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RE: Little Emily - 7/3/2010 2:01:45 PM   
easyoutlaw


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everyone on CM that has "little" or "lil" as part of their name is bigger than a truck.

Is little emily huge?

Fonz, you strike me as a chubby chaser.


No, she is not.  She is described in the story as quite diminutive.  The story is named for a member I knew on alt who actually did have "Lil' " as the first part of her name.  The character is based on her.  She is 5'2" tall, has a great body and a ROCKIN' ass.

So, . . . no.

I slammed dunked the last person who called me 'Fonz.'  Do I need to do it to you?

Chubby Chaser?  Well, . . . sometimes.  But only if it's YOUR MAMA!


lol.. heya fonz.. thumbs up


I've decided I love you more than my own life, divi.

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RE: Little Emily - 7/3/2010 2:23:52 PM   
loveydovey


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The essence of the story was well written with a creative eroticsm and i commend the Easyoutlaw or aka "Foniz" for his talent with words. My only critique was that it didnt flow well i had trouble grasping the dialogue differences between act and thought.

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RE: Little Emily - 7/7/2010 8:04:20 PM   
Handler222


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You're a genius.

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RE: Little Emily - 7/8/2010 2:21:02 PM   
divi


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quote:

ORIGINAL: easyoutlaw

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ORIGINAL: divi

quote:

ORIGINAL: easyoutlaw

quote:

ORIGINAL: domiguy

everyone on CM that has "little" or "lil" as part of their name is bigger than a truck.

Is little emily huge?

Fonz, you strike me as a chubby chaser.


No, she is not.  She is described in the story as quite diminutive.  The story is named for a member I knew on alt who actually did have "Lil' " as the first part of her name.  The character is based on her.  She is 5'2" tall, has a great body and a ROCKIN' ass.

So, . . . no.

I slammed dunked the last person who called me 'Fonz.'  Do I need to do it to you?

Chubby Chaser?  Well, . . . sometimes.  But only if it's YOUR MAMA!


lol.. heya fonz.. thumbs up


I've decided I love you more than my own life, divi.



awwww Fonzi!!!  That is sweet!!  I hope you didn't do anything drastic... I would be crushed :(.  What about Pinky Tuscadaro???????

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RE: Little Emily - 7/26/2010 7:32:26 PM   
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I enjoyed your story immensely. I have only begun to browse the postings here, but I have been quite disappointed so far at the abundance of poor grammar and spelling, and the overall lack of structure. I found no issue with your dialogue or flow. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Much Sense- the starkest Madness-
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And handled with a Chain."
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RE: Little Emily - 7/26/2010 11:00:51 PM   
Chrisincuffs


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everyone on CM that has "little" or "lil" as part of their name is bigger than a truck.

Is little emily huge?

Fonz, you strike me as a chubby chaser.


Domi, how about you write a story now? Cuz really, I don't know where you come up with this shit, but ya make me giggle

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RE: Little Emily - 10/20/2010 11:38:28 PM   
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Really enjoyed the story! Maybe we will see more soon!!

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