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Take Me - 7/7/2004 5:31:59 PM   
Ladybug19


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bind me
let my soul run free of body
suspend me
let the air feel envious of me
whip me
let the sting send me within
flog me
let the kisses lead me forward
touch me
let your love fill me in every cell
ignore me
let me long for you to complete me
teach me
let me be the best i can and more
show me
let me see all i am and all i will be
take me
let me know your control over me

Slave Dee

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Only when the body is bound, can the soul truly be free to soar.
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RE: Take Me - 7/7/2004 5:35:02 PM   
dearydear


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I loved this just remember it doesn't have to rhymn to be poetry about time ypou did something worth reading


< Message edited by dearydear -- 7/7/2004 5:42:56 PM >

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