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Are you there sir? - 3/13/2010 1:27:10 AM

xXone4kneelingXx

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Are you there sir?
i am listening,
do i hear u gently whispering

Are you there sir?
do you hear me,
can you tell i need you near me

Are you there sir?
i am lonely,
i submit for you only

Are you there sir?
do you know me,
i just want for you to hold me

Are you there sir?
i am needy,
why must i be so greedy

Are you there sir?
i am empty,
i need your guidance to fulfill me

Are you there sir?
are you looking,
for me sir to be kneeling

Are you there sir?
i am here,
and my promise is sincere....

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RE: Are you there sir? - 3/13/2010 1:30:27 AM

wittynamehere

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I liked it :)

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RE: Are you there sir? - 3/21/2010 10:18:37 AM

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I liked it very much.... nice write

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