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A True Spanking Tale - 7/26/2010 3:49:41 AM

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Whilst out for the night at a local pub I found an ex girlfriend confessed my suspicions she had been cheating on me. I did the usual thing and basically called her all the names under the sun and we were through. I was furious and she was crying, we made the peace and continued through a useless conversation for the rest of the night. In the end before we left the pub I think I made a comment its a shame I cant just spank you and put it all behind us and start again she replied something to the effect yes it is. We left the pub hoped in my car so drop her back at her parents house. It was about 10ish at night a few people wandering about and a few cars on the road. I took a small detour slammed my brakes on hopped out the car to her surprise then went around opened her door took her hand and just said "Come on" she followed I sat on a low wall just off the road then propelled her across my knee and spanked her over her skirt as she wailed, her skirt was yanked up but it was a style that had poppers down the side so the skirt just came off I continued to spank her not hard and fast but controlled hard single spanks over her petticoat, this with difficulty came up where I was greeted by stockings and suspenders and white panties and a wonderfully red bottom showing through at this point she was shouting "you bastard". The spanking stopped and she was sobbing but not struggling,just laying across my lap. The the situation dawned on me that people were infact walking up and down the street and amazingly just carried on as if nothing was wrong. I helped Heather to her feet,hugged her and she was sobbing but smiling aswell. I pulled my car off the road laid Heather on the back seat and well made up in reality im sure i didn't spank more than twenty times but it seemed to go on forever. From that moment spanking and role-play became part of our life where she yearned to be taken across Sir's knee for a good spanking....until we parted company

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RE: A True Spanking Tale - 7/26/2010 6:58:23 AM

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I'm confused. Is this a post about a person you met from this site?

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RE: A True Spanking Tale - 9/14/2010 11:34:36 PM

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Well, spanking services, you did title it "A True Spanking Tale" so this does lead me to believe that it indeed did happen .I think most in the writing section would mostly post fantasy or day-dream type stuff, but sometimes real life stories aren't bad to draw upon as well, since you can still alter the actual events by putting a different spin on them (Mark Twain did this all the time, with exaggerating almost everything).

Anyway, it was an interesting insight. Oh, but if only all problems could be solved with a spanking. In my life, it really doesn't work that way. True, spankings can work as a release, but usually a spanking will not solve major problems like cheating...I mean, whether this event took place or not, would you always want to solve the more serious problems with just a slap on the behind (equivalent to slap on the wrist really)? Course, if things worked out for you, then I'm happy for you.You must be in Britain or Scotland, b/c you mentioned "pubs" & petticoats, just an observation (even for the south in US, I can't say too many women wear petticoats anymore sadly, I kind of like them in theory, but I guess not very practical in the modern world).

I will say it was in fantasy a sexy thought of how you tried to take control of the situation, by just going about your business, yet finding a time you thought was right for a punishment. I will say, if this incident happened though...two questions spring to my mind. One, why were you still dating an ex for one (or was this just a fantasy of what you wanted to do to an ex, if so, I guess that makes sense)...and two, did you need to find some source of Heather's badness before you could punish her? What I'm saying, is did the cheating give you an excuse to punish her, or would of you prefered she not cheated at all, and done the honorable thing. Lastly, why did you feel the need to call her every name under the sun (wouldn't the spanking have been punishment enough, you'll learn that sometimes actions do speak more loudly than words, especially because you felt the conversation was going nowhere?). Still, this was a decent story (real or fantasy) so I encourage you to use your creativeness a little bit more & delve into this area a bit more.

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RE: A True Spanking Tale - 9/15/2010 1:34:09 PM

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I quite like the long, unpunctuated sentences. I would be tempted to go the whole way with that, and dump all the commas, using only full stops at the end of lines.

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