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Rivven -> It Can Not Be (1/8/2011 11:36:38 AM)

"It can not be?"
Collared kneeling at his feet
she whispered again
lifting pained eyes to Him
"It can not be?"
"No - it can not be"


“Master, please
How have I displeased?
What have I done
For you to say to me
It can not be"
”you've done naught, My one"

"my service has slipped
It can be better done
And I swear it will be beyond
What you ask of me"
"I have never been better served"

"Have I shamed you
before your peers?
A folly, a mishap?"
eyes misted "punish me, please"
"Don't say it can not be"
"My pride in you is the only sin"

"the pleasures"
eyes prismed behind her held tears
"my darkness and hunger are great
Is there more that we need?"
"No fallen angel have pleasured more"

His hand to her
He raises her to her feet
There is much a Dom needs consider
Now, your collar, please
For no, it can not be"

"my collar
you will not have"
"Though I know I must leave
No reason have you shared
To prove it can not be"

she leaves collared,
With pride, grace and beauty
To her home, to her friends to her family
He watches until she's faded and gone, whispers
”Because I love you
It can not be"




poise -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/9/2011 6:19:08 PM)

[:(]




Rivven -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/10/2011 5:06:25 PM)

Thanks.

Something that happened a bit ago




AquaticSub -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/10/2011 5:08:30 PM)

This is why I only stick with owners who are capable of loving those they own. Nicely written - just not the sort of sentiment I can appreciate or understand.




Rivven -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/10/2011 5:14:10 PM)

It's a two way street and a life shared. Not just the lifestyle
It's all earned and shared.

Even for short term, there is a bit.




MCLady -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/11/2011 5:45:34 AM)

[sm=river.gif]




sula -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/11/2011 6:40:25 PM)

That was heartbreaking, Rivven....

sula




Rivven -> RE: It Can Not Be (1/11/2011 8:20:46 PM)

Not really - a Dom has to consider a lot more than pleasure....and makes choices for His one.
PE is real ~s~

That was then.......and now I'm just looking ~s~




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