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Finding Myself......... - 10/5/2005 9:21:47 AM

angelique1018

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Finding Myself......

clock tick's, day's go by
i stand still,held prisoner
again'st my will,not by choice
i had no voice,it was decided
they all united,again'st me
i had no power, i could not flee
i cried for help,pushed aside
set on a shelf,i was not heard
not even a word,they did not care
they saw my fear,i cried many tear's
over the year's,nothing changed
they would become more enraged
swallowing me whole,they marked my soul
branded for life,blood stain's on the knife
left behind, memories invading my mind
an exaggeration of my imagination
not even close,left to decompose
dying inside,nowhere left to hide
medication,just another form of sedation
why didn't they hear me,they held the key
that would set me free,left in a cage
sitting center stage,they laughed and hollared
although never colarred,my soul chained
left with guilt and blame,feeling's of shame
i sit and cry,alway's wonder why
so many question's along with learned lesson's
i was chosen for a reason,like all season's
here today, gone tomorrow,leaving behind all my sorrow
another poem another day
in the shadow's i will not stay
someday, somehow, somewhere
i'll come into the light and lose my fear.........

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RE: Finding Myself......... - 10/5/2005 5:03:42 PM

lypiphera0

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thats beautiful angelique mirrors some of my thoughts over the past few years

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we all make our own choices so be smart and make the hard one

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RE: Finding Myself......... - 10/6/2005 6:37:52 AM

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Im glad that someone can understand my writing's. They can be complicated but a window into my soul. They reveal sides of me that if not through my writing would never be heard..again Thank you

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RE: Finding Myself......... - 10/10/2005 10:29:06 AM

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angelique,

there is a depth to your writing that touches the mind and soul. It makes one reflect not only on the writer but on themselves also.

kep them coming.

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RE: Finding Myself......... - 10/10/2005 10:47:37 AM

angelique1018

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Thank you for taking the time to read my writing. You had said you were going to do so, and you did. I hope you have enjoyed my thought's although they can sometime's be complicated , but they come from deep within me. Most i probably would never think out loud...again Thank You. <soft smile>

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