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RE: Survival - 11/30/2009 3:45:00 PM   
Ellise56


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The steps get closer, my heart quickens with each step. I turn to face you Vic, and you’re alone. Thank God. I don’t think I could take anymore of that creature. “I have some news for you bitch, remember Josh? He’s bi, know what that means?” He waited for my reply. “No” I say in a whisper. “That means Josh likes to dominate woman and be dominated by men.” he pulls out a gun and points at me, I welcome death by now. The shot never comes. Instead you walk off, knowing this is part of his mental torture. Damn that Josh, I hope he gets AIDS. After all he did to me deserve it. Days… I have been alone, shaping the flat rock into a makeshift spade. I keep hearing them walking around or I think it’s them so I stop, cover it with leaves, the once beautiful fall leaves

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RE: Survival - 12/7/2009 11:58:27 AM   
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I have became obsessed with escaping, I only eat when I have to, berries that is all nothing more, I feel weak, the water from the little creek (that is a good ways away), and is murky, it can not be good for me .so I pry myself away from my escape I cover my hole with leaf cover that made with leaves and tied off at the ends with vines and cover it with a batch of real leaves. make my way off to the creek I come back as the sun goes down to find that you both are waiting on me I freeze, I drop the bottle that I have stole from the garbage can at night long after you demons are asleep.  I go to take a step then I feel pain instantly, the electricity moves through my body, then everything goes dark. I awake with my hands and feet tied (my hands are tied to my feet behind me I am on my side, blindfolded. “I do hope you enjoy starving to death” Josh laughs at me I hear y’all walk away the laughter still echoing in my head.  I wait for a while, finally I able to get into a kneeling position and move to my makeshift knife I grab the knife with my hands and try to move the knife but my wrist wouldn’t let me move without my feet which caused the knife to be knocked out of my hands by my feet. I put the knife side ways between my feet and begin to rock back and forth after hours of this  I feel the rope snaps , I don’t  know what time it is I still fight though the sleep depravation, as well as thought the cotton mouth . I keep working I once again (after a while) I hear the next snap my left wrist free. I use it to cut next rope faster then I feel the pressure of the third and final rope fall lax. I remove the blindfold its night I search for my bottle, lucky for me the bastards didn’t move me I drink the bottle empty, I start back to work on my hole.  I am finally able to fit thought the hole; I see the rode but can not go on to it. I walk in the woods and keep walking until I can’t walk any longer, I pass out, when I wake it is mid day I wake and run as fast as I can I come to a house it’s empty apparently no one is home. I knock out a small window and run into the house grab a dress and a pair of shoes and dash back out, I keep walking. Days I’ve walking and running until I pass out I don’t know where I am going nor do I know where I was to begin with, I see a sign, Welcome to Tassamilla. I keep running I go into the nearest shop and ask for the kind old lady behind the counter to tell me who the Chef of Police is, she tells me the offices name is James Coffinfield. I then ask her to call him for me; she does and asks if I am ok, I say yes lying of course. When the cops finally get there I tell them my whole story and descriptions of everyone I came in contact with , they tell me that I am one county over and know Cope. after I recount his appearance and what he did to me in detail including some identifiable markers, they call my family to come and pick me up, I am over two hours away, while I wait I see them bring in  Satan’s son  they look at me and then to each other “ You said the bitch would die!” Josh screams to you “I thought she would” he says with a cool chill to voice.  I hear my name being called I turn to see my whole family coming at me an alarming rate now, I know that I am safe or so I think.

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RE: Survival - 12/7/2009 12:01:45 PM   
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Ok everyone that is it , i may re post the last part i don't know yet.got another story coming sequel that is  Happy Birthday Love!

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RE: Survival - 12/7/2009 2:54:37 PM   
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I have became obsessed with escaping. I only eat when I have to, berries that is all nothing more. I feel weak. The water from the little creek (that is a good ways away) is murky it can not be good for me . So I pry myself away from my escape. I cover my hole with leaf, cover that made with leaves and tied off at the ends with vines and cover it with a batch of real leaves. I make my way off to the creek and come back as the sun goes down to find that you both are waiting for me. I freeze and drop the bottle that I have stole from the garbage can at night long after you demons are asleep.  I go to take a step then I feel pain instantly, the electricity moves through my body, then everything goes dark. I awake with my hands and feet tied (my hands are tied to my feet behind me I am on my side, blindfolded.) “I do hope you enjoy starving to death” Josh laughs at me. I hear y’all walk away the laughter still echoing in my head.  I wait for a while, finally I am able to get into a kneeling position and move to my makeshift knife. I grab the knife with my hands and try to move the knife but my wrist wouldn’t let me move without my feet which caused the knife to be knocked out of my hands by my feet. I put the knife side ways between my feet and begin to rock back and forth. After hours of this I feel the rope snap. I don’t  know what time it is I still fight though the sleep depravation, as well as thought the cotton mouth. I keep working. I once again (after a while) I hear the next snap my left wrist is free. I use it to cut the next rope faster. Then I feel the pressure of the third and final rope fall lax. I remove the blindfold. Its night. I search for my bottle, lucky for me the bastards didn’t move me. I drink the bottle empty and start back to work on my hole.
I am finally able to fit thought the hole. I see the road but can not go on to it. I walk in the woods and keep walking until I can’t walk any longer. I pass out. When I wake it is mid day. I wake and run as fast as I can. I come to a house it’s empty apparently no one is home. I knock out a small window and run into the house grab a dress and a pair of shoes and dash back out. I keep walking. Days I’ve been walking and running until I pass out. I don’t know where I am going nor do I know where I was to begin with. I see a sign, Welcome to Tassamilla. I keep running. I go into the nearest shop and ask for the kind old lady behind the counter to tell me who the Chef of Police is. She tells me the offices name is James Coffinfield. I then ask her to call him for me. She does and asks if I am ok. I say yes lying of course. When the cops finally get there I tell them my whole story and descriptions of everyone I came in contact with. They tell me that I am one county over and know Cope. After I recount his appearance and what he did to me in detail including some identifiable markers, they call my family to come and pick me up. I am over two hours away. While I wait I see them bring in Satan’s sons.  They look at me and then to each other “ You said the bitch would die!” Josh screams to you. “I thought she would” he says with a cool chill to voice.  I hear my name being called. I turn to see my whole family coming at me an alarming rate. I know that I am safe or so I think

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RE: Survival - 12/10/2009 9:21:08 AM   
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All rights reserved to the author anyone using this will be sued. Ellise 

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RE: Survival - 12/11/2009 11:30:26 AM   
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that is it for this one 

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RE: Survival - 12/13/2009 9:35:43 PM   
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I liked it...some of the parts were something I could definitely be open to readjusting and using in real life.  I dont write well but reading gives me ideas and leads me to think of ideas.  Thanks for sharing...

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RE: Survival - 12/14/2009 6:27:53 AM   
Ellise56


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Wow, that was the point,along with an entertaining read. I'm glad your going to use some of the ideas.Ellise

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