Bluff
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once as i was kicked out of a philosophy forum again,i wrote short stories,
about one hundret in a week.
this one i remembered,and want to post it here.
The Heart,
the guy was suffering from his heart.
it was to big it hurt so hard.
he asked a doctor if he could remove?
he answered he could make this move!
the operation started,
the heart parted.
and the doctor gave the heart to the patient,
who was waiting impatient,
now he was walking with his heart happily,
and his heart was happy too,
and began to grow which it couldnt within those ripps,
the heart grow,did grow bigger and bigger,
the guy couldnt carry it any more!
he put it down on a meadow,
and had to stand with it,
the heart grow big so big as a house!
and opened a door!
it said wont you come in my owner?
and live with me?
the guy said ok and entered the heart.
and lived within,
so much blood,
no hunger any more,
satisfied and getting thicker and obese every day!
making pressure in the house.
in the house of his heart.
the heart is now in pain,
the guy to big,
he hurts so hard,
the doctor making the operation walks just by.
the heart asks,
could you remove this guy?
< Message edited by Bluff -- 8/15/2005 7:09:53 AM >
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