?
the greed of wonder?
only firm hands of greed can hold the love!?
that cant be true!


is to desire a need?

i liked this one the best

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