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Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/3/2012 3:53:05 PM   
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When some English parents discover their, privately educated, 16 year son, has been experimenting with homosexuality they hope to “cure him” by sending him to Saint Ashley’s –a former girls school which (that coming term) would open its doors to boys, for the very first time in its 200 year history. Jack has a good time there, until his abduction by one of the richer girls parents. Little could Jack’s parents (or indeed anyone else) imagine what thing, would ultimately become of their son…

Note: This first chapter contains no bdsm activities as such, only extreme humiliation, character development, and a totally plausible, yet extremely cruel, story. Stay tuned for insanely, non-consensual kink, in other chapters.
Dudes: This story is fiction, and despite attending an all-boys school, I am not personally gay!

Part 1: How it Happened: Homophobia Alive & Well at School…
Jack had fancied William for a long time. Jack was short at 5 foot 2, blond, and generally very sweet looking. William was 17, a ruby player, powerful, bearded, and 6 foot tall there was quite a contrast between them. It was William who had started the staring first, and at breakfast he had recently eaten a sausage rather provocatively. But it was so difficult, to be sure if he actually felt the same way. You see at an all-boys school like Milford Abbey there are several worse things you can be…
A grass = Nobody is friends with you.
A thief = Everybody hates you, and blames you forever onwards.
And a homosexual = There are no words to describe how bad.

Homosexuality was like expulsion, but far more agonising –rather like death but in slow motion. The last boy who had been discovered to be gay (Tom) had endured a whole two terms bullying, until during the Summer holidays he tried to kill himself.
But his caring parents quickly withdrew him from the school, and that was the last anyone heard of him. To be honest Jack (in an effort to hide his own insecurity) had taken part in the intense bullying –he still privately felt guilty about drawing a man’s ass & penis, photocopying them, and sending them through Tom’s door almost daily. But this was the price of survival –far better to take part in bullying, than to be suspected of being gay yourself (something others had previously teased Jack about).

June 6th 2012.
It was 1 am, and Jack was in Williams’s room (being a year older, William wasn’t in a dormitory but actually enjoyed a whole room to himself). They had come clean about each other’s desires a week earlier; so that night they had: Jammed the door with a chair, dimmed the light desk night with some boxer shorts (to prevent light escaping through the windows and thereby arousing detection) and drunk a few beers as they worked on the intriguing subject of “what would you most like to do?” After much erotic conversation, they settled on the idea of an oily massage –something Jack had long fantasied, about receiving from the hunky guy of William.
They had been doing this about half an hour, and Jack was enjoying playing with William’s (now also oily) willy. He kissed it, and William made a sigh…

From the corridor immediately outside William’s room there were footsteps. Probably nothing –some guy going to the toilet, perhaps.
Then without warning, there was a very loud thud on the door, followed one second later by another determined push.

“Come on open this door!!!” Oh shit, it was the sound of William’s house master –Mr Edward’s!!
The chair was moving, and Jack leapt for it -to keep it there, but alas he was several seconds too late. Two seconds later, a shadowy hand emerged from behind the door, and switched the lights on.

There before Jack and William was Mr and Mrs Edward’s! Husband & wife, deeply religious, and very, very strict. And before them were two completely naked students, with the oil on Jack’s blond, body glistening in the light, it was self-evident they had been engaging in deeply “unnatural acts”. But there were still several seconds of silence, as (despite working at the school for over ten tears) neither Mr or Mrs Edwards had ever actually, caught two boys in the act. Other housemasters & mistresses had of course, but the Edward’s had only heard them recounting experiences, in the Staff Room.

Mr Edwards broke the silence…
“Well it’s clear what’s been going on here then”.
Then shouting so incredibly loudly, that anybody sleeping in their room, on this corridor; or indeed on the one below, or above, would quickly be awakened by it; he said…

Good news! No lesson’s for either of you two FAGGOTS tomorrow!” Why have you done this William? I thought you called yourself a CHRISTIAN? How long have you been privately worshipping the wills of Satin?

William: “I haven’t been, and this is not unnatural to us. There’s nothing the Bible says about it, because we love each other naturally, and once more, with all our hearts.”

Mr Edwards (shocked by the clarity, and defiance, of such a “subversive” religious argument) stepped forward, delivering a furious face so close to William’s, that William wondered if he was about to receive a blow from all Edwards might.
Truth is: Edwards wanted to, yet maintained enough self-discipline, to realise it would be the end of his job, if he did. That and it was pretty obvious who would win such a (physical) fight!

Mr Edwards: “You filthy, disgusting piece of shit!!! That’s all I have to say to you for now.” “Jack go and take a Cold shower, to get THIS DISGUSTING OIL OFF YOUR BODY!!!”

Jack: “Yes Sir”
But William (feeling bravely protective) replied: “But Sir: Schools rules say you can no longer punish students, with cold showers, anymore”.
Mr Edwards: “Go And Take A COLD SHOWER, Or I’ll Be Giving You So Much Work, You Won’t be FUCKING EACH OTHER till after Next Fucking Christmas!!!”

Mrs Edwards: “That’s if God doesn’t punish you first, by giving you two Aids.”
Mr Edwards: “Quite right”.

Jack left the room, only to see there were several of his “friends” with doors open wide enough, to hear everything. Someone –sounding rather like the Head of House, shouted “faggot!”. Tears filled Jack’s sweet little face. True enough, he was finished. Time to find a new school. He wondered what the local school, his parents had always threatened him with, would be like?

Next Morning…
Jack woke early to start his punishment: Cleaning. Mr Edwards had said there was no punishment more appropriate for a woman (or indeed faggot) to do.
Breakfast had been even worse. It started of ok, with Jack eating late with several friends as usual. Then someone called Henry, came down, and broke the rumour. Everybody immediately left Jack’s table.
Minutes later (just before Jack stopped eating breakfast) an open yogurt pot was tossed into the air. Landing on Jack’s trousers, Henry cruelly taunted, “Oh dear: It looks like you’ve been masturbating about us Jack” –much to everyone’s laughter -and far crueller comments.

Milford Abbey only had assemblies on Monday’s. On every other day, they had Chapel. So with it being a Wednesday (and given the previous night’s, events) it was shocking, yet unsurprising Jack & William were instructed to sit isolated on 2 chairs, several meters either side of Chaplin’s stand (chairs directly facing the rest of the school).
The Chaplin naturally lectured, about how the Bible says “though shall not do what is unnatural with another man” whilst numerous crude, gestures from virtually every student flickered from the pews opposite Jack & William. A verbal silence had been maintained, purely as the product of strict school regulations.

Although homosexuality was very much the theme for the next 15 minutes, nothing was said about Jack & William directly. The school staff had in their religious righteousness, correctly calculated it was even crueller to allow the schools rumours to develop, a life, of their own.

The next appointment was to see the Head Master (Mr Green). Jack waited outside as the headmaster shouted his head of, at William, even reducing him to tears at one point whilst he explained: “I would dearly like to expel you, but regulations long since passed by the school governors, prevent me from doing so. Nevertheless I personally promise to act against that pervasive liberalism (so common in today’s media) by making your remaining days here, hell. You may as well do something else that will get expelled. Try heroine or something. I don’t care. Or else I will find something else, to accuse you of”.
With that William was ejected from the room.

Seeing Jack immediately outside, he said: “I’m going to break all that fucking Head Prick’s windows!”
Jack: “No don’t! He will use the police, and then it will affect you getting into a new school.”
William: “My local state school will apparently take anybody!”
Jack: “What about your job?”
William: “My parents own all of State Corporation, they have the contacts & vacancies to land me work –whenever I might feel like it.”
Jack: “Don’t they care about last night?”
William: “Well I spoke to my mother this morning. She actually seems quite cool with it. My father… well that’s another story, although he apparently had bi experiences when he was at school. Besides you nearly forgot my families Trust Fund”
Jack: “Good point! Break the bastard’s windows then!”
William: “See you in prison, my sexy, little lover!”

Jack smiled until he heard someone in the corridor remark of William: “Oh no! Now there’s the Aids virus in our corridor” –amongst others sniggering.
Fortunately he couldn’t see those making the comments, as despite being 5.4 foot tall, he would have punched them right there & then. Besides he didn’t have to see, he recognised Henry’s voice. He wondered why Henry had done the yogurt, whether Henry was gay?

The headmaster’s door opened…
Mr Green: I hope you two weren’t kissing, whilst I had my back turned just then?
Jack: No of course not.
Mr Green: “Come inside them. You first -I’d much prefer to keep my own back, towards the wall.”

Jack entered and stood by the headmaster’s desk.

Mr Green: “I’m not going to shout at you. Shouting is reserved for those I’d like to remove from this school but can’t -like William. Instead I’ve already had some good news…
I telephoned your parents this morning, and they agreed with me, it was in the interests of your own safety, if you were immediately withdrawn from this school.”

Jack: “When they coming”

Mr Green: “You’re mother should be about half an hour. Your father is too disgusted to collect you apparently. If I were you, I would get packing”

Jack: “Why did you have to do this? Why couldn’t you keep everything private? Why does your school have to be so homophobic, you do know I will probably kill myself, and I will be glad, because the only thing that’s truly disgusting about homosexuality at this all boys school, is how backward this place is.”

A wave of white shock, swept across Mr Green’s face. He couldn’t really give a shit about the welfare of Jack –especially now he was just another former, problem student –so be it a till now well-behaved and academically promising one.
But what did alarm Mr Green was the thought Jack was serious. Mr Green remembered all too well the unwanted media attention the attempted suicide of that other former, homosexual student, Tom had created, and that was just an attempted suicide. If one to has happen it could result in legal litigation, or the very least some difficult questions to The Board of Governors –a few of them homosexual former students, now wealthy, all grown up, and very determined to change his school’s homophobic culture.

Mr Green took a look at Jack’s face, and realised the boy was serious. Lost for words, he decided to answer Jacks Question…

“It’s because one of the biggest insecurities some, but not all parents have, about sending their son to an all-boys school, is that their son might engage in homosexual activity.
Usually this fear is unfounded, but in your case, it evidently was not.
Now whilst most parents aren’t going to blame us about homosexuality, or be too bothered about it, a good 40% of them are, and a few of those are very influential –that cricket Pavilion you see, was for instance, a gift from Henry Richards parents construction company. Then there is the pool roof, admittedly that was funded by a collection of parents, but the people who send their sons to school here are very influential, and few of them are to be crossed.”

Jack: “But you can’t make people, not be gay! There’s lots of it”.

Mr Green: “So far I have stopped people being gay. Maybe a few, or even a many, do engage in frequent homosexuality? In which case the best situation for any headmaster is one of “out of sight, out of mind”. And the best way of going about that is a policy of fear –fear we create by making examples of unfortunate individuals like you”

Jack: “So you personally don’t hate me for being gay then?”

Mr Green: “Hate you? Good Lord no! I just need (in fact must) make an example out of you. Let me tell you a secret, that I will say just once: I might head a Church school, but I am actually an atheist. For me it’s all about career preservation, both for me and the school I head. I am deeply sorry about what happened to you Jack, and I am sorry about the comment I made earlier –I was still heated after talking to William. And I will be gentle towards him the moment I know he’s leaving this school.
I will also try talking some sense to your parents –who should never have sent you to this school.
Now are you going to give me any names?”

Jack: “No way! –Sir.”

Mr Green: “Thought not! Now go and pack your belongings, I’m sending the other House Mistress, Jennifer Robert’s to assist you, as your own, are… how shall we say… not very sympathetic”.

Jack: “Thanks very much Sir”.

And off he went.


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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/4/2012 9:21:07 AM   
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Any comments?
How did the story so far make you feel. Angry that such homophobia exists in the 21st century?
Or more excited & intrigued about what happened, and may happen to this fictional, yet plausible character of Jack?
Any suggestions you don't want to post here, just email me.

The girls school will be far more sexual, kinky, and perverse! Promise. Alex

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/4/2012 10:18:48 AM   
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I found the terminology that you used in some portions offensive.  Particularly the title of your thread to start because that didn't have to do anything with character development and may have been used more for the shock value.

As for the content, you missed the mark with making the scenario plausible.  You'd have been fine had you kept the outright issues with homophobia to the students, rather than the staff.  It might be a cultural thing, but any person from the United States would stop any reasonable belief in the way the story unfolds because we're hearing, "big, fat, flipping lawsuit".  You were completely off of the target going with how conscientious about the right decisions for Mr Greene's career when obviously, there was already enough material specifically handed to the youths to where he would never work in a school again.

You also blew it with both boys being so confident in their sexual preferences.  One might have been believable, both both isn't.  The story implies that it deals with teens just getting to the exploring stage and specifically in a setting where they would be more likely to have doubts than strength.  The fact that each of them immediately find the courage to stand up against the status quo, particularly with staff is exceptionally unlikely.  With the climate that you tried to create, an immediate "openness" for William to call Jack his "sexy little lover" where it could be easily overheard, was not hitting high on the believability scale.

Also, pick a height.  You've got Jack standing at 5'2" in the beginning and had grown to 5'4" by the end.  Coming out doesn't change how tall a person is and you grew him by two inches.

This is just a thought, but you might want to check with a Mod regarding the issue of age in your story.  Where the exact line lies regarding sexual stories on the site where they apply to those under the age of 18 would be a question that I would have.  I understand that you are writing fiction, but it may be violating TOS.


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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/4/2012 1:20:44 PM   
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In the UK the gay age of consent has finally been made equal, with the heterosexual one at 16. So I doubt having fictional characters between 18 and 16 will trouble anyone.
You say the story is implausible, because of lawsuits, and for this reason it could be better suited todays Eastern Europe –or the recent past. However any school, would well be within its rights to instantly expel students for having sex (of any description whatsoever). Both me and my siblings attended schools were anything beyond kissing was an expellable violation, and (public) kissing wasn’t allowed either.

Furthermore: The only thing suable is the bullying, something schools expect to be sued for anyway, and so usually have insurance against. Besides this rarely ever goes to court, not least because it’s hard to prove.

The title was obviously for shock value, and if a word truly offensive to you, just for being a word, then I think that’s feeble.

The reason why Jack & William were so confident was because they had come clean a week before. And when William addressed Jack as his “sexy little lover” it was an act of reassuring, open defiance, that would actually be expected (given they had already been caught –the game was truly up).
Also: I attended an all-boys school were sexual experiments do take place late at night. The fact teachers are around, cannot really be helped, because at any boarding school, staff are always around. There is a rotter were two of them, take it in turns, to do night shifts. They do go to sleep at about 4 am, but you can never be certain –if say others had played up. And besides there’s lessons the next morning (except Sundays). Even so, sexual things, don't necessary wait for Saturday nights (where the staff presence is even higher)!

But thanks for your feedback –especially over the height, I will certainly watch these details, more carefully next time.

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/5/2012 5:47:17 PM   
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Just for conversation's sake, some of it is a cultural difference.  In the USA, members of the staff would never get over on some of the language used.  Please remember that we are a far more litigious society than that of many other regions in the world.  As an example, there was huge coverage in the news regarding a school official who had made a slur against homosexuals on his facebook page.  It meant his job rather quickly.  You, as the writer, do have to understand that. 

Same thing with the boards, which is why I mentioned TOS.  Age of consent may be 16 where you are but they are based where age of consent is 18.

Coming clean to each other is not coming clean to everyone.  This may be a cultural difference as well.  Being open and honest about your sexual desires with your lover isn't the same as having that same ability with friends, family, and authority figures.  You went through all of the trouble to create the climate and then did so little with it.  This causes your antagonists to have little to no effect, thereby not capturing the reader.


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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/5/2012 6:19:09 PM   
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That was waaaaaaay the fuck too long.

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/5/2012 6:21:24 PM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: MedicalBoy1984

Any comments?
How did the story so far make you feel. Angry that such homophobia exists in the 21st century?
Or more excited & intrigued about what happened, and may happen to this fictional, yet plausible character of Jack?
Any suggestions you don't want to post here, just email me.

The girls school will be far more sexual, kinky, and perverse! Promise. Alex


What's your point dude?

You trying to elicit some kind of (specific) response?

(I think you picked the wrong crowd bud....my guess is from this point forward.....flames are coming out...which you'll probably dig so....you accomplished your goal).

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/6/2012 2:43:02 PM   
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My point LookieNoNookie is I wanted to explore how much (today) schools can mess people up over sexuality, in ways they couldn’t over say race or religion. And why an all-boys school really is (or at least was when I was there) one of the worst places for a homosexual.

However (if I still write the second chapter) you’ll discover that although initially an easier place, a former all-girls school, isn’t much better either!

As for accomplishing my goal: If there is one thing I hate more than racism & sexism, its the fascist nature, of modern day, political correctness! With Collar Me apparently being a beacon for the more feeble minded, I must admit it is still an added, unexpected bonus, how words (even in fiction) cause offense to those pioneering PC.

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/7/2012 12:59:20 PM   
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I guess the most interesting thing about this piece is the response it has gained. May I ask, is this based on reality or made up?

Firstly, is the word faggot offensive because it's a derogatory term for homosexuals? Depends on your take of it. If you regard the word as derogatory, then perhaps you regard the word homosexual as derogatory. There are plenty of homophobes who who would consider the use of both words when applied to others as insulting. I would say that what makes something offensive is intent. Sticks and stones may break my bones.... My personal view is that the title, in seeking to use the word Faggot for shock value, panders to prejudice, rather than challenging its basis. I don't take offence to it (my intellect is beyond the "Um, that's wrong" argument): but it's clumsy and not particularly well thought out. As are the writers protestations (like we care if you are gay or not).

I think what messes people up about their sexuality when attending school is the way that any perceived difference gives licence to bullies to pick on those individuals who "don't fit" societies norms. What disappoints me about the governments current policy on education is the fact that faith schools, who will never take a progressive line on this issue, are being encouraged to open. Homophobia will only become entrenched because of this. I don't think that the attitudes expressed by the staff are really that unusual in the UK, sadly enough.

I guess what does unsettle me is medicalboys intended direction. I don't think presenting "non-consensual" BDSM acts really do a great deal to improve peoples attitudes towards those who engage consensually. Such things might make for exciting reading: but create an impression of dominants that is only true of Fred and Rosemary West.

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/8/2012 11:48:04 AM   
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quote:

I would say that what makes something offensive is intent.

Agreed.
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My personal view is that the title, in seeking to use the word Faggot for shock value, panders to prejudice, rather than challenging its basis.

How-why exactly?
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As are the writers protestations (like we care if you are gay or not).
You don't care. But I don’t like disappointing those who often contact me.

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I guess what does unsettle me is medicalboys intended direction. I don't think presenting "non-consensual" BDSM acts really do a great deal to improve peoples attitudes towards those who engage consensually. Such things might make for exciting reading: but create an impression of dominants that is only true of Fred and Rosemary West.

Tens of thousands of vanilla stories are written every year involving murder, abduction and even torture. I’m not saying you’re wrong about certain bdsm stories affecting the public’s perception of dominants. I would however argue that if ones views are that malleable under fiction, there’s little helping their prejudices anyway!

I do agree that one problem with non-consensual stories, is they can feed the ideas & perceptions of the most immoral, or even ill, amongst of us all. They might only be 10% or even 1% of the readership, but they are a very real 10% (or less) nonetheless.
That has caused me not publish certain stuff before. However this coming (former girl’s school) chapter, is hot! I think it’s routed in fiction, together with a good story to justify it –although have yet to make my mind up.

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/9/2012 1:31:48 AM   
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As I asked in my first post. Is the word Faggot Derogatory. That largely depends upon intent. If it's used in the sentence "the worst place for a Faggot", and that sentence is intended to shock. then it's probably being used for its derogatory associations. Simply changing the word Faggot to Homosexual may blunt its impact, but then what becomes shocking is the treatment of the two lads: the content of the story. Funny how a title can "impose" a tone on the rest of the piece: probably why it wasn't better received. Again, I would say the title is clumsy :)

In short, if you look to shock people, don't be surprised if you do and above all, be careful THEY get what you mean.

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RE: Worst Place for a Faggot… - 6/9/2012 7:29:27 AM   
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Interesting statistic for you old chap. It is estimated that 3% of the global population are psychopaths. This means that if the 111 hits represent individual people who have read this thread, 3 or 4 of them will think that there is absolutely nothing wrong with non-consensual domination. On the plus side, psychopaths tend to be asexual. So you'd have to be very unlucky, given the numbers presently involved, if your story actually inspired real life action.

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