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If your depressed DONT read this - 10/18/2004 1:15:26 PM

Master Andi

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Once there was a way to love all
but now I find that I always fall
deeper and deeper, away from life
and all I ask is to have a knife
to thrust in to my stone cold heart
so my life, will at last depart.
for what I found so real and true
is nothing now without you
a reason to be and my life so clear
all seems now to disappear
the collar, the whip, gathering dust
oh how long till I adjust
alone for what seems to be
nothing less than eternity
with no-one, nothing and less to see
please take my life and let me be.

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RE: If your depressed DONT read this - 10/18/2004 7:28:28 PM

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That shows a lot of feeling, hope it's not based on your own experience.

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RE: If your depressed DONT read this - 10/19/2004 5:37:12 AM

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That is extremely well done; thank you for sharing. But, you know when you tell someone NOT to read something they are going to anyway

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RE: If your depressed DONT read this - 10/20/2004 2:49:45 AM

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Enjoyed this and has felt this as well...thank you for sharing.

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RE: If your depressed DONT read this - 10/20/2004 6:18:31 PM

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Faith has alot to do with How we Feel!
No Faith no Feelings. I wrote a poem about ending my life, but Faith stepped in~
I Do Feel for this poem though~~

Sincerely, eyesofAslave

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RE: If your depressed DONT read this - 10/26/2004 4:06:10 AM

bldsexsugarmagic

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Thank you for sharing what must be emotional hell. Hopefully the knife is a metaphor for maybe new beginnings; like just about everyone I've had my heart sliced open and ripped to pieces but there always has been some reason not to answer the pain with suicide. It really offers no solution, is the chickenshit way out and just manages to piss the people who care about you off. Time is your ally and the brutal, infected, affected, rancid, emotionally jagged, dirty filthy scars will fade and at some point you will only remember the pain but be unable to feel it. Either way, in your own time, you will either gain strength from what the pain taught you or replace it with the pain of lonliness and self pity in which case you were never worthy to have what you had in the first place/.

Good luck, BSSM

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