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Request: Military Dom story - 4/3/2012 5:57:01 PM   
david817


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Status: offline 		I'm not sure where to put this but I was wanting to know if anyone would be interested in writing a story for me. It would be a military POV with rape, mind-break, and then submission. Also if this doesn't go here please move it. Thanks.
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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/15/2012 4:09:19 PM   
alysinwonder


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Status: offline 		Do you have genders and roles in mind?

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/16/2012 7:08:21 PM   
Armycouple9820


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Status: offline 		Yes. A male E-6/Staff Sergeant and a female E-3/Private First Class. It will start with the male raping her and then she begins to accept it.

Edit: This is the OP. I just forgot and stayed logged on with my couple account instead of just my account.

< Message edited by Armycouple9820 -- 4/16/2012 7:31:47 PM >

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/16/2012 7:32:32 PM   
alysinwonder


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Status: offline 		I'll have to look up how the army works in the States to be somewhat accurate, but I'll see if I can do something for you. in the meantime, I have a few more questions:

Do you have a point of view in mind? His POV, her POV, third person?
Would he be her direct superior?
Would she have had any previous interest in him previously, as anything other than as a superior?
Any particular level of violence or bondage, or lack thereof, in mind?

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/16/2012 7:41:17 PM   
david817


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Status: offline 		(God I hate having more than one account lol.) He is her direct supervisor. And it would be from his. And she had no thoughts on him at all. Slapping and some punching/kicking is fine. No blood though. Bondage is good. Like strapping her down and such. The basic is he kidnaps here when they have a block of 30 leave so no one will realize that she is gone. And from there he uses and abuses her till he breaks her and she willing accepts her new way of life. It can stop after the 30 days is over or you can have her move in with him after and keep it going i guess.

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/16/2012 7:43:50 PM   
david817


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Status: offline 		Also if multiple people want to work on it I would welcome that. Because different people may play it out differently.

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/17/2012 12:37:48 AM   
alysinwonder


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Status: offline 		Alright, I'll see what I can do. I can't promise I'll be quick, though.

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 4/17/2012 4:16:39 PM   
david817


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Status: offline 		Sounds good. I'm not worried about speed I'm more worried about quality. If you have any questions just post them here or message me personally.

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 5/20/2012 10:24:07 AM   
UniversalSwitchG


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Status: offline 		What is the purpose of your piece???

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 5/20/2012 3:58:15 PM   
david817


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Status: offline 		Merely personal enjoyment and satisfy a fantasy. And unfortunately it seems the person who said they would write it for me has not replied to any messages I sent so I guess they are inactive. So I must ask for someone else to write it for me.

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 5/26/2012 2:04:46 PM   
MrBlue76


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Status: offline 		Why don't you try writing it yourself? The story is in your head...

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I'm not a native english speaker. So, if I'm writing very stupid things, the reason behind it can be:
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2.- That, simply, I'm writing very stupid things
Give me the benefit of doubt!

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RE: Request: Military Dom story - 5/29/2012 7:57:40 PM   
david817


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Status: offline 		I have tried that once. But unfortunately it ended up kinda bland and hard to read as I'm not the best story writer.

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