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Goth Girl - 9/4/2004 3:01:25 PM   
Questing4Aldonza


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Goth Girl

The Mylar crinkled loudly as Lonnie clutched his pre-registration bag tight in his fist, moving with a swift purposefulness through the bustling dormitory halls. Rented out as cheap housing for the convention, the building was packed full of gamers who coalesced into little tidepools of collectible card battles, as well as the odd assemblage of old-schoolers who still broke out the rulebooks and dice.

Normally, Lonnie would take his time, ambling along and rubbernecking the various games, perhaps even trying to sit in on a particularly good one, but that day he went straight to his small, stuffy room.

He was flushed and breathing had by the time he shut the door behind him, and not all of it due to the harsh August heat.

He tossed the bag unopened onto a chair and yanked his soft-bodied suitcase from the bed before dropping heavily upon it with a loud squeal of springs. He could feel his heart still hammering away inside his chest. His eyelids fluttered shut and his hand slipped up underneath the waistband of his jeans.

He sighed, and thought back to her.

He’d been waiting in the interminable pre-registration line when it happened. Despite the openness of the convention center’s atrium and a bank ow windows along the wall, the area had a gloomy, closed-in feel, due no doubt in large part to the hot, muggy atmosphere brought about by a couple of hundred sweaty gamers all milling about, waiting their turn.

He was already bored, and his feet were starting to hurt. His cheeks puffed as he blew out a long exasperated breath; and just then he happened to turn his head and see her...

...See them, actually. A gaggle or flight or murder or whatever one called a group of Goth girls. With the rise of W. Wolf Games, their presence had steadily increased at each convention, not that Lonnie would ever have complained. He found them darkly exotic, aloof and enticing, but hopelessly out of his league.

But as they moved by, in a tightly knight formation that made them seem like a living storm cloud, she turned and looked straight back at him; a pale face from a swirling sea of black.

They held each other’s gaze for less than a second, but for Lonnie the experience rocked him, electrified him. She smirked, as if knowing, before turning away and disappearing down the cavernous passageways with her friends. But a scent lingered in the air - like vanilla, only not - and he would swear it was hers, skin cream or soap, he couldn’t say. It teased him the rest of his time in line, and haunted him for the entire bus ride back to campus.

He spent the remainder of the afternoon pleasuring himself, consumed with thoughts of her beautiful, ghostly face, and of the lithe pale body that lay beneath all her severe finery and if she tasted the same as she smelled.

But the one thought that his fevered imagination would never have possibly conjured, would indeed have rejected straight out, was that at the very same moment, in her spacious hotel suite, she lay atop her own bed, her long thin fingers exploring the very unclothed and agitated object of his obsession, all the while dreaming of him.

*

Lonnie returned to the convention center early the next morning, drained, but in high spirits. Like a lot of his fellow conventioneers, he planned on hitting the Great Hall upon its opening for some shopping before spending the rest of the day playing games. After buying an overpriced soda and a hot dog for breakfast, he took up a spot along a wall near the doors to the Hall and sat down on the floor. In all directions felt mats were being laid out on the cold stone floor, decks were taken out of plastic and cardboard cases, shuffled, and laid out in a panoply of intricate designs as people passed the time until the doors swung wide and the Con enjoyed its unofficial start.

Lonnie usually enjoyed watching the spectacle unfold all around him, savoring the knowledge that he was surrounded by other like him, others who wouldn’t laugh or mock and to whom “geek” was something of a badge of honor.

But that morning, not surprisingly, his mind continued to harken back to that beautiful, unattainable Goth girl.

And then a shadow fell upon him, and his ears were filled with the unmistakably cruel sound of girlish snickering.

Lonnie lifted up his head and as he did, his jaw dropped in utter astonishment. The whole pack of them stood just a few feet away, and she stood in the lead, gazing back down at him with a cool bemusement as her compatriots continued to whisper and giggle.

For a moment, he half-wondered if he hadn’t lapsed back into one of his fantasies - the sudden sharp memory of his previous afternoon’s daydreams causing his face to redden all the way up to his hairline from shame.

Her eyes twinkled and her smile grew a bit broader.

“I know what you want,” she said in a even, calm voice that nevertheless seemed to carry throughout the hall, making even the most ardent card monkeys turn their heads and take notice. Lonnie, for his part, suddenly found himself squirming under all the unwelcome attention, praying desperately that it all was just another dream.

“Prove to me that I am right,” she added, reaching down along the blizzard of black lace around her ankles; raising up her skirt just high enough to reveal a severe, Victorian-looking shoe that climbed halfway up her calf.

Lonnie felt a colt jolt of adrenaline shoot throughout his body. Without even fully understanding how or why, he was suddenly crawling forward, much to the vociferous delight of her friends. The smell of her - like vanilla, only not - again flooded his nostrils, making him sway dizzily even on all fours. His face positively glowed crimson and his whole frame shook by the time he reached her feet. Pursing his lips, he planted a single, trembling kiss upon the toe of her shoe.

She said nothing in reply. His mind racing, he extended his tongue and ran it over the old, smooth leather of the vamp and then across the outer welt. He could hear her hum thoughtfully, sounding vaguely satisfied, and she lifted her foot up on its heel, presenting him with the sole. Wincing slightly, he awkwardly twisted his body and craned his neck to get up under her foot, dragging his tongue over the hard, slightly gritty bottom of her elegant shoe, energetic if not entirely enthusiastic.

“Enough,” she said as last, pulling her foot away. He lay there, breathless and stunned at his own responses.

“Stand up,” she said, he voice clearly brooking no argument.

He clambered to his feet and face-to-face the disparity between them was extraordinary. He towered above her, a good head taller than anyone else in her group, and his broad, heaving shoulders would have blocked the lot of them from sight, had there been another person standing behind him.

Now he stared down into her eyes, and yet he still had the same anxious, confused, yet oh-so-eager quality to his expression as before.

She looked up and smiled, a bit more warmly than before. He felt her thrust a piece of paper into his hands.

“There is a drug store across the street. Six blocks due west from here is an adult bookstore that sells sex toys. You will go to both places and purchase all the items on this list,” she said, her clipped tones a bit quieter now, so that only he and her retinue could properly make out the words.

“My room number is at the bottom. You have two hours to make your purchases and return. If you should fail in this...”

Her face suddenly adopted a pouty look, but her eyes never lost their hard clarity.

“I will simply have to find someone else to be my plaything for the weekend.”

“No,” he said, his voice a tight, strained whisper.

Her smile returned and she reached out one pale, cool hand to caress his hot cheek.

“No. I think not. You will come back on time. I have chosen well, I think. I always do.”

She gave his cheek a little pat and spun on her heels, the others wheeling in unison. She paused to glance back over her shoulder and said, sternly, “Two hours.” and departed in another whirl of dark, rustling fabric.

The sound of the paper rattling in has hands cut through his dazed stupor. Looking down, he saw she wrote in a florid, but elegant script.

1: Enema Bag. 2 qt. Minimum.

2: Dildo. 7-9 inches. Minimum.


The list went on. And on.

Over the PA system the Grand Hall was officially declared open, the doors swinging wide to raucous cheers and a smattering of applause.

A cool trickle of sweat tickled the back of his neck and Lonnie sucked in a long, gasping breath before hastily checking his watch.

End of Part 1(?)

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/4/2004 4:55:32 PM   
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A good start :)

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/5/2004 3:21:50 PM   
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Very well done as usual. Please do not stop there...thank you for sharing.

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/7/2004 5:36:30 PM   
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Part Two

Lonnie hustled through the hotel lobby, convinced with a paranoid’s certainty that all eyes were on him. Of course, his alarmingly red face and the way he avoided all eye contact only earned him some genuine stares. He had been this way for the entire, unbearable walk back from the adult bookstore, thinking that everyone he passed on the street knew where he had been, what he had bought and why. Had the clerk not maintained an air of jaded boredom all through ringing up the sale, Lonnie might have chickened out on the spot, spending the rest of the weekend, if not his life, tormented with feelings of cowardice and regret.

He made it into one of the glass-walled elevators that climbed up the open atrium, and to his profound relief, the doors closed before anyone else joined him. His could feel his heart thumping away, and finally away from so many prying, judgmental eyes, he could feel his desire beginning to stir in earnest.

Still, as the doors slid open again and he stepped out into the open corridor that circled round the building and led to her room, he felt another cold wave of fear douse him. He reached her door, balled up his free hand into a fist and raised it to knock. His chest shuddered with each anxious breath.

What if it was all just some cruel, sick prank? What if some kindly old couple answered the door, with him standing there all hard and sweaty with a bag of nasty toys?

But... could he take that chance? Would an opportunity like this ever fall out of the sky again?

Shutting his eyes and biting his lower lip, he rapped his knuckles firmly against the door.

One knock was all it took. The door swung inward and he let out an audible sigh of relief to see her standing there before him, smiling brightly. She had changed out of her busy, lacy gown into a simple black T-shirt, jeans, and a pair of black converse high-tops.

“A half an hour to spare," she said. "Good boy. Come in.”

He moved past her and she shut the door behind him. The sound of the knob mechanism clicking into place sent a shudder up his spine. She slipped around him and took the bag from his nerveless fingers, plopping down onto her bed. He suddenly found himself totally abandoned by his brain, at a loss as to what to say or do, so he just stood there, shivering a bit as the air conditioned air wafted across his perspiration drenched clothing.

“So,” she said, taking the bag from the bookstore out from the bag from the drugstore. “What’s your name?”

“Lonnie.”

She suddenly looked up from the bags. “Lonnie?” she asked, a hint of a snicker in her voice.

His face darkened again, only this time not from guilt or shame or nervousness.

“It was my daddy’s name,” he said, an edge creeping into his voice.

She laughed openly. “Your daddy? Y’all hail from the South, Lonnie?”

“Yeah,” he replied cooly. “I do.”

Her laughter trailed off and she sat up straight on the bed, regarding him seriously for a moment.

“All right then,” she said, smiling. “Just teasing. My name’s Kay.”

She extended her hand to him, and he closed the distance between them to take it.

“Hi,” he said, once again feeling hopelessly dull.

“Hi,” she replied, still beaming.

Dropping her head, Kay resumed her examination of the bags. Lonnie resumed his milling about sheepishly.

“I notice you didn’t buy any condoms,” she said presently.

“You didn’t put them on the list!” he replied, sounding a bit wounded and defensive.

She looked up at him, grinning slyly.

“I know that Lonnie. Still, more often as not a boy picks up a box or two, thinking perhaps I’ve made an omission... or just... hoping.”

Setting the crinkling plastic sack aside, Kay leaned back on the bed, propping herself up on her elbows and slowly lifting her foot. She planted the sole of her shoe squarely into Lonnie’s crotch, pushing against the throbbing hardness straining against his jeans. He gazed back at her, dewy-eyed and moaning softly.

“You are not going to fuck me, Lonnie. Oh, there will be an exchange of energies between us, sexual energies to be sure, but no fucking, can you live with that?”

“Yes,” he whispered softly, his own voice sounding far away and strange in his own ears.

She smiled, grinding her foot harder into his pants. He grit his teeth and shook, fighting the impulse to take a step back. Purring happily, she pulled her foot back and straightened up. Lonnie shuddered, his eyes closing as he sighed.

The soft jangling of chains made him snap his eyes back open again. She had taken to her feet , standing mere inches away. Breathing hard, he looked down into her wide dark eyes. He felt her hands, soft and cool, slide up under his T-shirt, drifting against the warm flesh of his abdomen. He also felt the chain, cold and hard, as she pushed it farther up his torso.

He drew in another hitching breath as her hands reached his chest.

“Ever felt nipple clamps, Lonnie?”

“N..no..” he replied; his voice meek and childlike.

“I hear they hurt like a bitch,” she said.

He whimpered softly, followed quickly by a sharp sucking intake of air and an “AH!”

“Yes,” she whispered softly, watching his face contort and tremble, tears welling at the corners of his eyes as she gave the clamps subtle little twists. “I think this is going to work out quite nicely.”

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/10/2004 4:58:31 PM   
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Part Three

Kay only left the clips on for a minute or so, but she had only just begun to make him suffer. First came the deliciously unexpected spike of pain as she removed them, followed by her slow, cruel massaging the blood back into the crushed flesh.

“Take off your T-shirt and kneel next to the bed,” she said once his whimpering reached a satisfactory crescendo. He did as he was told, still shivering as she went to her suitcase and removed a wicked little whip with many tails.

She approached him with the slow gait of a stalking beast, smiling at the two little spots of cherry-red on his chest. Then she swung her arm, thin knotted leather strips slashing against the already throbbing skin.

“Put your hands on the back of your head,” she commanded coldly, striking his left breast for symmetry. He hissed sharply, but complied. She proceeded to whip him without mercy, the redness spreading wide from his wounded nipples as she scoured his soft pale flesh.

He shut his eyes and grit his teeth but nothing could shut out the pain. His head shook from side to side and his chest felt on fire. Finally, a sound rose up from deep within his gut. It started as a low, piteous moan but as it burst out of him, he found himself forming words in the rush of escaping air.

“Uuuhnnnnppleeease! Pleeease sssstooop!”

She grabbed her wrist with her free hand and held her arms above her head.

“You want me to stop?” she asked, a little out of breath herself.

“Yes!” he sobbed, his chin dropping to his breastbone.

Her arm flew out, the whip striking him one last time. He threw back his head and let out a strangled screech, barely containing a much louder cry, and she smiled, tossing the whip aside. In a blinding quick, fluid motion, she sank to her knees before him. He could feel her warm, excited breathing against the hollow of his throat. Her dark eyes glittered greedily as she watched the tiny beads of blood well up from his raw flesh.

Ducking her head, she began to lick his wounds as he gasped, shuddering violently. Her tongue felt hot and slimy and stung just a little as she lapped up her salty treat. He could feel his own quickened pulse throbbing through his damaged skin, and her heat against it did not feel entirely... bad...

He gulped softly, a faint moan of a different kind passing his lips.

Then she bit him.

His hands flew from the base of his skull, but he caught himself before shoving her away, so his arms flapped at his sides, comical and useless. He made a strangled screeching sound through his clenched teeth as she seemed on the brink of rending his entire right nipple free from his body.

Just when he thought he might have to strike her, or pass out from the pain, she let go, quickly propelling herself to her feet again, before doing a belly-flop onto the bed beside him, kicking her heels back in a deceptively girlish gesture. She hadn’t broken the skin, but the dimples went deep, and an ugly bruise was already beginning to form.

“Oh,” he gasped, sobbing. “Oh, god...”

“Now you know what I’m capable of,” she said matter-of-factly. She tossed her head to the side, and when that failed to work, brushed several long dark strands of hair from her face. She reached over and ran her fingers through his hair with surprising tenderness.

“More importantly, you now know what you are capable of. You should fear the pain, Lonnie, but it is helpful to know that you can take it, if you have to.”

Lonnie merely sniffled miserably.

“It hurts,” he muttered.

Kay threw her head back and laughed. “You think that hurts! Wait until I get done with your ass, bitch!”

His head jerked up to look at her, betrayed and afraid. Kay cooed softly and caressed his cheek.

“You will be able to take that, too,” she said, her voice tender and sincere. “You will even find yourself craving the sensation once this weekend is over. There’s a dirty little slut inside of you, Lonnie, that’s been waiting with baited breath to be ridden hard and put away wet. And once that slut gets a taste of it, I doubt very much you will be able to deprive yourself anymore.”

“How do you know all this about me?” he asked, voicing the question that had haunted Lonnie since the first words she spoke to him.

“It’s what I am, Lonnie. It’s instinctive. I’m a predator.”

His large, guileless eyes blinked.

“And... I’m your prey?”

She laughed softly and smugly, grinning wide. She caressed his face again.

“More than that! You are quite the delicacy, my little slut!”

“Delicacy?” he asked stupidly.

She twisted herself around, finally pulling her small lithe frame into a sitting position. She picked up the bag from the adult bookstore and rummaged through it as she spoke.

“Yes, Lonnie. I shan’t elaborate further. If you know just how valuable a piece of meat you are, your head might swell and then you’d become... difficult. And I don’t wish to have any difficulties this weekend.”

He opened hi mouth, about to ask another question anyway, when she pulled out the green, translucent dildo from the sack.

“Ahhh! How festive! Hoping it would give you minty fresh breath after sucking, Lonnie?”

“I... Suck?”

She hopped off the bed, standing before him as he gazed up at her fretfully.

“That’s right bitch!” she sneered, suddenly slapping him across the cheek with the rubber toy. “Suck!” she said, slapping the other side of his face while her cringed. Smirking, she kept hitting him with the phallus, left and right as she spoke.

“You’re going” Slap! “To take this whole thing” Slap! “All the way down your nasty throat!” Slap!

She stopped beating him, and shoved the head of it into his cheekbone, making him wince. She kept pressing and the shaft bent, and she rubbed the sticky, smell latex all over his face.

“And you better hope you have plenty of spit, bitch, ‘cause you know where it’s going next!”

At that moment, there was a knock at the door connecting Kay’s suit with the next over. She turned her head and toLonnie’s horror, called out cheerfully.

“Come on in!”

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/10/2004 5:13:00 PM   
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Great keep it coming very nicely done! Roe

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/10/2004 10:03:05 PM   
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Indeed! This is very well done so far.

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/11/2004 2:24:43 PM   
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Thanks! The encouragement really does help keep my fingers at the keyboard!

Part Four

It took every ounce of fortitude Lonnie had not to bolt at that moment; to scurry into the bathroom and lock the door behind him, curl up in a ball and wait until the room was clear.

But in the same way that his muscles seemed to lock when Kay was biting his chest, they did so again as the door to the adjacent suite swung open.

Initially, he didn’t recognize the tall blonde that swept into the room. Like Kay, she had removed her gauzy black dress for more sensible day clothes. She took in the scene before her - Lonnie on his knees at Kay’s feet, his chest one angry wound, green dildo still mashed into his contorted face - and a bemused smile crossed her lips.

“Starting a bit early this year, aren’t we?” the blonde asked.

“Can’t help it,” Kay replied, sounding a bit out of breath and excited. “Got lucky right off. This one’s a natural!”

The blonde looked Lonnie over again cooly, raising her eyebrow in a skeptical fashion.

“If you say so,” she replied. “So, I take it then, you’ll be too busy to join us for lunch after all?”

“Don’t be silly,” Kay said, again tossing her head to the side to shake some hair from her face. At last she pulled the dildo away from Lonnie and tossed it aside on the bed.

“He’s here for my amusement, not the other way around! He can wait!” she continued, not casting a single glance back in his direction as she talked about him.

“Good. I’ll just go get the rest of the girls then?”

“Do that. I’ll join you in a minute.”

The blonde nodded, “hmmm”-ing softly as she gave Lonnie another doubtful glance, and then left the room.

As the door clicked shut, Lonnie let out a long, heavy exhalation he hadn’t even realized he was holding in. His face was as red as his chest, from his hairline to his collarbone, and his stomach felt like he was in the midst of doing a dozen zero-G barrel rolls.

Kay turned around and regarded him with an evil glint in her eye. She cleaned over onto the bed and to his dismay, retrieved the dildo.

“Open your mouth, slut,” she whispered huskily.

He suppressed a groan, but did as he was told, his jaw quivering slightly as it forced it swing wide.

She advanced with cruel, calculating slowness, making each second tick by as if it were an hour, the bulbous lime-green head of the rubber cock inching ever closer to his yawning mouth. He suddenly found himself wishing he hadn’t bought one quite so damn big... but then again her instructions had been explicit, and he hadn’t wanted to seem like a wimp by going to the small end of the scale.

She watched his pink tongue twitch and heard the faint wet not-quite-gagging clicking sounds rise up from the back of his throat. He closed his eyes as the vapors that rose off the latex began filling his mouth with it’s taste. The cockhead brushed against his teeth and he shuddered.

Laughing, she pulled the toy away. She gave him one last hard smack across the cheek with it and cast it back onto the bed.

“Later,” she said softly. “When I have the time to violate you right!”

He let out a long shuddery sigh of relief, his chin sinking to his breast as his shoulders sagged.

She walked over to the dresser and opened a drawer, removing a complimentary pad of paper and a pencil.

“Heel!” she said, not looking back.

He quickly pitched forward onto his hands and crawled to her side, panting, though the trip had only been a few feet.

“While I am gone, I want you to write, one hundred times, ‘I am a cock sucking slut puppy.’ Yes?”

He licked his lips and swallowed hard before repeating in a shaky voice, “I am a cock sucking slut puppy.”

“One hundred times.”

He sniffled loudly, but shook his head energetically.

“And while you are writing your lines, slut puppy, I want you to play with yourself with your off hand, but do not cum! Do you understand?”

“Yes!”

She turned slightly towards him and again put her palm against his cheek. He gazed up at her, adoring and helpless, through tear-filled eyes.

“You will have all the time in the world to cum once this weekend is over,” she said softly. “And I promise you, your memories of the next seventy-two hours or so will serve you as stroke material for months, if not years to follow, so be a good boy for me Lonnie, yes?”

“Yes!” he replied breathlessly.

“Promise?”

He shook his head again. “P..promise!”

She smiled down on him beatifically.

“Yes,” she said, moving her hand to ruffle his hair. “And when I get back from lunch I’m going to tie you to the bed, my sweet boy, and beat your ass so terribly you’ll end up begging me to go back to your tits!”

He gasped and whimpered.

“Now start your lines,” she said and turned on her heels and left the room.

He stared at the door longingly for a moment, keenly aware of the beating of his heart, the surge of his pulse through his veins. At last, with a sigh, he took the paper and pencil from the dresser top and set them on the floor, easing into a slightly awkward reclining position that rested on his hip. Slipping his off hand down the waist of his jeans, where he was astonished at just how achingly hard he still was even after so much pain and humiliation, he took up the pencil and began to write...

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/12/2004 12:07:36 PM   
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Your writings are special...sees you going far in your future...good luck.

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/14/2004 5:56:20 PM   
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I really enjoyed your story. I hope you will write more.

Take care :)
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RE: Goth Girl - 9/16/2004 8:50:26 AM   
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Part Four

It didn’t take Lonnie very long at all to complete his assignment. That turned out to be something of a mixed blessing as, even with his “off hand,” he was really beginning to enjoy the self-stimulation.

Finally, with a sigh, he completed his 100th line and set the pencil down, pulling his hand back out of his pants. A quick check of his watch revealed that it wasn’t even noon yet, though the room seemed dark and gloomy without Kay there.

He suddenly had a mental image of Kay and her friends, out at some nice restaurant. He could see them all flocking ‘round the table, laughing uproariously as the blonde regaled them with the story of the pathetic horny fool Kay had cooped up back at her hotel room. He felt his heart plummet into his gut with fresh each gale of imagined laughter, his cheeks burned and fresh tears welled up in his eyes.

On the other hand, he reasoned, maybe it wasn’t so bad if they didn’t understand, if they weren’t into it. Enduring Kay’s brand of ardor was already threatening to overwhelm him, all of them at once...

He had another sudden mental flash of Orpheus being confronted by the Bacchante. He pulled his knees up to his wounded chest and sat there, shuddering.

Gradually, as long minutes passed all the adrenaline that the morning’s excitement had generated began to wear off; a wave of exhaustion swept over him. His eyelids fluttered shut, and he drifted off into a deep, dreamless sleep.

Two hours later, she found him that way, still curled up in a ball by the dresser, senseless to the world. Rather than becoming angry, she smiled sweetly at the sight. It was part of what charmed her about him, the contradictory elements of his nature: perverted naif, innocent slut.

Even so, she only allowed him another few moment’s rest before jabbing the toe of her sneaker unceremoniously into his ribs. He woke with a start and looked up at her with panic and despair in his eyes.

“I’m sorry,” he stammered. “I...I didn’t mean to...”

“Be quiet,” she said, forcing her voice to sound stern when she really wanted to giggle. She took the piece of paper from the dresser and paused briefly to examine it.

“You numbered them?” she asked, raising an eyebrow.

“I... I... You didn’t say...” his words trailed off into a piteous, hopeless moan and his head dropped, unable to bear her gaze any longer.

She sighed wistfully and set the page aside. Squatting a bit to reach his level, she once again extended her hand and gently touched his face.

“I didn’t, but it was very thoughtful for you to do,” she said softly. He turned his head back to face her, cheeks pink, eyes still watery. “It will make it easier for me to check.”

He sniffled feebly and she let him see her smile.

“Get up,” she said, her voice still soothing as she rose herself. “Stand up.”

He did as he was told and without another word, she planted herself in front of him, unbuckled his belt, and had his jeans around his ankles. His body quaked as he drew in a long, shuddering breath. Kay smiled devilishly, and thrust both hands into his underwear.

He shut his eyes tight and moaned, swaying slightly on suddenly unsteady legs. She made soft, critical murmuring sounds as she squeezed and stroked his hardness.

“It’s a little damp in there,” she said. “But if you’d shot your load it would just be one big gooey mess, now wouldn’t it?”

He made a sort of gibbering, whimpering sound of agreement.

She chuckled softly and tried to shake her hair from her face with a toss of her head.

“Yeah,” she said, “a big gooey mess! You must be soooo horny after all this so far, aren’t you, slut puppy?”

“Y..yesss.”

Her hand suddenly went rigid, not clamping down tightly enough to hurt, but enough to get a startled yelp out of him.

“Do you really think I give a shit about how horny you’re getting, slut?” she hissed.

His head lolled and he moaned, still swooning, but suddenly he eyes snapped open and a curious expression crossed his face, his mouth forming a wondrous “O.” He looked down at her, as if seeing her for the very first time.

“Yes,” he said softly. “I think you care very much.”

It was her turn to shudder, but she held his gaze, and his cock for a moment longer as her face took on a deliberately blank, unreadable aspect.

Finally, with a tender sigh, she withdrew her hands and once again gave his warm, red cheeks an affectionate caress.

“Don’t learn too fast,” she whispered. “Half the fun is in the teaching.”

Then she turned away and the moment ended. She went to her bags and started unzipping one, calling out over her shoulder, “Remove the rest of your clothes and lie face down on the bed.”

Lonnie was rather less eager to move on from the moment, but after just a second’s hesitation, where he stared after her longingly, he did as Kay had asked.

“No, no” she said as she turned around, rough-looking rope dangling from her hand. “Lie across it the other way, sideways... yes... that’s it.”

Lonnie crawled around over the mattress and Kay soon tied his left wrist and ankle to the legs at the foot of the bed, and his right side to the legs at the head.

She paced back and forth for a minute, watching the muscles twitch underneath the skin of his shoulders as Lonnie tested the strength on the ropes. When he at last seemed to acquiesce to his bondage, she moved around to the side of the bed.

Lonnie lifted his head just in time to see the black denim slough off her pallid hips. Kay slipped her fingers under the elastic of her purple, satiny panties, and with a wiggle, she had them off as well. His slack-jawed, dumbstruck expression made it easy for her to cram the wadded undergarments into his mouth. He jerked against his restraints, grunting in surprise. Apparently she had found some time herself to masturbate, for the panties were soaking, and tasted richly of her. She sealed in the makeshift gag with several strips of medical tape, another item from her shopping list.

He continued to squirm and grunt, though the flavors flooding his mouth were making his head spin and his will evaporate once again.

She walked away and picked up his jeans, pulling the belt free with a loud zip of leather sliding against fabric. Doubling the belt over in her hands, she pulled it taut, the loud snap causing Lonnie to give one last mighty jerk before going still, breath shushing shakily through his nose.

“I did promise you a thrashing,” Kay said, and took up position behind him.

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/16/2004 1:07:10 PM   
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Your little serial is fast becoming one of the things I look for first when coming here.

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/20/2004 4:53:43 PM   
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Just wanted to thank everybody for their compliments. Things have come up that are eating into my writing time. I'll try to at least get Lonnie & Kay through the first night together ASAP

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RE: Goth Girl - 9/20/2004 5:00:44 PM   
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You tease! When I saw you had posted here today I thought it was the next chapter in your story :)

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