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Weird, the roughest draft you'll ever see - 3/27/2011 5:31:02 AM   
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I wasn’t all that worried when the Porsche stopped running. It had sputtered a few times before and left me stranded. This time is was only about 200 feet from my house so I decided to hoof it. I hadn’t done much walking lately anyway. I only had two bags, one with fresh bread and vegetables and the other with fresh beer. It was Sunday, and as much as I like Saturday, all is quiet on the day of the Sun. I would be alone, to jam, to surf the net, to do whatever I damn well pleased.

I walked up the front walk to my ranch and a half. It was overpriced but again, I don’t care. It’s a keeper. I opened the door and stuck my key in the lock and turned it to the right, as usual and the door opened. I lugged the bags in, and I felt a strange whiz, a whirl or something of air, like an eddy current or something. I can’t quite describe it.

I threw it all on the dining room table and forgot about it, grabbing a beer and throwing a disk in, and absorbing the sound like a sponge. The heavy metal flared to 119 dB and I bathed in it. I sat there in my chair and enjoyed MY Saturday. Soon, a bug of some type landed on my sofa, it looked like a locust or something. It seemed to crawl a bit and I contemplated just what I would use to kill it. I figured I would not be pleased with the mess it will make on my couch, but I don’t want that thing flying around the house. I can get another couch.

I returned from the closet with a hefty snow shovel, ready to do battle, to vanquish this intruder and save my sacred kingdom from this unwary intruder, When I arrived back in the living room, things had changed. It was glowing ,,,,,, and ,,,,,,, morphing or something. Ready to strike, I stood. At the ready to defend my space, but it was clear this was no ordinary bug. It seemed to take on a form, gradually, like something in a movie, but live. It had an iridescent glow, or something. A type of light I had never seen before.

It was taking on a humanoid form, strangely like liquid filling an oddly shaped bottle. I watch as a face, as well as arms and legs form. This was no ordinary bug – to say the least.

And then it spoke. I couldn’t remember the word if you threatened to drop me in a vat of acid. But then it stood and offered a hand, or a reasonable facsimile. I was somehow compelled to take it, and I did. It’s eyes seemed to form, and come to life right before mine, as if to mimic me in a way, for reason I don’t quite understand. It spoke again.

What are you ? it asked, in a strange voice, not metallic, not like something out of a 1970s rock song, it was totally different. Yet UI didn’t understand, what am I ? This creature, whatever it is must surely know that I am an inhabitant of this planet, so it must mean something else. My gut told me to respond directly and simply, so I said " Bart " . Of course this is short for Bartholomew, but I am known as Bart, and I don’t think this thing is very concerned with what is on my birth certificate.
During the next hour or so it gained a great deal of experience in the English language. It was as expressive as I was curious. It had gleaned a good part of the language by telepathy, but the finer points were not to be had for some reason. We took some time to sort this out. I locked the door.

"We" had a lengthy conversation and then it said I am being sent a message, and right then the phone rang. It was a business call and I put it off, which I rarely do, especially with this client, but since I don’t make a habit of letting people down, he was OK with it. I will get back to him ASAP, but when is that ? Sometimes every minute counts, but this seemed to transcend business matters. This thing flew in through my front door, landed on my couch and now stands there in humanoid form, androgynous and without hair, like a person in a body stocking, leotard or something like that.

As we spoke, I learned that it really didn’t know where it came from or anything, and had no concept of life or death. It was simply here, part of the universe for as long as it could remember. It had been to many planets, life bearing planets. It only seeks to have a race, species, something to which to belong, and had not yet found it. It’s DNA is apparently fluid or something like that, and adapts to a degree we cannot even begin to understand. As we spoke, I would swear it’s shape was taking on a feminine form, slowly but surely.

At the time I had no idea what was really going on. This creature is telepathic, and as I look at it, it sees what I want to see and tries to accommodate. It was reading what I wanted in a companion, and becoming that companion. This is getting strange, I mean this is for real but if I told anyone I would be in a rubber room somewhere and this being would be off somewhere in Andromeda or something by dawn.

I can’t let that happen. I do not care one iota that it is illegal to keep this a secret, this is one of the greatest discoveries ever. And truer words were never spoken, as I would find out, subsequently.

As time went by I started to live with it, or "it". I had business like going to work, I allowed it to stay, it asked. This is when it started getting interesting. You see, this is a telepathic being, so it knows things, things from the deepest crevasses of your inner mind. Your desires. Not necessarily every conscious thought, by no means. But your inner sanctum sanctorum, your id. You.

It told me it could become any being it came across. That it lived by integrating into societies for a long time. That it usually had a stable life until something happened, and then it would leave the planet. Sometimes it would try to help, but added that many beings refuse the help because they are actually the cause of those problems. One exception was a dying planet, and it was inevitable. That was where it came from………


That was where it came from last. It had connected well with that society and had actually helped it along, was an asset. However fate was that planet was to die, and while their scientists scrambled for answers, it was honor bound not to give them. You see, it respects the laws of nature, and when a star implodes, all the people die. It refuses to interfere on moral grounds. I think I can understand that.
It has seen races flop out of their own seas and grow to reach the stars, to colonize entire solar systems, even to rule several solar systems. Somewhat like human history, sometimes the rule is benevolent and beneficial. Sometimes not. In either case it says that all societies die eventually, but nobody knows when.
These things happen and it respects the laws of creation and nature in a way I don’t quite understand, but I am trying.
She

When I got home on Tuesday, I was presented with a sight that you would not believe. The absolutely most beautiful Woman in the world none barred. Deep dark red hair that glows in the sunlight, a face that is ever so slightly witchy, ears that drive Men wild. Breasts the perfect shape and size, and a butt that would make for intergalactic war.

And she knew me. She knew my innermost desires, my mist hidden secrets. And she wanted ME. No other. At least on this planet. If I accept her, she will be at my side until the day I die. The next step.
Joining
 

I never thought I would do anything like this. Not in a million years, but then, she might be older than that, in fact probably is. You might think of a preacher and your God, the license and the divorce lawyer fees, but this is nothing like that.
She got hot. Now I don’t mean temperature wise, more like electrically, but it wasn’t that. It was a form of energy beyond electricity. We held hands. My hand was tingling and she put her arm around me and told me to do the same. The tingling subsided. In the next half hour or so, we "melded".

The way I understand it is that now we act as one. She is now here, and has a life on this planet, needs nothing but an identity. But she wants me. She picks her friends very wisely she says, and has come ut and said just why she picked me. And what do I get ? I found out.



I now have knowledge that makes Einstein look like an infant. Not to cut him down but, this is too much, everything falls into place. I personally know the unified theory and have applied it, but just for testing purposes. You see with these powers come the wisdom not to use them. Or when to use them.

The time is almost never. Until the natural scientists of this planet discover something, they are not ready for it. It’s a natural law. She respects this law above the law or self preservation, but admits that this level of adherence to the Law has never been tested, at least not on her. It came close she said.

One time she was with this race of beings who were very kind, loving types, good "hearted" beings. Yes they actually did have hearts in case you want to know. But you know what I mean. Benevolent beings who never hurt anyone, and helped others when they could.; They were intelligent and knew how to use it. Their world was a near utopia and she wishes that it was still there.

In that case she could’ve saved the whole race by a few different means, one of which was to simply go back in tome, integrate with the society and make a couple of inventions. She would not, and this was a point of consternation, but there was no way I could have been of any help.

This is indeed the total power exchange. I don’t have to ask her if I can do something, I already know. She doesn’t have to ask me either, it is just there. We alreadt know. "We" have used power to get a bit better lot in life, but not by chicanery or anything. We are comfortable, well set and happy together.
And sex
 

Sex is indescribable. She is now in human form, and I must say = makes the best of it. The experiences that I give her are part of who she, or it, is. Part of "her" life, that’s all. It seems so simple now, after all this tribulation. I can move mountains now, literally, but I would rather be with her. The mountains really don’t bother me where they are now, so why move them ?

I didn’t put them there, and I didn’t put her here. Fate did. Nothing can really change that. Our minds are permanently linked in a way, and our bodies are but tools, tools for pleasure and interaction with others.

She tells me she has no idea how many of her (or it’s) kind there are, she has never met another of her kind. In compare to me she is immortal, and has seen a lot more time pass than any of us. Her wisdom pervades me, The one law above all is that you don’t interfere with the natural order of things.

To clarify, I am human, borne of this Earth. If a meteor were to come and destroy this planet, I have the power to stop it. But I am morally prohibited from doing so because if the people of this planet cannot save themselves, it is their destiny to perish.

However no Earth destroying meteors are predicted in the near future, in fact if there were, she would not have come here. She is a being of utmost diversity, and her history is telling. ‘

The last race she (or it) joined with was a small type of being, somewhat reptilian, and quite small. They averaged about 12 cm. in height. Can you imagine calling something that looks like a gecko your brother ? I can. When we melded I gained that, along with whatever I can now do. I have not really explored that aspect of this because I simply do not have to. I have no reason to in the world, or beyond.
Now get this, melding is no joke, for her either.
Kink
 

This is most amazing. I tied her up and she couldn’t get out. Get this straight, this is a being that can travel through space as a grain of sand and become just about anything. The speed of light means nothing to her, and neither does time. She has no concept of death except for by her association with normal corporeal beings. ( folks like us ? )

I figured I would tie her up. She liked it in a way, I could just tell somehow. This meld, as I may have mentioned works both ways. If I don’t want her to be able to get out she can’t. It’s a mind thing. Anyone else, she has superhuman strength and could even shrink her hands to get out of cuffs for example, but not if I want her in them.

The inability to escape is not physical, it is mental. The power exchange is awesome. There is nothing like it on this planet, at least to our knowledge. "Our".There is no more she or me in a way.

Sure, the melding has done me well, almost all my troubles are over. But there is a cost. I can feel her grief from over the ages. Time after time she melds, which in a way id her way of mating. And every time she is a widow or a widower. Happens every time.

How would you like to outlive fifty spouses, literally till death do you part ? She can’t save her mates because tht would go against the natural law. That means that one day she will also, watch me die.

And then she will move on. Next time perhaps as a he, or who knows. It could be a hundred thousand years before she find her next. The lonliness in between is not something that I can help her with.





Is this going anywhere or sm I just deranged, oh wait, I'm INSANE now. But is it that or is it this ? Or, fuck I don't know.\

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