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NoirGlace -> you're a sub (2/22/2004 5:04:18 PM)


You're a sub
Yes, you're a sub
I tell you, you're a sub.

You have sub proclivities
In sub activities
Subs are your idols
And subs are your enemies

You commit total sub acts
Get lost in dominant facts
When you got lost
I tracked you by your sub-species tracks

You lick my feet and my ass
You're admittedly sub-classed
Substitutions of your worth
Are sublimated by me selling your sub-ass.

You live in a sub-dwelling station
And brag of your most lowly sub-situation
You are submerged in this discourse
And I know you exalt in your subligation.

You bear streaked submissive tracks
Across your bent sub back
Subordination alludes you
Inferiority is your tact

I take you on the sub-rosa tip
Sacrosanct as you lick my clit
Raining down your sub throat
Mouth opened for my sub-fusc colored shyt

You are a sub, Domes' issue golden colored ale
You are a sub, on my Royal spear you are impaled
You are a sub, above most men for you know your place
You are a sub, supine as I sit comfortably upon your face.

…you are a sub.




iwillserveu -> RE: you're a sub (3/7/2004 5:48:26 AM)

Although the short lines and the aaba rhyme scheme can be jarring, I liked the last stanza.

Yes, that is a compliment. [:)]




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