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Wheldrake -> Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul (3/9/2010 11:56:50 AM)

Steel weighs heavy on the soul.
The collar girded round my neck,
The belt locked tight about my loins,
Are not mere tokens of control:
Their coldness binds my very core,
For steel weighs heavy on the soul.  

A turning key may be a gate.
A half-twist of a woman’s hand,
So gentle and so merciless,
Became the portal to my fate,
Forbidding all thought of return.
A turning key may be a gate.  

Her whisper stings me like a lash.
I leap, obedient to her whim
And lay my body at her feet.
No barked command, however brash
Could spark surrender so profound.
Her whisper stings me like a lash.




jezzybelle -> RE: Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul (3/9/2010 3:45:05 PM)

a very powerful and enjoyable read....




simplyWicked4u -> RE: Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul (3/10/2010 9:06:53 AM)

very well written...hope to read more in the future....




Wheldrake -> RE: Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul (3/10/2010 11:07:01 AM)

Thanks to both of you for the encouragement! I'll try to keep at it.




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