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The Cave - 10/27/2009 5:51:25 PM   
Valkyriegirl


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The girl liked to explore the areas just outside the small town, the rocky coast outlining the sea. It was that one night, toward dawn, that she decided to take a walk around the thin edge of the cliffs. She strode gingerly along the edge. There was a kind of fascination watching the waves crash below. One misstep and she would fall to her death. Suddenly there were low voices approaching.
Three young men stood blocking the pathway, looking coldly at the girl. They were all completely naked, save for antler bone necklaces and ear piercings, and thick stripes of red and white paint up and down their torsos. “She’ll do just fine,” the one in the middle said gruffly, and they all approached her. The girl twisted her head backwards but she knew she could not outrun these three strong men. Her eyes were wide as they grabbed her arms and started pulling her towards an opening in the rocks. She struggle and tried to tear away. She screamed at the top of her lungs but they were strong and pulled her into the opening.
The small passageway through the rocks at once opened up to an enormous cavern. The walls were all jagged obsidian stone, with flaming torches in steel brackets casting a dim, wavering glow over the scene. In the background a line of men were pounding on skin drums. In the center of the cave was a stone altar, with shackles bolted in all four corners. The pounding of the drums grew louder.
Boom boom boom
Standing along the walls were twenty men, all standing patiently, their eyes shining. The men who had originally stepped forward. The one in the center spoke. “This is our virgin sacrificial rite, and you have the honor of being our virgin for the evening.”
They shackled her to the stone on her hands and knees, leaving her completely vulnerable to their whims. Cold jagged edges of the altar stone pressed into her knees and elbows. She arched and their eyes gleamed at her naked body. Two dark blue lines were painted vertically on his glistening cheeks.
The first two men gripped her wrists hard, twisting the skin so she cried out in pain, but they pressed them firmly into the shackles, clinking them shut with wide grins. The man who had spoken to her was holding a long, thin bamboo rod, about four feet in length; in effect, a cane. He whipped it through the air, causing the air to crack. Then he drew the cane back and gave a sharp lash to her pussy. The girl gasped sharply and tears came to her eyes. It felt like the cut of a knife. He gave her four quick lashes in succession and she screamed. Grinning, he walked around to her face. With one hand he gripped her hair, pulling her head upwards, and with the cane-wielding hand, brought the cane down below her torso. With a snap he flicked the cane against her right nipple. This time the girl yelped and gazed upward, her eyes pleading with him not to do it. He nodded and flicked back and forth, whipping each of her nipples alternately with the cane. Suddenly he stopped and abruptly snapped the cane in two across his knee. He threw one piece to the man standing beside him and kept the remaining piece to continue lashing her sore nipples. The man took his piece and walked to her behind to whip her pussy, so that she would be forced to withstand the two tortures at the same time. The two men went on for a good long time, amidst the screams and pleadings of their victim, whose tears were streaming down to the stone floor.
The man whipping her pussy could not stand it any more. He gripped her skin with his fingers so hard red marks appeared like veins around her abdomen and thighs. He plunged his cock into her aching pussy and began fucking her. Still wielding the half-cane, he paused, cock half inside her, and stuck the end of the cane into her asshole. He pulled his cock out from her body and this time whipped her pussy like mad, the cane flashing through the air as the girl choked on her screams. Then he threw the cane to the ground, rushed around the altar to her face, and gripped her chin with his hand. He thrust his bulging cock toward her lips, his balls bursting with fresh semen. In a fraction of a second the loads of cum shot into her mouth like gunfire, load after load, swallow after swallow. With her legs spread apart, the second man smiled greedily and strode over to her ass. He very deliberately and slowly took two of his fingers and brought them down to her exposed asshole, and started roughly stroking around the hole. He scratched and pinched the soft flesh around her ass, and when she winced and moaned he got even harder. “Fuck her asshole,” the assistant called to him eagerly. The firestarter stepped in closer, and there was nothing she could do, she lay there vulnerable and unable to move. He grabbed his cock and rubbed the head against her ass, and she knew she was just going to have to take it, right there. Then he took her legs in either hand and shoved his entire cock into her ass with one movement. It felt so tight and ripping, and he started fucking her hard, his hips slamming against her soft skin with rhythmic smacks.
The third man lay face down, his large hard cock sticking straight up in the air. It was huge – eight inches long and twoin diameter. He slid himself underneath the girl, stroking himself. “You’re going to fuck his cock with your asshole and you’re going to have to do it good and hard,” they told her. One of them handed the man the half-cane. “You’ll whip her if she isn’t fucking hard enough,” they said. “Because she has to make you cum using only her asshole.” The girl moaned and brought her ass slowly down, just touching the tip of his enormous head. She tried to sit on it, but it was too large and wouldn’t slide in. With the cane he whipped her ass cheeks hard. “Fuck it!” he snarled. She tried to gyrate her ass over his cock but it would take a lot of pushing to force the huge dick inside of her. He whipped her already bruised and welted ass with the cane so hard she screamed and finally pushed her ass downward with such force that his cock ripped into her hole. But still, only a third of his shaft was in her ass and she didn’t move, but sat there, wide-eyed with pain, the enormous cock plunged up her asshole, the cane raining down around it like rain of fire. She grimaced and cried, and moved her ass up and down, slowly, around his cock. “Unnnngghhh,” she groaned at the tightness of it. “Harder, fuck it harder,” he ordered. With a yell she pumped her ass hard downwards, so the entire cock filled her body. She pumped her body up and down, his cock furiously drilling her asshole. He finally put down the cane as she fucked his dick as hard as he wanted. Finally he came, the cum gushing out of her hole. The fourth man stepped up. With his hand, he noticed that she was wet. He stepped up in front of her. He pulled out his hard cock, and put it near her face. She look at it, and it was perfect. Instinctively she reached out her tongue and licked just under the head. It was so hard and bulging, and her mouth was watering.
The fifth man immediately began fucking her pussy. The remaining five took turns fucking her. Each got to fuck her to completion twice; once for her pussy and once for her asshole. Before they came, they pulled out and blew their loads in her mouth, which she was forced to swallow.
The rest of the men all lined up, jerking themselves, waiting to fill her mouth and body with cum. The warm, sticky jizz was all over her now, glistening across her breasts and streaming down to her bellybutton. The man gripped her jaw, holding it open while yet another man blew his load in and around her tongue. One by one, each of the twenty men pumped her throat full of cum. As she lay there, gagging on liquid, all the men had drained their cocks and stood back in satisfaction. The ritual had been completed. It was then that the original three men undid the shackles, pulled her upright, and dragged her towards the entrance. She stumbled and could barely walk. When they let her go she gripped the rocks for support and looked out into the cold night. This night would have to remain a secret, she told herself as she clumsily scrambled back around the rocky ledge.
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RE: The Cave - 10/28/2009 5:52:55 PM   
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Great job! I quite liked that. 

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