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The Phone Call - 10/5/2010 7:46:54 AM   

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The phone rang.   I jumped.  Was it him?  Would  
he caress my body with his words again?  I grabbed my phone and quickly  


I could hear something.  What was it?  Rustling  
around.  It was a man.  He cleared his throat a bit.  I looked at the  
caller id.  It WAS him.  But he didn't know his phone was on.  He must  
have accidentally hit the right button.  I could hear his every move.   
He began to whistle.  I smiled.  I felt like I was eaves dropping, and I  
liked it.  That voyeuristic feeling is so erotic. 

He was driving.  No radio, no conversation, just  
the sound of his car and his whistling.  I wonder what he drives.  The  
engine stops.  A car door opens. 

'Hello.'  He says in his familiar, deep, sexual  

late.'  It was a woman.  Was it his wife?  Was it a girlfriend?  I  
imagined what she would look like. 

'I'll make it up to you.'  I imagine a sly grin  
to go along with that sultry, smoky voice of his. 

The engine hums and the car begins to move, down  
a highway perhaps, or a busy city street.  I don't hear any other  

sit and listen to a bit of small talk between them, still not sure who  
she is.  His voice begins to soften and hers turns to a whisper.  A  
twinge of jealousy begins inside my stomach but is quickly turned to a  
feeling of arousal. 

I hear a zipper and he sighs deeply.  The engine  
revs up momentarily before continuing its steady pace. 

'Oh yea.' his voice was like silk.  She was  
pleasing him.  I was listening.  It increased my arousal.  I needed to  
listen.  It was an addiction I could never let go of.  He was an  
addiction.  I listened.  I heard her engulfing his cock into her mouth.   
I heard him loving every thing she gave him.  My fingers traced the  
bottom of my skirt and then slowly found their way up my thigh and into  
my panties.  Hooking the sides, I pulled them over and began to pleasure  
myself as I listened to them over the phone.

His breathing became labored.  Her motions sped  
up.  I could hear the noises of her mouth sucking him.  The wetness, the  
need, the desire to drink him.  I felt it.  She had to also. 

My fingers maneuvered inside and out as my  
breathing also became labored.  I could feel the height of my arousal so  
very close. 

listened intently, waiting for him to explode inside her mouth.  Every  
moan from his lips penetrated me.  Every word he muttered 'oh yea, suck  
it.' caused electricity to wave through my body.  I knew he was close.  I  
needed to hear him cum.  I felt so very close also.  I needed to cum. 

His primal yell and gags from her throat told me  
just how intense it was.  Imagining he grabbed her head and thrust into  
her was all it took for me.  The waves of pleasure grabbed at me and my  
orgasm overtook me.  I let out an involuntary yelp as it seized me and  
rode the wave until my body eased it's way back down to reality. 

My phone was lying next to me and I picked it  

'Hello???  Who  
is there???'  his voice was much sharper now.  I realized I was too loud  
and he discovered his phone to be on.  I merely kissed the phone,   
breathed a 'thank you' and hung up with
a smile.
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RE: The Phone Call - 10/8/2010 9:04:41 PM   

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Nice erotic suspense!



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RE: The Phone Call - 10/11/2010 9:32:19 AM   

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Thank you.

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RE: The Phone Call - 10/11/2010 9:32:16 PM   

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I really like that little tale.

The premise is a simple juxtaposition of accidental dialing and oral sex, two common things combined to make an uncommon one.  The fact that there is no jealousy makes for a very gentle read.  A conflict that doesn't happen.

The pace is languid, which fits the theme.  Sex should be slowed and enjoyed.  I've never liked the staccato pace of bad erotica.

The conclusion, when he is jolted aware by the sound of her orgasm is again a conflict that simply doesn't happen.  The "thank you" is a sweet way to close the story simply.


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RE: The Phone Call - 10/15/2010 12:32:49 PM   

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I concur....great story! Short & sweet, making me want more!

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RE: The Phone Call - 10/15/2010 1:00:23 PM   

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A story so easily realised


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RE: The Phone Call - 10/15/2010 4:18:23 PM   

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Very nicely written. well done

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RE: The Phone Call - 10/24/2010 8:58:55 PM   

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well written!  I could visualize the events on both sides of the phone!

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RE: The Phone Call - 12/10/2010 7:58:41 AM   

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well thank you everyone
i enjoy your feedback

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RE: The Phone Call - 12/15/2010 4:19:37 PM   

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I liked it.

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