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I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 9/14/2004 11:16:02 PM

knees2you

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It was a dark night, about 11:00 p.m.
My car was winding down the curved road. The Fog was thick
and the air was getting thin. Suddenly out of the blue, something
runs across the front of the car. I swerve to miss it, and lose control.
After a couple spins i stop and my car is on the railing.
My Cell phone is dead, my heart is racing wild.
I manage to get out of my car safely. Wondering what I am
going to do, I pause and here the sound of a car approaching.
I wave my hands in front of my car lights. The car stops,
and out pops a Woman about 6'0" tall. She is wearing what appears to
be all black. She says that there is nothing out here for miles,
as She walks over twords me in her Black high heeled boots.
You would have to stay at my place She says, untill the Morning.
I agree, and go with her. We approach what appears to be a
Mansion and the feeling of even more darkness appears.

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RE: I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 9/15/2004 4:06:07 PM

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She leads me into the dark, spacious foyer, her heels clicking on the parquet flooring.

“You look tired and disheveled,” she said, gesturing to the staircase. “The second guestroom on the left has its own bath. Please, refresh yourself and I will have Cook prepare you some nourishment.”

I eagerly climb the winding stairs, hesitantly slipping into the second guestroom on the left. It is elegantly furnished, with the centerpiece of the room its four-poster bed; but as clean as it seems, a faint, dusty, unused smell hangs in the air. Through another door I find a mammoth, clawed-foot tub, and within moments steaming water is filling it and I am eagerly shedding my wet, rumpled clothes.

I soak for what seems like all night, washing away the day’s tension and grime. Time and again my thoughts turn to my mysterious hostess, so beautiful, yet curiously intimidating.

At last, with a sigh, I climb out of the tub and, after a cursory drying, re-enter the bedroom with a towel wrapped around my body. The room has been visited in my absence, and on an end table I find a silver tray set with a piping hot bowl of soup and a glass of wine. I consume both enthusiastically.

I have only just set my spoon aside when I feel the hairs stand up on the back of my neck. Glancing up, I see my hostess filling the doorway, staring down at me with an inscrutable expression.

My face begins to burn and I clutch the ends of the towel tightly.

“I don’t mean to be ungrateful, but...” I begin to say, rising to my feet.

But a funny thing happens as I do. Perhaps I stood too quickly, for my head begins to spin and my knees wobble. I try to say something further, but my words slur togther, and I lurch instinctively towards the bed, only just reaching it as my legs fail. The towel falls away as I plummet, face-up, upon the comforter; reduced to staring blankly at the underside of the canopy as my chest heaves. I try to lift my arms, move my legs, but they lay there, useless.

My thoughts are fuzzy, yet my senses seem as acute as ever. It’s almost as if I am watching events unfold from some other vantage point.

I hear a soft, sinister laugh and I feel the keen edge of her fingernails as she runs them over my soft, exposed skin. Her hand drifts between my open thighs and I try to protest, but the only sound that my paralyzed throat can make is a feeble squeak.

“Yesss...” she whispers huskily, as a cold jolt of fear surges throughout my helpless body.

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RE: I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 9/17/2004 8:00:08 PM

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My body Pulses, heart beating faster and faster.
Her nails are long, Her body tall.
My Head and sences are in tacked, but I can not move my body!
Speaking as I've found is usless.
She picks me up by my hands, and I fall over Her shoulders.
She is a strong Woman, and I can tell she works out.
She drags my lifeless body into a dark room.
She takes my Arms and hands and Shackles them to the wall.
My feet are shackled to the bottom of the wall.
She runs her long nails down the side of my face, leaving deep scratches.
She turns and Whispers I'll be right back, don't go no where.
I watch helplessly as she disappears into the night.

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RE: I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 9/19/2004 7:28:45 AM

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My arms become numb from the shackles, my heart pounding so loud i thought i could hear it echo in the room. As I begin to feel my body relax, i hear the squeaking hinges of the door and jerk my head up to see her standing there, yielding a whip in one hand and a bag in the other. My eyes never leave her stare as she walks slowly towards me...her scent inflaming my nostrils and taking my breath away.

She moves her hand up my thigh, past the hardening that appeared from nowhere, and savagely twists my nipples. As i let out the moan, she quickly releases them and places a blindfold over my eyes. I was in total darkness, yet could see her presence from the air that wafted at every movement. Helpless, excited, i could only await her next move.

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RE: I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 9/28/2004 2:02:30 PM

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"It's been awhile since I had fresh... meat." Her laugh was husky, raising goosebumps all over my skin.

Her lips were firm and cool, her tongue hot and her teeth hard and sharp. I began to wonder if I wasn't being eaten afterall. But, the sensations were like lightening touching down on my skin. Skimming, at times sharply biting, and barely there at all. Time blurred as my body twisted under her tormenting and teasing. She laughed softly at each of my moans. I don't know how long it went on or how much more I could have endured, squirming, desperate, hard, full and ready to burst.

The first crack of the whip jolted me out of my stupor. It blazed a trail of liquid fire down the front of my body, over my hip and thigh. I screamed. My erection forgotten, the pain filled me, consumed me.

"Now, we'll get down to business, little man."

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RE: I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 9/28/2004 5:32:39 PM

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The second crack of the whip across my chest brought screams that I weren't sure my own. The fire from her whip tore through my body and I insticntively jerked to move away. Cruelly, yet lovingly, she ran her soft hand across the welt that had formed.

"This is where you want to be ... this is what you want ... why fight it?", she asked.

"No" .. I started to protest, silenced suddenly by her hand over my mouth.

"Sshhh" .. she cautioned ... save your strength.

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RE: I'll start the story, then people can add on~ - 10/5/2004 9:02:33 PM

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I feel Her long thick fingers and nails reaching into my mouth,
then stretching them down my throat. I start to gag. Then She places Her other hand behind my head, and I stop gaging, and I breath thru my nose. My mind is getting more unclear, and my body is weakening
by the minute. I suddenly pass out. I awake and my body is
tied down to the bed. My butt is raised up and my arms are tied to the side of the bed.

My mind is foggy, along with my eyes, and the air is filled with Her sweet perfume. As my eyes become a little clearer, I see that She is putting on a big black strap on, on Her waist.

If She didn't have my attention before, She really had it now!
She then grabbed a jar of Menthol rub and put it on the head of the dick and comes twords me. She leans twords me and whispers softly.
This will Hurt you more then it will hurt me.

She slowly inserts the strap on, then She Rams it in me. I Scream,
I yell really Loud!! The Burning and stinging was more then I could bare.
I beg for mercy, but She Rams harder, and harder! She is thusting continuosly for three hours. My butt is weak, my legs are like noodles.
She un~hooks me, and my body lies withering on the bed.

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