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i stare - 3/3/2010 6:21:02 PM

xXone4kneelingXx

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i stare in amazement at what i see, i wonder in my heart could this really be.

i stare at a Dominant walking by, i wonder would He ever make me cry.

i stare in envy of the sub i see, how does she seem so fulfilled, so free...

i stare in loathing thinking "who the hell is she", i cry in sorrow wondering why its not me.

i stare in lust of what she's got, when all i hear in "no" and "not".

i stare at this whore, this cunt, this slut, But all i see is her fine ass butt.

i stare in sorrow as she kneels there, giving herself without a care.

i'm mad i'm pissed but still i stare, what right has she, how does she dare.

As i look once more i begin to see, It's only a mirror and the sub is me........

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RE: i stare - 3/5/2010 3:15:04 PM

candisa

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I like the self-reflection.
Thanks for sharing, and
welcome to the forums

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candisa

Freely we serve, because we freely love, as in our will
To love or not; in this we stand or fall.

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RE: i stare - 3/5/2010 5:51:00 PM

jezzybelle

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I like the perspective of you seeing yourself, enjoyed it very much... good piece of writing

well done
jezzybelle

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RE: i stare - 3/5/2010 6:39:55 PM

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