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Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The Gun? - 11/14/2010 2:44:00 PM   
subrob1967


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Chapter 35

We arrive in my suite and Ed follows me out on the balcony.

"Do you smoke, Ed?"

"I did in High School, trying to be cool. But I quit when I decided to cook for a living. Smoking screws up the palette."

"Well, we do smoke, but not in the house, so I hope it doesn't bother you."

"Not at all, but thank you for asking."

I light up a cigarette and Ed watches me with keen interest,

"What? I ask, noticing the look on his face.

"It's just that I've never seen anyone smoke such a long cigarette before."

"And?"

"I dunno, it's... Elegant I guess. You make it look classy somehow."

"Interesting. Be a dear and open the wine please, I'll be along in a moment."

"Miss Amanda, I don't see a cork screw, or glasses." Ed calls out.

I curse myself for forgetting to request them when I ordered breakfast.

"Ed, call down and order a bottle of 2003 Ramey Cabernet Sauvignon, a corkscrew, and four glasses please."

"Um, A..Miss Amanda, that's a $300 bottle of wine, are you sure?"

"Edward, are you going question me every time I spend some of Susan Madison's billions? Now do as I say."

"Ok Miss Amanda, I'm sorry."

I quickly call Jen on my cell, and ask her if she listened in to our dinner conversation.

"Oh yes, Mistress Tease...Can I buy a pair of your panties?" Jennifer mocks. "You are one hell of a tail spinner, I almost believed you."

"Give me thirty minutes, then barge in ok?"

"Yes Mistress Tease!" Jennifer giggles and hangs up.

I enter the suite and tell Ed to make himself comfortable while I head to the bathroom. I brush my teeth, check my make up, and freshen up my lipstick.

I exit the bath, and excuses himself to use the bathroom.

While he's in there, I grab the lingerie, and breast forms I bought for Ed and bring it out into the suite's main room.

Ed exits the bathroom and I meet him half way across the suite.

He's still wearing his suit coat, and tie, so I intercept him.

"I believe I told you to make yourself comfortable." I reach up and grab his tie and pull his lips down to mine.

"I ah, I am, Miss Amanda."

I untie his tie and start unbuttoning his shirt. "Edward, keeping your coat and tie on is not my idea of comfortable. Remove them, now! Please."

Ed gulps and slowly takes his coat off. I take it from him, and lead him over to the sofa.

"Room service," follows a knock on the door, and I call out, "one moment, please."

I hand Ed a small gift bag and say, "go in the bedroom and put these on."

I hand him the bag, and he just stands there looking dumb.

"Now, Edward." I bark, and he practically runs to the bedroom.

I answer the door and collect the wine, glasses, and corkscrew. I open the wine to let it breathe. I check my watch and see I have twelve minutes before Jen busts in.

I remove my dress, but continue to wear my lingerie. I switch on the camcorder I have hidden in among the floral arrangement on the table across from the sofa.

"Edward, you promised to show me your panties. I'm waiting! Leave your pants and shirt in there."

"Um just a moment please. I'm kinda nervous here."

"Come have a glass of wine, and do relax. I'm a friend, you have nothing to be nervous about."

"Ok, please don't laugh at me."

"Edward, I'd never do that. You have my word."

Ed enters the main room wearing the Hollywood Exxtreme purple Satin & Lace Garter Belt, black Scallop Lace-Top Stockings, and his pink Embroidered Satin Bikini, and his t shirt.

"Oh, Edward, other than the shirt, I am very pleased. I am so happy you're shaved." I walk up to him, and pull his shirt over his head.

He can't take his eyes off my body, so I smile, take his hand and lead him to the couch.

I push him onto the couch and kneel in his lap. His eyes are staring at my bra encased tits, and he's got this slack jawed look on his face.

"Do you like what you see?" I say in a low sexy voice.

Ed nods, keeping his eyes on my tits.

I lean in and start kissing him, nibbling on his ear (which are pierced I see.) His hands reach up and start caressing my tits.

"Edward, that's a naughty girl. Since you can't keep your hands to yourself, I'm afraid I'm going to have to tie you up."

I can feel his cock harden at my words. I reach into a bag Jennifer left for me, and pull out a bundle of Shibari soft rope in purple. (Jennifer, of course.)

I tie his wrists together, and stand up. His breathing is coming hard and heavy, as I step behind the couch.

I force his arms up and over his head, then bend them down, so his elbows are next to his ears, and his hands are below the back of the couch.

I take the rope and tie it off to the leg of the couch, and slide the remainder under the couch, and out between his legs.

"Mistress, may I?"

"Shush slave, you must not call me Mistress. You will call me Miss, got it?"

He nods, so I say, "you may speak slave."

"Miss, will you give me a make over?"

"Maybe slave, but you'll have to beg me nicely. We have all night long to play." I lean in and kiss his neck. "Now let's see what else we have here."

"Oh, the very thing I was looking for."
I pull out a collapsible spreader bar with a leather cuff on each end. I open it to it's three foot length, and secure Ed's ankles in the cuffs.

I take the rope, and secure it to an eye bolt in the center of the bar, immobilizing Ed's legs.

I stand up and look down at Ed. "There we are, nice and helpless, aren't you, slut?"

Ed nods, he seems to be having a hard time swallowing and speaking.

"Hmm, something's missing." I snap my finger and say, "lipstick! Every slut needs her lipstick, right?"

Ed nods vigorously, so I head to my make up case and grab a tube of Red Fever, and a red lip liner pencil.

I look at my watch, six minutes, perfect. I walk back over to my helpless victim and climb into his lap.

"So, bitch, are you ready for your lipstick?"

Ed nods again.

"No, bitch, you have to ask me nicely."

"Miss Amanda, may I wear some lipstick please."

"You may." I say with a smile. I quickly line his lips, and apply a coat. I hold up a tissue and order him to press.

I apply a second coat, and pat his cheek. "There you go, my pretty little bitch. Now, aren't you glad you didn't stand me up?"

"Oh yes Miss, this is a dream come true for me."

"Well, you didn't stand me up, but I most certainly stood you up! Now what should I do about that ugly bulge, in your pretty pink panties?"

I lean down and whisper in his left ear, "do you think if I rubbed it, it will go away?"

He nods.

I switch to his right ear and say, "how about if I kiss it, will it go away faster?" I lean in and lick his ear and neck, and he jumps.

"Yes Miss, please kiss it."

I slowly kneel down an rip off his panties. "Oops, I'm sorry slave, I guess I'll have to replace those for you.

Ed's breathing too hard to respond.

I examine his cock, it's 8" long, and pretty thick. The tip is glistening with pre cum.

"Now, your a clean slut, aren't you, slave? We don't need a condom, do we?"

"No, Miss, I've been celibate for two years. I swear I'm clean."

"Ok slave, but if you're lying to me, and I catch something...."

"I swear to God, Miss, I've only been with one other, and we were virgins."

"That's sweet slave."

I lick the pre cum off the tip and he moans in pleasure.

I look up at him and say, "you must beg for permission to cum, understand, you dirty girl?"

"Yes Miss."

I take his cock deep, as he's writhing in seconds.

"Oh slave, your clitty tastes so good, would you like me to continue?"

His eyes are squeezed shut, and he nods vigorously. I start bobbing up and down, and teasing his balls with my nails.

The door to the Suite bursts open and Jennifer calls out, "Hey Amanda, guess who...What the he'll is this?"

I look up and say, nonchalantly, "hey Jen, please close the door, you remember Ed, don't you?"

Ed looks absolutely mortified staring at Jennifer.

"I thought you had a date tonight?"

"He chickened out, so I came to see if you wanted to go out."

"Ed, relax dear, Jennifer's cool, right Jen?"

"Is he wearing stockings, and red lipstick? And why are you sucking his cock?"

"Jen, be nice, he's wearing them because I asked him to, and to answer your second question, a girl can't live on Vag alone. Sometimes she's gotta eat some meat."

"Well, ok then, but that color is all wrong on her, you should know better."

"Is that it, or would you like to join us for some fun, now that Foghorn stood you up."

Ed squeaks, "Uh, Miss Amanda?"

Jennifer snaps, "quiet slave, can't you see us girls are talking here? Don't make me gag you."

Ed's cock, which was going soft when Jen burst it, grows rock hard again, at the tone of her voice.

"So, you wanna join us, or what?"

"Only if I can share that cock with you.  Unzip me, lover."

I stand up and Ed's cock twitches uncontrollably as we French kiss. I Unzip her dress and kneel on the couch and say, "you don't mind if Miss Jennifer joins us, do you slave?"

Jennifer steps out of her dress, showing off her magnificent black lingerie clad body.

Ed stutters, "Nnno Miss Amanda." His eyes never leave Jen's hot body.

"Oh my, I do believe you're overheating our toy. Miss Jennifer, please fetch a cool wash cloth for the slave.

Ed follows her every movement, until I slap his face, hard. "Hey slave, remember me? I'm still here, you know?"

"I'm so sorry Miss Amanda, but I think I've died and gone to the Penthouse Forum Heaven."

"Yeah, she has that affect on me too, but just wait until you meet Susan, you ain't seen nothing yet."

"But, for that last bit of disrespect, I believe I have to blindfold you."

Jen returns and hands me the cloth, as I wipe his forehead. I reach into my bag, and grab the blindfold. I slide it over his eye's and stand up.

"Hey Miss Jennifer, lets slip into something less revealing, I'm afraid our slave is getting too excited by our magnificent bodies."

"No Miss Amanda, please! I'm blinded now. There's no need to get dressed."

I grab his balls and squeeze out a yelp. "Slave, we give the orders, you obey, understand?"

"Miss Jennifer, care to join me in the bedroom, our toy isn't going anywhere, are you, slut?"

No Miss Amanda."

We walk into the bedroom giggling, as Ed squirms, all bound and helpless.

We quickly remove our bra's and slip into the dresses I bought at Syren.

I have the Crossover Dress in hot pink, and my new 4 Inch Knee High Lace Up Boots in pink. Jennifer wears the Strapless Ruffle Dress in red, and her Brian Atwood Dickinson leather boots. We put our hair in top knot ponytails, and damn we look good!

We exit the bedroom and move the table with the camcorder up close, and walk up behind our bound victim.

I lean down and start licking his left ear, while Jennifer does the same to his right.

I say in a low sexy voice, "are you ready for the night of your life, slave?" Just loud enough for the camcorder to "hear."

Ed whispers back, "oh God yes, Miss Amanda!"

Jennifer then says in a tone that oozes sex, "do you swear to obey our every command, no matter what it is, without question?"

"Yes Miss Jennifer!"

"Say, I swear, slave."

"I swear Miss Jennifer.."

I continue, "Edward, are you sure you want to be our slave? You cannot change your mind once we start down this road. I can promise you, we will not permanently damage you, but you will be hurt,  humbled, and humiliated at times. Do you understand, and agree? Now take a few moments to think it over, we'll be right back."

Jennifer and I each French kiss him, and step out onto the balcony for a cigarette.

We finish our cigarettes and step inside. We spritz on perfume, and use mouth wash before returning to Ed.

I untie him and free his ankles, while Jennifer stands behind him, pressing down on his shoulders to pin him in place.

I stand up and Jennifer joins me before I say, "Edward, please stand up and remove your blindfold."

Ed stands up and takes his blindfold off. His eyes go wide, and he swallows audibly. He looks me up and down, then Jennifer.

I'm secretly pleased when his eyes return to my tits.

"Oh wow! I uh, I um, holy shit! You guys look unbelievable!"

We both giggle at the guy comment.

"Edward, have you though about it?"

He can only nod.

"Edward, we need to hear you say it, loud and clear. Now if you agree to become our slave, get down on your knees, face down, and say, Ladies, I agree to become your slave. Then kiss each of our boots." Jennifer says.

Ed drops down, says the words in a clear audible voice, and kisses each of our boots.

"Please stand now, thank you. Now have a seat, it's time for your reward."

I kneel next to him on the sofa, and start kissing him. He gives a jerk, and I look down to see Jennifer sucking his cock."

"Save me some, lover." I say and start kissing Ed again.

As I'm kissing him, I reach into the bag and pull out the nipple clamps.

Ed is really moaning and squirming as Jennifer works her magic.

I start teasing his nipples, pinching and nibbling on them, until they're hard. I clamp each nipple, bringing out a yelp from Ed.

"Aw, what's the matter slave, do your pathetic little boy nipples hurt? You need big beautiful nipples, like mine."

Ed's too into the throes of passion to respond, so I slide to the floor and take over for Jennifer.

She climbs onto the couch and starts kissing Ed, as she plays with the chain between the nipple clamps.. His eyes are glazed over, and he's already deep into subspace.

I feel him start to stiffen, and tap Jen's leg. She gives a sharp tug on the clamps, ripping them off, and Ed explodes in my mouth.

Jennifer joins me on her knees, and sucks Ed clean, as I stand up and snowball Ed.

His eyes pop open wide, and he struggles a bit, but I have a firm hold on his head, and jam my tongue firmly down his throat, forcing him to swallow his load.

Jennifer stands up and say's "Miss Amanda, I do believe our slave came without permission, whatever shall we do?"

"I think our slave needs a spanking, don't you?"

"Hell yes, he must learn to obey commands."

"Miss Jennifer, will you be so kind and grab a towel and drape it over the arm of the sofa?"

"Of course, lover. be right back."

I look at Ed and snap my finger, and point at my feet. He jumps up and kneels at my feet.

I squat down and look him in the eyes. I can see the adoration there as I say,

"Now, aren't you glad you came?"

"Oh yeah, this is better than I ever imagined, thank you so much for this, I don't know how I can ever repay you."

"You have a lifetime to try, so I expect, no, demand your best every day!"

He looks confused.

"Oh Edward, please don't tell me you thought this was a one night fling."

"I, ah, you mean you're serious about this being permanent? You really want to have a relationship with me?" his voice raises and I hear the hopefulness there.

"Edward, have I ever given you the impression that I was playing with you? Why can't you accept that I like you? This is serious, if you can't accept this, I need to know right now."

"I ah, shit, I don't know what to say. I really need a smoke, would that be ok?"

"Ok Ed, wait here for a second, I'll be right back."

I go to the bedroom and grab the red Long Satin Robe I bought for him and return.

"Stand up, sweetheart, this is for you, put it on and we'll step outside."

Jen comes out of the bathroom and raises her brow, I tilt my head and she follows us outside.

I hand him a cigarette and explain Susan's smoking etiquette. Jennifer and I light up, and I explain to Jennifer what's going on.

She and I step to the other side of the balcony, and talk quietly.

"I think it's time to call Mistress. We're in uncharted territory. On one hand she gave us the job to choose, but she demanded final say. Let me go call her and ask how far we're allowed to go."

"I'll upload the video, and await her response."

"Ok, I'll tone it back, and concentrate on getting him dressed, use my laptop in the bedroom, and join us when Mistress advises us."

Jennifer hands me her Virginia Slim to stub out, and heads inside to contact Susan.

I join Ed as he finishes his cigarette. I stub both of mine out and explain that Jennifer had to take care of some business, and she would return shortly.

"So Edward, this is your last opportunity, what shall it be, are you our slave, or are you ready to call it a night, and go back to playing WoW?

"Amanda, I really need to know how serious you are, I think I'd love what you're offering, but I'm afraid that you'll play at this for a few days, then move on."

"You know Ed, I actually understand, and respect your concern. Let me show you something."

"Ok."

"Help me lift my dress, I want you to see my tramp stamp."

I turn my back to him, and he helps me peel my dress up to expose my ass hat.

"Ah, is this real, or a temp?"

"What do you think?"

"Woah, this says Jennifer is your Domme! Is this for real?"

"As real as it gets, I have been Jennifer's slave for just about four years now. I told you at dinner our relationship was complicated."

Jennifer returns too quickly, surprising me. This can't be good.

"Welcome back, Mistress, Ed had a concern about how real the situation was, I decided to show him what kind of commitment we expect."

"I see, Edward, have you decided?"

"How exactly does this work? Am I your slave, or Amanda's, or what?"

"Actually, Edward, you'll serve our Mistress first and foremost, then myself, and then Amanda in that order."

I'm just as shocked as Ed is at this point, did Jennifer just say what I think she said?

"Wait, you are a slave too? I'm confused. May I have another cigarette please?"

We laugh, and I pass out cigarettes.

"Remember when I told you, you'll beg to serve Susan?"

"Yeah?"

"That wasn't a joke. We require a new slave to cook and act as Majordomo for our house"

 Mistress enslaved Jennifer eight years ago, and Jennifer became her personal assistant. When her business expanded she and Jennifer decided to add another slave to take over running the household. They seduced and enslaved me over a weekend, That was four years ago."

"I was originally supposed to act as Majordomo, and run the house, while Mistress and Jen concentrated on building the business, but I kinda upset the apple cart by designing a kick ass website.  Mistress Madison is too smart to waste talent, so here we are today."

"Mistress Susan and Mistress Jennifer felt it was time for me to experience domination, and I chose you as my first slave."

"Why did you choose me?"

"Because you can cook, and have none of the career goals of your classmates, plus I think you're cute!"

Jennifer adds, "Well that about covers the basics, have you made a decision?"

Yes Miss Jennifer, I have." He drops to his knees, and says, "Ladies, I agree to become your slave."

"Last chance to say no, right now. You understand your position, and accept Mistress Susan as your Master, without having met her?"

"I do."

"You accept Jennifer AND Amanda as your Mistress's and swear to follow every command without hesitation, barring fear for your life?"

"I do."

"You swear to abide by the rules of Mistress Madison, despite not reading your contract?"

"Is there any way I can refrain from answering until I read it?"

"Yeah, we'll allow that, as long as you promise to obey every command until we fly to Vegas tomorrow afternoon."

"We?"

"Yes, Mistress wants to meet you, and IF she approves of you she'll offer you a contract. We'll fly you back on Monday to settle your affairs, and make preparations to relocate you to Vegas. Remember, Mistress Madison has final say, if she doesn't approve of you, you will be dismissed."

"Is that acceptable?"

"Yes, that sounds more than fair."

"So you accept the terms I've just offered?"

"I do."

"I do what?"

"I do Miss Jennifer."

"You will call us Mistress from this moment foreword. Now go have a shower, and make sure you shave very well. We have plans for you tonight."

"Yes Mistress Jennifer, thank you so much."

He kisses her boot and Jennifer says, "It's Mistress Amanda you need to thank, you are her choice, slave."

"Thank you Mistress Amanda, I swear to obey your every command."

A thrill shoots down my spine and my nipples harden when he calls me Mistress Amanda for the first time...





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RE: Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The... - 11/15/2010 6:25:06 AM   
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RE: Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The... - 11/15/2010 8:32:27 AM   
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Thank you very much:)

May I ask if you Google any of the outfit's I've selected? I'd love an opinion on the clothes and make up for the girls.

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RE: Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The... - 11/15/2010 9:38:39 AM   
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No I didn't. I did google the makeup link that provided in a previous chapter & they were VERY attractive!

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RE: Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The... - 11/16/2010 7:58:12 AM   
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<<<Reading Chap 3 again PATIENTLY waiting for Chap. 4's debut!

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RE: Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The... - 11/16/2010 11:45:45 AM   
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Should be Thursday, we got busy at work last night, and the Dragonlady had me hoppin.

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RE: Amanda's Journey Into Domination Part 3 Jumping The... - 11/16/2010 12:08:59 PM   
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"Thurs"????? That's 2 whole days away!

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