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Poem (Torturous Revenge) - 1/21/2011 8:46:19 PM   
Craves2beBroken


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Status: offline 		Torturous Revenge

If I ripped out your evil eyes
Gouging them with my fingernails
Would you cry invisible tears for me?

If I cut out your wicked tongue
Slicing it with my blade
Would you scream silently as your bled?

If I sewed your gaping mouth shut
Stitching together your lying lips
Would you curse me as you bleed to death?

Therefore, as I whisper in your ear, as I smile wickedly
Telling you I will no longer cry invisible tears
Screaming silently into the blackened night
As you bleed me until the final shred of my sanity disappears.

I step back looking at your helpless pathetic body
Bound exquisitely in your favorite torturing chair
Imagining my handiwork yet to become
& the pain your have yet to endure.
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RE: Poem (Torturous Revenge) - 2/8/2011 9:44:54 PM   
seraphandazrael


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Status: offline 		that is a very powerful poem i wish that i had been strong enough to say such words to a former Owner of mine 

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RE: Poem (Torturous Revenge) - 3/3/2011 7:58:14 PM   
srah46


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Status: offline 		Poetry i have always felt showed our deepest feelings, your owner must have been horrible. i do not have the way with words that you do but i feel horror as i read.

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RE: Poem (Torturous Revenge) - 3/3/2011 10:49:33 PM   
misspayne69


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Status: offline 		This reminds me of some of my own writings. Very interesting; thank you for sharing!

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RE: Poem (Torturous Revenge) - 5/31/2011 9:12:17 AM   
MedicalBoy1984


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Status: offline 		Has a good moral to it, i.e karma will-can get you. Very true.

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RE: Poem (Torturous Revenge) - 6/7/2011 5:36:08 AM   
Craves2beBroken


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Status: offline 		Thank you everyone for responding. Hopefully karma will find its way back to him.

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