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mouseyone -> Venting (10/27/2004 6:18:03 PM)

From the moment we met I thought life was finally being fair.
You were all I imagined you to be, hoped you to be.
We shared the same interests, at least so I thought
I thought submitting to you was the only thing that could make me happy.

Then demands were made that were not agreed on earlier,
Ok sure, I am your submissive, I do want to make you proud
Giving all that I had, owned, every part of my soul,
Yet I began feeling like I was just another face in the crowd.

You took, and then took some more without blinking an eye
Yet you forgot to take me, the one that was yours from the start
You left me, my body and soul craving for your affection
Someone else getting the love, we grew further apart.

Now left alone completely, I contemplate what had occured
The other one now living the life that I wanted, but, I am told
that the heart will eventually heal from the deception
and another will take your place and fill that deceptive void.




theroebabe -> RE: Venting (10/29/2004 3:25:32 AM)

thanks for sharing it was very well written!




kajirabutterfly -> RE: Venting (10/29/2004 10:41:04 AM)

How beautifuly written... my sentiments exactly.... *hugs* and Thank you for sharing....

*butterfly kisses*

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mouseyone -> RE: Venting (10/29/2004 5:41:09 PM)

Thank you for your kind remarks :)




Devra -> RE: Venting (10/31/2004 5:59:19 AM)

such a beautiful poem, so expressional and from the heart.. i wish you well.
devra




BluesMate -> RE: Venting (10/31/2004 2:39:35 PM)

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