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You - 3/8/2010 9:13:14 PM

xXone4kneelingXx

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i feel your eyes upon me now,
yes i'm wondering why and how.

i see your hands so big and strong,
and i know it won't be long.

You guide me slowly unto you,
At times i feel i don't have a clue.

How you could want someone like me,
what is it in me you see?

i laugh, i cry, i'm angry too,
i'm overwhelmed, what do i do?

i know it's the best that you seek,
but in my eyes im just a freak.

It is perfection i see in there,
but i'm not perfect, i'm just me.

i wonder how i did not see,
You are the reason that i breathe.......

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RE: You - 3/9/2010 3:47:23 PM

jezzybelle

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A very good write, brings me a sorrowful feeling in a way, one so unsure of how anyone could want her....

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"Come to the edge," He said.
she said, " I am afraid".
"'Come to the edge", He said.
she came...He pushed her...
And They flew.....

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