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Misplaced........ - 10/4/2005 7:27:31 AM

angelique1018

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Misplaced..........

I have been sitting in the darkness,
my life is such a mess,how did i get here
im tired of living in fear,Im left abandoned
in this world im stranded,time passes
my life flashes,before me,my need to be free
will i make it, or linger never lit
im dying inside,being forced to hide
he has taken all,my mind,my body
but He cant take my soul,He's obsessed
in His anger He is posessed,
ive tried to make him understand,
unleashing my submission on demand
a gift of surrender,not knowing He had
His own agenda,I was suppose to be set free
instead He used it against me,
standing there naked in the dark,
He would use my submission to break my heart
in my surrender I let down my guard
not knowing I would forever be scarred,
He called it role play,and i was taken
only to be left in desolation,I called it
well it does'nt matter anyway,im left alone
my soul naked,my heart broken,trying to find
my way home,lost,afraid and confused,
physcially im fine,spiritually im bruised
alone is where i belong,time to heal
be on my own,finding comfort and safety in my world
battered and scarred im still a fragile girl
knowing that your soul existance is only to be sacrificed
with much persistance,someday it will be
that I will be found and set free....

< Message edited by angelique1018 -- 10/4/2005 8:06:58 AM >

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RE: Misplaced........ - 10/10/2005 10:47:55 AM

CelticPrince

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angelique,

your portrayal of D misuse is all to often true an comes from jumping before looking.

I do not make light of your words, as in fact it makes me angry that you found yourself on the wrong end of a D pretender. Step back and jearn girl, a geniune D is just as hard to come by as the same on the s side of the slash.

CP

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RE: Misplaced........ - 10/10/2005 11:34:19 AM

angelique1018

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Your comment's are so true but the Man i refer to in this poem is just a simple vanilla. there's more to it but this isn't the place....again Thank You...

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