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the review- part 1, 18+Adults only - 7/11/2004 3:04:08 AM   

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just a little disclamer. This 2 part story is written as a psydonym for r/l always follow the ssc and make sure that you know who your partners are and take precautions for std's ect.

This is a graphic and literal story, people who are easily offended please do not read.
contains: f/m/m, F/f, masturbation, bondage and D/s.

It was early on this particular Saturday morning. I rolled over to look at My beautiful submissive that was adorning the bed, still tied up and asleep, she still looked as content as when we first started to play together.
Caressing her breasts, I woke her up sweetly, talking her out of her dreams.

"good morning My beautiful, did you sleep well?"

"mmm yes Mistress I did"
I smiled with satisfaction. We both knew what was going to happen today. It was the bi annual review for both of us, something that we made an essential part of our relationship, as D/s could be difficult to step away from for too long.
Releasing her from her cuffs both hands and feet; I kissed her passionately and got up to have a shower. As was our ritual on a Saturday we would do something slightly vanilla leading up to the evening. My baby katy, as per our routine, got up and made breakfast for the both of us, setting everything out as usual.
After My shower I got dressed into a corset and a business suit over the top, no bra no underware, trusting that with all the 'extra' entertainment that I would be doing it would hold as firm as my will.
I then proceeded into the dining room to sit at our banquet table that katy had laid out for us.
As always she kneels beside Me as I eat My oats and drinks the guava juice. Once I am done I allow her to eat while I set out her clothes in the bedroom for her to dress in.
This Saturday I picked out a beautiful crushed velvet dress, black with red lace around the chest and sleeves. Knowing that she can't wear the dress without a bra in public I add that to the clothes on the bed. Smiling to myself as I know that she hates and loves going without underwear.
I walked back into the dining room and notice that katy is sitting there with her eyes appropriately lowered.

"you may pack away breakfast and dress in what I have put out for you."
"yes My lady" she replied, and did as she was told.

After she had left the room I took out all My notes for the review and started to place them in piles for the apprasial.
Making sure it was all as it should be I walked back in as katy was slipping the dress over her head.

"ready for the review my pet?"
"more than ready My lady"

I held her hand as we walked back into the dining room where we were to have our 'chat'. I motioned for her to sit down, as I sat down Myself.

"as we begin is there anything that you wish to say to Me?"
katy pulls out the submissive review sheets that I asked her to fill out and present to Myself at this review.
"Nothing other than is in here sweetie."
I look over the review sheets; we both know that she has been brilliant over the last 6 months.
"Well there were only 12 infractions, all which were dealt with, and allot of play sessions that you recorded. I will read these slightly later.. Now would you like to know how you are progressing In my mind?"
katy breathed heavily "yes My lady"
I read out the requests that I made, paying in particular attention to the one that would concern us most tonight, the one about improving flexibility in her legs. "over all I only have one comment, you are doing magnificently and that I would want to extend our current contract for another year."
I looked at her, and caught her eyes; she was smiling so much it looked like she would burst. "With one exception My lady....."
"What would that be katy?"
she took another deep breath" that if you are still happy with me after this period, that we make it .... Permanent"
"Well well well, that is a big request. Are you sure you want that?"
"More than anything My love."
"you do know that at any other time I would have flogged you for speaking so?"
katy giggled" aye My lady, why do you think I waited"
I smiled and stood up.. Walked around over to her and said,
"done then"
she threw her arms around Me and squealed with happiness

"Mistress, seeing as I have been a good girl is there the usual ... reward."
Thinking about it I smiled at her almost sadistically.
" there will be a form of a reward, however I am not sure you will like it... but please take this" I hand her $400 dollars, " and go shopping, I want you to wear something special tonight, a corset and what ever else you wish to get to please Me."
She bowed deeply to me "yes My lady."

I waited till she was out the door and in the cab before I made the calls that I had been planning these long months...

20 minutes later 2 hansom males and allot of equipment pulled into My driveway...

To be continued.....
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