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Vampyr Dominor warning for submissives) - 3/10/2010 6:48:49 AM

bellasubjewel

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I recorded a poem yesterday. This was something I was severely passionate about, what better way to really tell a story about something called Vampyr Dominor. You have to listen to understand why I am passionate about this piece.

http://www.bellaprincessjewel.com/2010/03/vampyr-dominor-audio-poem-warning-to.html

I would love thoughts and feedback.

Thank You

Jewel

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RE: Vampyr Dominor warning for submissives) - 3/10/2010 11:13:39 AM

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I thought the poem was very descriptive, and you have a great reading voice. The music in the background enhanced the mood, but was also perhaps a bit of a distraction from the words.

I don't know how autobiographic, or otherwise, the poem was - but if you did indeed escape a "vampyr", I hope things work out better next time. I'm sure there are lots of dominants out there who will only suck your blood in ways that you appreciate... And by the way, I looked at a couple of the videos on your blog and thought they were very nicely done as well.

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RE: Vampyr Dominor warning for submissives) - 3/10/2010 6:54:18 PM

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@Wheldrake-- I appreciate your honest feedback. Thank you very much for taking a look. I will remember those things the next time I record.

Best of everything,

Jewel

< Message edited by bellasubjewel -- 3/10/2010 6:57:23 PM >

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RE: Vampyr Dominor warning for submissives) - 3/10/2010 7:06:00 PM

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awww...it said page not found....

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RE: Vampyr Dominor warning for submissives) - 3/10/2010 8:49:39 PM

bellasubjewel

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i do not know why it will not go directly. If you go directly to my blog its the first post.

http://www.bellaprincessjewel.com

and i will post the direct post link again

http://www.bellaprincessjewel.com/2010/03/vampyr-dominor-audio-poem-warning-to.html

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