Yeah, it is a broken terzanelle. Your point? (Full Version)

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iwillserveu -> Yeah, it is a broken terzanelle. Your point? (9/15/2004 11:48:46 AM)

When I saw M’Lady smiled
The world stopped:
I was so beguiled.

All other cares dropped
And I just swam in the depths of her eyes:
The world stopped.

Her eyeys are like the zenith of the skies
When a storm brews in the Northeast.
And I just swam in the depths of her eyes

Instead of stocking up and taping my windows against the beast.
(It is truly a powerful blizzard
When a storm brews in the Northeast.)

(She thinks of herself metaforically as a giant winged lizard
And here I am comparing her to a Noreaster and I just hope she is mollified since
It is truly a powerful blizzard.)

I did not stay on the fence
When I saw M’Lady smiled.
I just hope she is mollified since
I was so beguiled.




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