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girlygurl -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 7:56:04 PM)

I enjoyed your profile (the pictures are very nice). I will admit that I didn't read it. I have ADD when it comes to long posts and long profiles.

I've heard many nice things about you [:)]




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 7:56:32 PM)

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ORIGINAL: Jeffff


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ORIGINAL: ForgetMeKnots

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ORIGINAL: Jeffff


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ORIGINAL: ElizabethAnne

You have 32 paragraphs, and 27 of them start  with "I" or My", the song lyrics are excluded.    Reminds me of a child, I want, I want, I want. ~shrugs~ 

You asked.




I went and re read it. I don't see it like you do. Yes many of them start I and My, but she is often explaining who she is.

That's my take.


Thank you Jeffff! 

*smile*



Hey. it's just a profile. No matter how good or bad it is you are gonna get letters.

You're a chick on a web site.....:)


Hahhahaaaa!

Excellent point!




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 7:58:10 PM)

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ORIGINAL: Missokyst

I haven't read it yet but I would like to make a comment about the "I" and "My". Would you want someone in your life that was so insecure that he.. or she, would feel affronted by coming out and letting people know who you are and what you want?
I never saw you as someone who would be caving into the "this girl" crapola, be yourself and you will attract someone compatible



Gracias Missokyst!

The underlines point makes perfect sense! 




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 7:59:40 PM)

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ORIGINAL: DarlingSavage

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And then perhaps you wouldn't have to ask if comes across snotty.


I don't think you're coming across as someone who is snotty in the least.  I do, however, see you coming across as someone who is insecure.  You don't want to do that. 



Hmmm.

This is a good point. 

Thank you. 




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:01:23 PM)

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ORIGINAL: girlygurl

I enjoyed your profile (the pictures are very nice). I will admit that I didn't read it. I have ADD when it comes to long posts and long profiles.

I've heard many nice things about you [:)]


Aren't you a doll!

*flutters eyelashes*

Whatever have you heard, darling dear?

LOL LOL LOL




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:02:02 PM)

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I just spell checked it...what was misspelled? Nothing came up in red, LOL.....

In your opinion I shouldn't have anything about what I'm looking for in a possible partner? There isn't anything in the "Long Version" about what I'm seeking?


I think that maybe the misspelled words were still words, just the wrong word for what you were saying, kind of like there and their, but I have to go back and read the whole thing to point it out.

As far as what you want in a person, there's nothing wrong with saying what you want, but what is that, exactly?  I would like someone who's a liberal democrat and is politically active.  See what I'm saying?  So far, it looks like you'd be happy with the first person that promised not to leave in their first email to you.  You DO NOT want that!  Let's concentrate on finding the person that is what we want, but in order to find that, we have to figure out exactly what that is, first.




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:06:44 PM)

video game dual
This should be DUEL. 





LadyHibiscus -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:09:19 PM)

DS is so good at this!!




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:10:24 PM)

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ORIGINAL: DarlingSavage

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I just spell checked it...what was misspelled? Nothing came up in red, LOL.....

In your opinion I shouldn't have anything about what I'm looking for in a possible partner? There isn't anything in the "Long Version" about what I'm seeking?


I think that maybe the misspelled words were still words, just the wrong word for what you were saying, kind of like there and their, but I have to go back and read the whole thing to point it out.

As far as what you want in a person, there's nothing wrong with saying what you want, but what is that, exactly?  I would like someone who's a liberal democrat and is politically active.  See what I'm saying?  So far, it looks like you'd be happy with the first person that promised not to leave in their first email to you.  You DO NOT want that!  Let's concentrate on finding the person that is what we want, but in order to find that, we have to figure out exactly what that is, first.



Huh. 

I see your point.




LafayetteLady -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:10:32 PM)

The only thing I would say is to move all the "nots" to the end or try to put a more positive spin on it if you can. I completely understand why they are there, I'm the same way. But I always think of when I look on some dominant's profile and it talks about all the things he doesn't want (or worse comments about the fakes and scammers) before anything else. The first thing that comes to my mind is how negative they are and how I don't want that.

You have an adorable smile, really cool tattoo. I personally don't go for pictures of activities or results of activities, but that is just me. Everyone else loves them, so go for it.

Good luck with the new profile.




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:10:54 PM)

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ORIGINAL: LadyHibiscus

DS is so good at this!!


Thank you for noticing!




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:11:28 PM)

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ORIGINAL: DarlingSavage

video game dual
This should be DUEL. 




Got it, thanks!! 




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:12:18 PM)

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Huh.

I see your point.


I found it and posted it up there.  You had DUAL and it should be DUEL in video game duel.  




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:12:42 PM)

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ORIGINAL: LadyHibiscus

DS is so good at this!!


Heck yes she is!! 




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:13:51 PM)

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ORIGINAL: ForgetMeKnots

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ORIGINAL: LadyHibiscus

DS is so good at this!!


Heck yes she is!! 


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ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:16:21 PM)

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ORIGINAL: LafayetteLady

The only thing I would say is to move all the "nots" to the end or try to put a more positive spin on it if you can. I completely understand why they are there, I'm the same way. But I always think of when I look on some dominant's profile and it talks about all the things he doesn't want (or worse comments about the fakes and scammers) before anything else. The first thing that comes to my mind is how negative they are and how I don't want that.

You have an adorable smile, really cool tattoo. I personally don't go for pictures of activities or results of activities, but that is just me. Everyone else loves them, so go for it.

Good luck with the new profile.


Thank you for taking the time to look!

I see your point, I tend to avoid negative people if at all possible. 




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:19:32 PM)

I looked at my profile, it's perfect and needs no changes.  I continue to be practically perfect in practically every possible way!  




ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:28:23 PM)

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ORIGINAL: DarlingSavage

I looked at my profile, it's perfect and needs no changes.  I continue to be practically perfect in practically every possible way!  


Ok, I love it.





ForgetMeKnots -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 8:46:18 PM)

 
Alright.... how about this re-write:


Short Version:
 
YOU should be:
* Male
* Mostly normal, with a dark side… *smile*
* Between 26-40 years old
* Prepared to meet within the first two weeks of an email, if we click
* Open minded
* Local (within a few hours away)
* Open to attending area munches and events

I
am:
* Getting more active in the community, so come out and say hello. It isn’t scary, I promise.
* Educated and professional.
* A voracious reader of trash novels, a giggler, a beach baby, a *really good* cook, and an amateur erotica writer.
* A frugal fashionista. I adore pseudo-expensive purses, big sunglasses and dangly earrings.
* A total flirt.
* Submissive…I’m looking for someone to inspire that element within me.
* Looking for a total relationship that includes lots and lots of kinky sex.

Long Version:

If he gets my mind, he can do almost anything he wants to my body.

~
It’s true that I am searching for a Dom, but I also lead a full life that I love and “The Search” isn’t all I’m about.

If we’ve met in real life, please feel free to friend request me. I tend to only friend people I’ve met in real life, so pop up and say hello next time you see me! Often, I’ll meet people and forget their names/screen names--- so please don’t feel like I’m ignoring you! Nudge me in the right direction, and I’m sure I’ll remember.

I’m a regular person, really. I have likes and dislikes, family and friends…. I am educated, and a professional. I have a career that I love, plans for an advanced degree and love where I live. I spend a lot of time with books, mostly trashy novels that read like action movies.

I love the beach, though it seems like the longer I live here in Florida, the less amount of time I spend there. I like writing erotica but please don't mention it in public, or I'll blush ten shades of red.

I've started cooking more exotic food and find that I'm pretty good at it! So far, the best thing I've made was either the Indian Chicken or Thai Chicken...if you're good--or really bad?-- maybe I'll share ~wink~

I have an affinity for large sunglasses, big earrings and expensive purses. I like wearing sundresses and heels, and try to as often as possible. I try to eat only organic food, which is more difficult than you may expect. Recently I’ve gotten into yoga, and I think I’m addicted. I love, love, love dark chocolate. Promise me dark chocolate, and I might be yours forever.

My personality has been described by others as effervescent, which I like. Don’t be fooled by my bubbles and giggles, however. Most of the time I’m more intelligent than I let on. However, I am gullible. I admitted it, so now YOU’LL feel guilty if you take advantage!

I love flirting, the quick banter is better than a chess match. Sometimes I win, sometimes I don’t… but it’s always a good time.

I enjoy most types of music, but I’m liking the country that’s out lately more than most. I’m pretty sure Jake Owen could keep me as his pet. ~wink~

I’m technologically impaired, so please don’t challenge me to a video game duel as I will lose horribly and have to watch my character die an awful death.

I’m most definitely a “girly-girl”. I love dressing up and looking pretty. I ~adore~ shoes and boots. I’m trying to be more -gulp- outdoorsy. I don’t know how that’s working, I’ll keep you updated.

I’m happy to meet people for friends, in fact, I love meeting new people and being social. But, I am looking for a partner too....




DarlingSavage -> RE: Would you mind... (7/6/2010 9:12:51 PM)

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I have an affinity for large sunglasses, big earrings and expensive purses.


It's perfect except for this one sentence.  Take this out because you're repeating yourself.  Just keep it up in the Short Version.  Other than this, this is PRACTICALLY PERFECT in PRACTICALLY every POSSIBLE WAY!  It's perfect!  Now go get 'em, tiger!




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