,Sir, i. gave to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my soul,

Join Our Community

Collarchat.com

Home Login Search

,Sir, i. gave to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my soul,

View related threads: (in this forum | in all forums)

Logged in as: Guest

All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Creative Writings >> ,Sir, i. gave to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my soul,

Page: [1]

Message

<< Older Topic Newer Topic >>

,Sir, i. gave to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my soul, - 10/27/2004 12:55:27 AM

Devra

Posts: 42
Status: offline

Sir, i. gave to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my soul,
i love you, my Sir, my trainer, and cherish
every part you take from me,
for i gave it to You gladly,
willingly...

Sir , i gave You my body,
I gave You my body to love ~ to take ~
to tease and to use ~ to teach and to punish ~ to watch and to touch
Sir i gave You mybody, Yours to keep as your own.. for now.
treasure it, shape it ~
make it the perfect body...for You...

Sir , i gave You my mind
i gave You my mind, so that You may
help me to learn and to grow to be a good submissive, to teach me Sir...
I gave You my mind Sir, it is yours to tease and to coax...
to listen to and to fill ~ to claim and to use
i gave You my mind to fill with Your thoughts and Your dreams Your hopes and Your needs.

i gave You my mind, it is Yours to keep and train as Your own,
treasure it, shape it
Make it the perfect one...for you.. i need You Sir no regrets, but that i am not perfect and need Your as my trainer and more..

This new submissive gave to You my soul, my very existence
for without You i feel i am nothing,
Without You Sir, I cannot submit myself, therefore,
my soul should be lost...without You to teach me.

Sir, i gave You
my soul for you to keep as your own, if You wanted it.
treasure it ~ shape it ~
make it the perfect one...for you...to share in your life with your g/f and more.

Sir, i gave You this not perfect submissive
i could not give another gift to you that could
Show You my feelings that to say please guide and teach me ... i need You.

Sir, this new submissive submit myself to You Sir,

So fully ... so completely...
and so here, begins my submission and a new life,
Take me Sir and i beg for You to teach me, for I am now Yurs for now only...
Till that time comes when i can begin my search for that one Dom for me.
And from here on i see You as my friend... my Protector Dom,

I thank You Sir.

*to my friend whom changed my life for the better and forever... i love you Sir, good wishes to You and Yours and much happiness in the future*

< Message edited by Devra -- 11/1/2004 7:45:31 PM >

_____________________________

"isn't this universe of Ours Unique"

Profile

Post #: 1

RE: ,Sir, i. give to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my ... - 10/27/2004 4:50:11 AM

theroebabe

Posts: 3155
Joined: 7/25/2004
Status: offline

Thanks Devra for sharing it is beautiful.

_____________________________

Roe

People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

(in reply to Devra)

Profile

Post #: 2

RE: ,Sir, i. give to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my ... - 10/27/2004 2:20:38 PM

blushes4u

Posts: 278
Joined: 10/20/2004
Status: offline

Oh my to have someone to give all to....i loved your words thank you for sharing.

(in reply to Devra)

Profile

Post #: 3

RE: ,Sir, i. gave to you ~ my body ~ my mind ~ and my ... - 10/30/2004 2:00:05 AM

Devra

Posts: 42
Status: offline

This poem is for that one special friend of over 1.5 yrs whom i knew in real life who always was there to listen to me over the years both on and off line. Sir Jeff was the one who showed me i am a submissive, long ago. :) and He was right. He too protected me and gave me strength and more.

He trained me (and traveled far to do so) to what He thought i needed. There were some hard limits and some soft however, now comes that time i say good-bye to the one who taught me.

i now know that the rest of my training must come from that one Dom i someday may need in my life. Yet, i am in no rush, i have much time and have learnt from my past mistakes. i will never forget what HE showed and taught me, i have a special type of love for this Dom that perhaps no one will understand but what was/is between us.

i will not say good-bye to my friend but do to my trainer and pray that He finds that one sub that He needs to forfill all His needs and accept Him fully for whom He truly is.

i will love Him in my own way forever... yet this sub too knows she can not say His name when she finds a Dom who sees in Her what He needs.

With much respect and Love Sir,
devra

< Message edited by Devra -- 11/1/2004 8:04:53 PM >

_____________________________

"isn't this universe of Ours Unique"

(in reply to blushes4u)

Profile

Post #: 4